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It is very good. I think I should be able to express simple like or dislike something without an explanation but there is a character requirement. I like how the mc came about instead of the usual reincarnation I find in so many fanfics. It helps keep suspension of disbelief going by not bringing up that he is in a fictional world every other paragraph. I also think it gives mc an interesting perspective and unique motives you can't find in other stories.
A good Novel. The only thing i think a person could complain about this novel, is the update speed. Something I don't care about. Keep up the good work author. I liked the blend of fail safe and the alternate injustice dream Super-man had. The progression of the main character i hope will be interesting.
Story has potential I think. But something I commented as a joke turned out to be accurate. This has been an emo AI story. Seriously, I'm not kidding about it anymore. It's so lonely, why was it born just to suffer, poetic "Darkness. No light. Buried in a hole." comments everywhere... It misses the newborn AI, not quite used to emotions yet mark and it's personality settled right into emo lol Still early days tho, so someone remind me to change the review if he grows out of his "It's not a phase mom!" phase haha.
is there no romance? I need to know cuz it's one of the main reasons i read fanfics
10 de 10 no me interesaba pero le di una oportunidad y mírame soy el éxito Además la trama por ahora está muy buena nada cliché ni forzoso se nota el cariño del autor a la obra
I cant even put into words of how easy this Fic pulls you into its nerative and mainly shows the Thought process of Failsafe in such a way that its akin to Magic how it makes you continue reading
Pretty good ngl. Good build up, emotion the whole lot.......... ... .... .. . . My. Mm mm mm . . . As. .. As. As . . . . . It is . . . . . . Off off . Is it .m . . . . It has come to my attention that I need more than 140 characters to post this
Arte mi hermano te salió muy bien me interesa mucho que seguira aunque tengo curiosidad de ver cómo haces que se comunique con las personas tal vez puedas tomar ideas de terminator
A very nice story for me I truly love it. it's nice see the mc take a very different part than intended. I also like how you made your mc a very good story keep up the good work.
This is one of the most creative DC fanfiction, that I ever seen. An android that acts like a android instead of a normal person in a suit is amazing. The interconflict of the android is sweet as well. Overall a well made story with only 9 chapters but hoping for more
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Truly a masterpiece, this story has really hooked my attention it’s a really great story with a good plot
Hello! The writing for this story is good. The way Batman is portrayed is exceptional and the attention to detail is quite good. Despite all that though I will probably not continue with this novel and that is because of the MC. The MC design is pretty poor and he is extremely irrational despite being basically a machine. He is shaping up to be random DC villain ”C”. Meaning that despite his much vaunted higher level intelligence, he acts like any random villain you pull off the streets of Gotham. He doesn’t stand out from the likes of penguin or mr freeze. Just another stepping stone on the justice leagues path. If that was the authors goal then so be it, but the cringe got really bad with the way the MC thinks and acts. It starts getting cringey around halfway through what is written so far and only gets edgier as the story progresses. Nevertheless, the writing quality is high so I can’t say this novel is bad just not my taste.
Please Update more and since you are writing seriously, don't change the tone of the novel.
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This scoop is one of the most original I have seen, in all the time I have been reading these stories by fans for fans, the story itself of failsafe, is incredible in many factors from the originality of the character to take a batman villain which people not familiar with the comic book world would not know him, from psychological basis forms in a machine which should not have such ideas and feelings and place the desire or goal of killing his own creator which creates his reason for existence and that creates disappointment when it comes to do it for me is really great.
at chapter 15 i am really interested in this book ==============================================================================================================
Your work has been highly praised by the council,as long as you continue this work,we will supply 3 powerstones a day.
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There are a few changes to the story that could enhance it even more, but overall 5/5 stars. The only real gripe I have with it is not having enough chapters to read lol.
Hermoso, fascinante una total maravilla, me encanta estos tipos de historias
The story is on fire! literal fire. 14 chapters in and if this is not dropped, it will go down as a better than original story of batman . . .
I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark
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This LN is more than fanfic. Despite the update taking too long and slow, the story is worth it. Like I said before, this LN is more than fanfic. It was like the new alternative story. Combining the different events into one makes the alternative event of both events is unexpected. Good job and keep it up.
It is very good. I think I should be able to express simple like or dislike something without an explanation but there is a character requirement. I like how the mc came about instead of the usual reincarnation I find in so many fanfics. It helps keep suspension of disbelief going by not bringing up that he is in a fictional world every other paragraph. I also think it gives mc an interesting perspective and unique motives you can't find in other stories.
A good Novel. The only thing i think a person could complain about this novel, is the update speed. Something I don't care about. Keep up the good work author. I liked the blend of fail safe and the alternate injustice dream Super-man had. The progression of the main character i hope will be interesting.
Story has potential I think. But something I commented as a joke turned out to be accurate. This has been an emo AI story. Seriously, I'm not kidding about it anymore. It's so lonely, why was it born just to suffer, poetic "Darkness. No light. Buried in a hole." comments everywhere... It misses the newborn AI, not quite used to emotions yet mark and it's personality settled right into emo lol Still early days tho, so someone remind me to change the review if he grows out of his "It's not a phase mom!" phase haha.
is there no romance? I need to know cuz it's one of the main reasons i read fanfics
10 de 10 no me interesaba pero le di una oportunidad y mírame soy el éxito Además la trama por ahora está muy buena nada cliché ni forzoso se nota el cariño del autor a la obra
I cant even put into words of how easy this Fic pulls you into its nerative and mainly shows the Thought process of Failsafe in such a way that its akin to Magic how it makes you continue reading
Pretty good ngl. Good build up, emotion the whole lot.......... ... .... .. . . My. Mm mm mm . . . As. .. As. As . . . . . It is . . . . . . Off off . Is it .m . . . . It has come to my attention that I need more than 140 characters to post this
Arte mi hermano te salió muy bien me interesa mucho que seguira aunque tengo curiosidad de ver cómo haces que se comunique con las personas tal vez puedas tomar ideas de terminator
A very nice story for me I truly love it. it's nice see the mc take a very different part than intended. I also like how you made your mc a very good story keep up the good work.
This is one of the most creative DC fanfiction, that I ever seen. An android that acts like a android instead of a normal person in a suit is amazing. The interconflict of the android is sweet as well. Overall a well made story with only 9 chapters but hoping for more
Membuka SPOILER Truly a masterpiece, this story has really hooked my attention it’s a really great story with a good plot
Hello! The writing for this story is good. The way Batman is portrayed is exceptional and the attention to detail is quite good. Despite all that though I will probably not continue with this novel and that is because of the MC. The MC design is pretty poor and he is extremely irrational despite being basically a machine. He is shaping up to be random DC villain ”C”. Meaning that despite his much vaunted higher level intelligence, he acts like any random villain you pull off the streets of Gotham. He doesn’t stand out from the likes of penguin or mr freeze. Just another stepping stone on the justice leagues path. If that was the authors goal then so be it, but the cringe got really bad with the way the MC thinks and acts. It starts getting cringey around halfway through what is written so far and only gets edgier as the story progresses. Nevertheless, the writing quality is high so I can’t say this novel is bad just not my taste.
Please Update more and since you are writing seriously, don't change the tone of the novel.
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This scoop is one of the most original I have seen, in all the time I have been reading these stories by fans for fans, the story itself of failsafe, is incredible in many factors from the originality of the character to take a batman villain which people not familiar with the comic book world would not know him, from psychological basis forms in a machine which should not have such ideas and feelings and place the desire or goal of killing his own creator which creates his reason for existence and that creates disappointment when it comes to do it for me is really great.
at chapter 15 i am really interested in this book ==============================================================================================================
Your work has been highly praised by the council,as long as you continue this work,we will supply 3 powerstones a day.
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There are a few changes to the story that could enhance it even more, but overall 5/5 stars. The only real gripe I have with it is not having enough chapters to read lol.
Hermoso, fascinante una total maravilla, me encanta estos tipos de historias
The story is on fire! literal fire. 14 chapters in and if this is not dropped, it will go down as a better than original story of batman . . .
I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark I cannot go back into the dark
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This LN is more than fanfic. Despite the update taking too long and slow, the story is worth it. Like I said before, this LN is more than fanfic. It was like the new alternative story. Combining the different events into one makes the alternative event of both events is unexpected. Good job and keep it up.