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The author has created interesting characters and began her story with a novel premise. I had high hopes for this story after reading the first few chapters. Unfortunately, I found the dialogue juvenile and the characters behavior improbable. Add to that the repeated use of incorrect or obscure words ( luring, which means to frown) and the readability of the story declines rapidly. Even within a fantasy, the characters actions need to make sense. A mind reading prince who is suspicious of his bride? Why doesn't he read her mind to verify her honesty? Werewolves who never transform and have no heightened senses? Why not write them as human? Author has talent and imagination and I hope she continues to develop her skill.
I am so happy I found this book! I absolutely am in love with the characters in this story! Keep up the great job author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi guys, Author here! Def gonna give myself a five-star review. This is another of the work I'm bringing forth, and hoping to complete. I hope you enjoy it!
The first few chaps didn't say anything relating to marriage and stuff, but about their past which I believe is a good thing. Rather than getting confused when the plot thickens. Doesn't seem bad at all, others should give it a try.
Great story! I love the background, the descriptive writing, as well as the entertaining and enjoyable plot. This novel really has potential.
Five chaps is a little too short to be leaving this review. But I couldn't help it, the book is great in every single way and it has a long way to go. I love the detailed description, and the characters, they are so brilliantly interwoven, I definitely am recommending this work. I'll be adding to my library and waiting for updates.
Your story is of a professional writer . It's really intriguing. I read chapter in one go .Recommended to people who love romance with twist and turns.still a lot to go . Good luck writer
It's not half bad, since it's just 4 chapters for now am patiently waiting to give a proper review, for now I'll give a mild one, the novels good, like it actually, though I wouldn't mind if the MC was a little bit psychopathic
This novel delves into the complex emotions of its protagonist, Hermione Barclay, who is haunted by a traumatic past. The story beautifully captures her inner struggles, fear of social interaction, and fascination with a mysterious vampire boy from her past. As she faces an unexpected marriage proposal, the narrative takes a darker and more tragic turn, promising suspense and intrigue in the upcoming chapters. It's a compelling tale of resilience and survival against daunting odds.
I took the throne here for being the first to leave a review. I've always added your works to my library because they make quite a good read. This is another amazing story you're starting to bring to light and I see lots of potential. It's amazing how your blood brother could think of doing evil things to your sister because you feel neglected. it's relatable for Alistair to feel that way, but, he still needs to understand Hermione. I look forward to witnessing Hermione grow up and be a normal woman. I'm rooting for you, keep writing author, and don't drop this.
The author has created interesting characters and began her story with a novel premise. I had high hopes for this story after reading the first few chapters. Unfortunately, I found the dialogue juvenile and the characters behavior improbable. Add to that the repeated use of incorrect or obscure words ( luring, which means to frown) and the readability of the story declines rapidly. Even within a fantasy, the characters actions need to make sense. A mind reading prince who is suspicious of his bride? Why doesn't he read her mind to verify her honesty? Werewolves who never transform and have no heightened senses? Why not write them as human? Author has talent and imagination and I hope she continues to develop her skill.
I am so happy I found this book! I absolutely am in love with the characters in this story! Keep up the great job author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi guys, Author here! Def gonna give myself a five-star review. This is another of the work I'm bringing forth, and hoping to complete. I hope you enjoy it!
The first few chaps didn't say anything relating to marriage and stuff, but about their past which I believe is a good thing. Rather than getting confused when the plot thickens. Doesn't seem bad at all, others should give it a try.
Great story! I love the background, the descriptive writing, as well as the entertaining and enjoyable plot. This novel really has potential.
Five chaps is a little too short to be leaving this review. But I couldn't help it, the book is great in every single way and it has a long way to go. I love the detailed description, and the characters, they are so brilliantly interwoven, I definitely am recommending this work. I'll be adding to my library and waiting for updates.
Your story is of a professional writer . It's really intriguing. I read chapter in one go .Recommended to people who love romance with twist and turns.still a lot to go . Good luck writer
It's not half bad, since it's just 4 chapters for now am patiently waiting to give a proper review, for now I'll give a mild one, the novels good, like it actually, though I wouldn't mind if the MC was a little bit psychopathic
This novel delves into the complex emotions of its protagonist, Hermione Barclay, who is haunted by a traumatic past. The story beautifully captures her inner struggles, fear of social interaction, and fascination with a mysterious vampire boy from her past. As she faces an unexpected marriage proposal, the narrative takes a darker and more tragic turn, promising suspense and intrigue in the upcoming chapters. It's a compelling tale of resilience and survival against daunting odds.
I took the throne here for being the first to leave a review. I've always added your works to my library because they make quite a good read. This is another amazing story you're starting to bring to light and I see lots of potential. It's amazing how your blood brother could think of doing evil things to your sister because you feel neglected. it's relatable for Alistair to feel that way, but, he still needs to understand Hermione. I look forward to witnessing Hermione grow up and be a normal woman. I'm rooting for you, keep writing author, and don't drop this.
Please can someone tell me if this book is finished or will be PLEASE