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Initially, I thought this could be an excellent novel, akin to "I'm not the demon god's lackey." However, the concept lost its appeal for me when the main character started world-hopping. It disrupted my reading enjoyment as I was just beginning to grasp the details of the initial world. Suddenly shifting to a frozen world felt jarring, and I believe the narrative would have been more engaging by focusing on a single world as readers were forming a mental image of the surroundings. Personally, I find world-hopping less enjoyable to read, but that's just my perspective.
I give this 2/5 because I don’t like how the mc is stupid I get that this novel is about how the mc is weapon shop but there’s no novel out there where the mc know that the weapon he creates is overpowered but the novels that I see like this one is when mc complaints about almost anything anyway other then that the novel is good but not my type.
Love what you did with the White Death, I've only ever seen one other story do this, and I think we both know what story I'm talking about.
Up to chapter 11 so far I see potential it could be great. It all depends on the direction the story takes.
it's not for me because I'm into guns and advanced weapons i would love if he was blacksmith shop owner or mage or something and most importantly if he's stays solo which I'm sure not going to happen because he's already complaining him being a virgin.
Initially, I thought this could be an excellent novel, akin to "I'm not the demon god's lackey." However, the concept lost its appeal for me when the main character started world-hopping. It disrupted my reading enjoyment as I was just beginning to grasp the details of the initial world. Suddenly shifting to a frozen world felt jarring, and I believe the narrative would have been more engaging by focusing on a single world as readers were forming a mental image of the surroundings. Personally, I find world-hopping less enjoyable to read, but that's just my perspective.
I give this 2/5 because I don’t like how the mc is stupid I get that this novel is about how the mc is weapon shop but there’s no novel out there where the mc know that the weapon he creates is overpowered but the novels that I see like this one is when mc complaints about almost anything anyway other then that the novel is good but not my type.
Love what you did with the White Death, I've only ever seen one other story do this, and I think we both know what story I'm talking about.
Up to chapter 11 so far I see potential it could be great. It all depends on the direction the story takes.
it's not for me because I'm into guns and advanced weapons i would love if he was blacksmith shop owner or mage or something and most importantly if he's stays solo which I'm sure not going to happen because he's already complaining him being a virgin.