Unduh Aplikasi

Spoilers maybe?

Might contain spoilers so don't read if u don't want to.

I don't usually get a lot of comments or feedback so I am writing this to ask ur opinion. I wanna add a bit more fantasy/supernatural element to this story, maybe some other characters who have different superpowers, do you guys like this idea? Tell me what you think.

Also give me ideas on how to make the story more interesting, and drop some reviews.

If you want to support me and see me post more. Please donate at p@treon.com/authorfrfun


Load failed, please RETRY

Status Power Mingguan

Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

Membuka kunci kumpulan bab

Daftar Isi

Opsi Tampilan

Latar Belakang

Font

Ukuran

Komentar pada bab

Tulis ulasan Status Membaca: C16
Gagal mengirim. Silakan coba lagi
  • Kualitas penulisan
  • Stabilitas Pembaruan
  • Pengembangan Cerita
  • Desain Karakter
  • Latar Belakang Dunia

Skor total 0.0

Ulasan berhasil diposting! Baca ulasan lebih lanjut
Pilih Power Stone
Rank NO.-- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Batu Daya
Laporkan konten yang tidak pantas
Tip kesalahan

Laporkan penyalahgunaan

Komentar paragraf

Masuk