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A man transmigrated into the world of Kuroko's Basketball with a System.
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Hello readers. It's my first time writing something so expect a lot of mistakes and error as I improve my writing skills along the way.
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Tulis ulasanIt is really good but I needs to have more chapters Iโm not trying to be mean but bro you a little over 100k views that warrants more chapters
I mean less then one full match taking up all these chapters is brutal man it's an ok story but it's so slow
3 star its quite good and compared to that one knb ff were the mc has a god ability and yet still lost to teiko for 3 consecutive years even when the generation of miracles is still weak so that author can follow the canon, this one wasn't and defeated the miracles the only problem with here is flashback, specially at the end this flashbacks just destroys readers immersion,
I have read upto the latest chapter when writing this review I can say that if the author keeps this kind of development this Fanfic is on its way to the top I recommend reading this. Chapters are reasonabley long and the writing is really good for me and a stable update. And I really hope you finish this because most of the knb Fanfic are short lived and yours show a great promise
The story progresses at a very slow pace, which can be good for character development. At the same time, it can be bad if it's unable to ever finish the story. I hope it continues to be great!
Chapter 22. A pretty good start with the template system at the start of the Teiko Finals match. I already guessed a very good story if this continued into the original story in the Anime. But unfortunately my hope was lost after seeing 1 game, I mean... using 3 or 5 chapters is enough. Why use dozens of chapters just for a game?, and what's with that nonsense? MC is suddenly so OP that it feels unnatural, Teiko 5vs1 MC. Bah... if it's a draw I still agree, but he... never mind. I'm quite, disappointed but good job to the author. Hopefully this fanfic will be rewritten or edited in the future. Take my rock... hehe
It is very good compared to other knb fics in this sits. It has 2 main cons 1.Each chapter is very short 2.After the mc and GoM reach the high school, they seem to be looked down upon seniors and the other team coaches. It dosent happen. Even when they were in the first year of high school, everyone was veary terrified of them in the anime so much
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That was some great writing there, I like that even tho he inserted mid game and getting dunked on he still led them to that clutchiest of clutches play, it does 3 things for the reader, 1 it show's that his template system is just that, templates, he has to want to improve assimilation, 2, it moves away from those cliche starts with the waking up in the black void and wishesh stuff, he just gets his bearing mid game, and gets his boon and thats it, no corny dialogue of wishes and "me god, me give second chance." 3, it sets the pace for the upcoming arcs because since by defeating Teiko cannon will be changed, not so much as to change it like 2 miracles in one team, no, I think the miracles will still be on different teams, just that they might not have the same teams they have in the anime, with Taiga still being the wildcard. 4, it shows that ichigo has the drive to take full advantage of his basketball themed assimilation system, giving us a glimpse or a tease of whats coming next, like whose he gonna assimilate? What kind of card? Is it only from animes? Or maybe real life, and cartoons. My only hang up is that I didn't see how he would more points (if there was one) for his next spin to get more cards for assimilation, and yeah no momoi pov too, but overall this is one of the most interesting knb fanfics out there with the "Conqueror" on so keep it up author.
Membuka SPOILERIt's clear the author knows basketball and is passionate about it, and they put in a noticeable effort to make the story enjoyable. Unfortunately, the dialogue between characters is very boring and forced, and character motivations are to be frank subpar and uninteresting. Other than that, the story is well made, and I'm curious to see how the author will make the story interesting/engaging, considering they made the MC beat the largest challenge in any KNB fanfic at the start.
Membuka SPOILERlol 27 chapters in and the mc just crushed the gom the novel ended lol................................................................................................
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I guess chapters didn't even reach 500 words as I can just finish it with a swipe