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Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Very good story. First I have seen of this type. In the first chapters, the author confused the first and third person, but now is much better. _____ Author, maybe for the dialogues you can use broken sentences with just one syllable, to immitate grunts. There is a game like this.
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