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Amazing plot so far, nice powers for the main character, giving him a different elemental power that is not really used that much for main characters makes him a lot more interesting.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
👏 Conflict, tragedy, storyline development, character attitudes and traits, pace of the story—everything is written neatly. It's truly inspiring, but there are a few shortcomings, especially in the use of less varied words. Try to learn more vocabulary; I'm sure this novel could be highly appealing to others.
Amazing plot so far, nice powers for the main character, giving him a different elemental power that is not really used that much for main characters makes him a lot more interesting.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
👏 Conflict, tragedy, storyline development, character attitudes and traits, pace of the story—everything is written neatly. It's truly inspiring, but there are a few shortcomings, especially in the use of less varied words. Try to learn more vocabulary; I'm sure this novel could be highly appealing to others.