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I was confused until I realized this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction. The MTL didn't have a system, I like this version more, and I don't think it's just because it's easier to read, because it totally is. I also noticed some plot points were removed, but I think that's your freedom as a fanfic author and good riddance.
Excellent! Fantastic! A Masterpiece in making. I have fallen in love with the cuteness of kushina and the cast with all the goods and bads(none) i embrace this holy grail. YOU! YES, YOU who is wasting time reading comments, go and take a sip of this heavenly nectar and come back as a true man of culture. I mean it stop scrolling and go read its {chef's kiss}.
Hi! I just read your story, and I’m obsessed! Your writing is incredible, and I kept imagining how cool it would be as a comic. I’m a professional artist, and I’d love to work with you to turn it into one, if you’re into the idea, of course! I think it would look absolutely stunning. Feel free to message me on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall) if you’re interested. Can’t wait to hear from you! Best, Lizzie
Hey imbecil I like how you respond to criticism, I like , I like the quality of the fic............................................................
it a really great story keep it up no matter what anyone says and please don't drop it i truly hope that you can keep up the great work and if needed take breaks but tell us and for all the haters fu*k them all and have a nice day and by the way i stopped ant chp 54 but i just started reading chp 1-54 so im a bit tired
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Muito bom, mas pode melhorar. ................................................................................................................................................................................................
You should keep writing this novel. I don't know much to encourage people but you are one hell of a fine writer so keep dropping. Also don't forget to request me power stone I don't use them I just give out when I feel like it.
Gracias por seguir trabajando y trayendo está historia, es bastante divertido y tiene sus momentos de seriedad, me preguntó será que Mc tendrá que hacer durante cierta parte de la historia un momento de solo crianza a sus hijas?
I don't care what other people say. This is also my first time reading anything from author....(haven't check author's profile yet) But this is an amazing story..Good Job author.
[img=Cries][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Every chapter of this fanfic contains 30% of the author's complaints 40% other's pov 10% mc status update 20% development of the story the only time a chapter focuses on the mc is when he's bonking. it's entertaining especially when u change a butchered chinese fanfic but i recommend u put ur rambling in the end of the chapter, not all pp want it after all.
author, I didn't like the beginning very much, but somewhere in the middle I started to like it, so author, keep up the good work. (this is a translation)
Moar and is it harem? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Would rate higher but the visceral recoil to this authors Atrocious Status measurements I experience every chapter tanks the rating otherwise solid 3.5/5-4/5 but due to horrible choices made 2.5/5-3/5 is where I'll rate it as is
lol the guardian of the galaxy quate was used for the tittle of the fanfic. honestly the fanfic is decent
Hello there, Life_sa_Beach. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I have only one problem with this fanfic, Author keep posting story in middle of his b*tching, just let me enjoy my b#tching without interruption.
Un buen cap. Solo diría que esta metiendo poco avance, este capitulo pudo estar agregado al anterior sin ningún problema y avanzar en la historia.
The only issue I have is the constant defensiveness at the beginning of each chapter (currently chapter 30). I use a text to speech to listen to books while doing other things, reading, writing, playing games, watching shows, etc. So every chapter, having to mess with the text to speech add on I have to skip it is kind of annoying. It's also a bit hard to tell where the story begins and the author note ends. Other than these slights, the fic in phenomenal!
Llevo leyendo esto desde la semana pasada y de forma lenta y calmada, debo decir que es una buena historia y esta tan bien escrita que yo leyendo (y algunas veces por vago uso el traductor) no me he dado cuenta de casi ninguna falta de escritura/ortografía. si eres alguien que pensaba que seria una historia típica china da gracias que no lo es. no soy ni escritor ni tengo ningún certificado de critico experto en literatura, aun asi para mi, le doy 9. bastante buena para echar el rato o leer si te aburres, post para autor, bien echo al no seguir la trama original china, ya me imagino lo horrible que era, si lees esto espero que pases un buen dia/noche un saludo de un amigo hispano.
i love the Story plus the comments are hillarious. great work. please keep it up
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reading 9 chapter, here is brief summary of the novel, it chinese novel the user translated, however it more like director cut version rather than true translation where this person here have significanly changed novel, for the better, because the raw version can cause your blood level to spike(if it doesn't then be ashame at your self) it's good and interesting but its slice of life, which not everyone cup of tea,
I was confused until I realized this is a fanfiction of a fanfiction. The MTL didn't have a system, I like this version more, and I don't think it's just because it's easier to read, because it totally is. I also noticed some plot points were removed, but I think that's your freedom as a fanfic author and good riddance.
Excellent! Fantastic! A Masterpiece in making. I have fallen in love with the cuteness of kushina and the cast with all the goods and bads(none) i embrace this holy grail. YOU! YES, YOU who is wasting time reading comments, go and take a sip of this heavenly nectar and come back as a true man of culture. I mean it stop scrolling and go read its {chef's kiss}.
Hi! I just read your story, and I’m obsessed! Your writing is incredible, and I kept imagining how cool it would be as a comic. I’m a professional artist, and I’d love to work with you to turn it into one, if you’re into the idea, of course! I think it would look absolutely stunning. Feel free to message me on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall) if you’re interested. Can’t wait to hear from you! Best, Lizzie
Hey imbecil I like how you respond to criticism, I like , I like the quality of the fic............................................................
it a really great story keep it up no matter what anyone says and please don't drop it i truly hope that you can keep up the great work and if needed take breaks but tell us and for all the haters fu*k them all and have a nice day and by the way i stopped ant chp 54 but i just started reading chp 1-54 so im a bit tired
Membuka SPOILER Muito bom, mas pode melhorar. ................................................................................................................................................................................................
You should keep writing this novel. I don't know much to encourage people but you are one hell of a fine writer so keep dropping. Also don't forget to request me power stone I don't use them I just give out when I feel like it.
Gracias por seguir trabajando y trayendo está historia, es bastante divertido y tiene sus momentos de seriedad, me preguntó será que Mc tendrá que hacer durante cierta parte de la historia un momento de solo crianza a sus hijas?
I don't care what other people say. This is also my first time reading anything from author....(haven't check author's profile yet) But this is an amazing story..Good Job author.
[img=Cries][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Every chapter of this fanfic contains 30% of the author's complaints 40% other's pov 10% mc status update 20% development of the story the only time a chapter focuses on the mc is when he's bonking. it's entertaining especially when u change a butchered chinese fanfic but i recommend u put ur rambling in the end of the chapter, not all pp want it after all.
author, I didn't like the beginning very much, but somewhere in the middle I started to like it, so author, keep up the good work. (this is a translation)
Moar and is it harem? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Would rate higher but the visceral recoil to this authors Atrocious Status measurements I experience every chapter tanks the rating otherwise solid 3.5/5-4/5 but due to horrible choices made 2.5/5-3/5 is where I'll rate it as is
lol the guardian of the galaxy quate was used for the tittle of the fanfic. honestly the fanfic is decent
Hello there, Life_sa_Beach. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I have only one problem with this fanfic, Author keep posting story in middle of his b*tching, just let me enjoy my b#tching without interruption.
Un buen cap. Solo diría que esta metiendo poco avance, este capitulo pudo estar agregado al anterior sin ningún problema y avanzar en la historia.
The only issue I have is the constant defensiveness at the beginning of each chapter (currently chapter 30). I use a text to speech to listen to books while doing other things, reading, writing, playing games, watching shows, etc. So every chapter, having to mess with the text to speech add on I have to skip it is kind of annoying. It's also a bit hard to tell where the story begins and the author note ends. Other than these slights, the fic in phenomenal!
Llevo leyendo esto desde la semana pasada y de forma lenta y calmada, debo decir que es una buena historia y esta tan bien escrita que yo leyendo (y algunas veces por vago uso el traductor) no me he dado cuenta de casi ninguna falta de escritura/ortografía. si eres alguien que pensaba que seria una historia típica china da gracias que no lo es. no soy ni escritor ni tengo ningún certificado de critico experto en literatura, aun asi para mi, le doy 9. bastante buena para echar el rato o leer si te aburres, post para autor, bien echo al no seguir la trama original china, ya me imagino lo horrible que era, si lees esto espero que pases un buen dia/noche un saludo de un amigo hispano.
i love the Story plus the comments are hillarious. great work. please keep it up
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reading 9 chapter, here is brief summary of the novel, it chinese novel the user translated, however it more like director cut version rather than true translation where this person here have significanly changed novel, for the better, because the raw version can cause your blood level to spike(if it doesn't then be ashame at your self) it's good and interesting but its slice of life, which not everyone cup of tea,