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the story was very fast phased, you should have add some twists in the story the hero become so op with out any struggle the destruction of kunoha was so fast. you become so easily bored if no twist you should play with the emotions of your reader to keep them excited of the things that occur make them guests some possible events. if readers emotions keep changing they won't be bored to finish the story of course don't put to much stressful stories sprinkle some sweetness and comedy.
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I can't complain 😌 it's great reading an evil Naruto that gives what he gets the only complain I have is the harem with ino and Sakura Haye them both.
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It is a Chinese novel just translated is not edited you may get some brain damage after reading it if you have nothing to read you can give it a try there and so many funny references Help Me By reading My Other Novels Like 1. Villain System In Zombie Apocalypse 2. The Art Of Financial Success You Will Love it 😜
the story was very fast phased, you should have add some twists in the story the hero become so op with out any struggle the destruction of kunoha was so fast. you become so easily bored if no twist you should play with the emotions of your reader to keep them excited of the things that occur make them guests some possible events. if readers emotions keep changing they won't be bored to finish the story of course don't put to much stressful stories sprinkle some sweetness and comedy.
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I can't complain 😌 it's great reading an evil Naruto that gives what he gets the only complain I have is the harem with ino and Sakura Haye them both.
Chinese novel reading can cause brain damage. K jen sks ısjs sısj sjs ınnıososo ekdjdn nsjskssjsnsmsmsmsmsmsmseoeososksksksksmsmsmd d d d d d d d d d d d d dd msmssmsm
It is a Chinese novel just translated is not edited you may get some brain damage after reading it if you have nothing to read you can give it a try there and so many funny references Help Me By reading My Other Novels Like 1. Villain System In Zombie Apocalypse 2. The Art Of Financial Success You Will Love it 😜