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Highly recommend! Halfway through and I'm liking the story a lot. The characterizations are wonderful and it's refreshing to step out of the collective West. The quality of the world building is great and stays in focus, and one can get a great sense of the traditions at play and how they interact with the characters. Quality wise, there are no glaring errors and while a minor misspelling or missing punction will appear it's nothing major.
I really love this novel. The storytelling is compelling, the characters memorable and relatable. In overall, the book is a must-read for all audiences.Keep it up dear author
Safiya's journey from grieving daughter to skilled assassin in her quest for truth and vengeance in Dakar is a captivating and emotionally charged story of resilience and determination.
Always been a fan of great FL characters, and am always regretful thay we don't get too many well written ones, especially this generation. Which is what makes me appreciate novels like these, that have genuine depth to those characters, and are not only fun to follow, but also very inspiring. Keep up the good work fr[img=recommend]
The novel is really good with both an interesting plot and characters. Keep it up author.
I love their familial bond. Sadly, it didn't last long since it's necessary for the plot. It's a very promising story with a good write up and great potential. Keep up the good work, author!
So far the story is interesting ...got me hooked from the first chapters .... I wonder what our FL will become ...perhaps a powerful strong girl ?The writing style is impeccable, very detailed with nice descriptions ! Love it ! Definitely recommend it !
Its not every day you see a strong and determined FL. The author did an amazing job with the plot and character development, I won't lie, I'm hooked already, I'll keep reading and see how this ends.
The writing is very beautiful. I loved how you described the environment and the traditions. It was a lovely read. The story pace was a little slow. The characters are well-groomed. I liked the FL personality. Just pay attention to the verbs' time. Wish you the best.
A nice story!! was hooked instantly, that amazing! it's a great read! Won't say much, this novel is just interesting Keep it up, Author!!
A female lead story packed with action and adventure, I was looking for a story like this for a long time! Keep it up, author, we need more stories like this!
Ah, there's a special charm in female protagonists who possess unwavering determination. It's truly captivating to follow characters who navigate challenges with resilience, adding depth and a relatable strength to the narrative. Their tenacity not only propels the story forward but also resonates with readers, making the journey all the more engaging and inspiring.
Wow I love this book already.Its a masterpiece unfolding before my eyes which is captivating and impressed.Keep the chapters coming and don't stop.
What a strong FL. Safiya is awesome. I love how you have potraid her and the plot setting descriptions are awesome. Congratulations Author for the good work
This book is definitely worth reading i tell ya... 🤗🤗 The first chapter itself was captivating...
Really good storyline. Recommended to people who like revenge stories and assassin stories .
A captivating and strong female character! The father-daughter dynamic in the first chapter was particularly engaging. I can hardly wait for the upcoming chapters to see how the plot will unfold. The beginning of the story, revealing the beautiful relationship between Safiya and her father, was a well-made choice, establishing a solid foundation. I have some speculations about the directions the narrative will take and am eager to see if some of them will come true. Congratulations on the excellent start!
It is a good story. I have read the first few chapters and I found the plot and the background interesting. The characters are also good. Keep it up.
it's a good story that captivate you from the start i hope to see more of it. please i like to know how you got your book cover because i have been trying to do mine .
There is good description and a promising storyline, building up in a way that doesn't seem rushed or simply copied and pasted, as such some others.
Its definitely a well written book. The grammer, the plot and the characters show that you are working on this seriously. Continue writing ![img=update][img=recommend]
HI @zeera_jay this seems like a very promising story! I hope to read more in the future. I also like the cover. Can I ask where you got it from or if you made it?
Hello author! The story begins by revealing the beautiful relationship between Safiya and her father, it was a good start! And I have some deductions about how the story will continue, I hope I'm right on some points. In any case, I believe that Safiya's journey will bring us many more sighs.
A very interesting start, I have to say. But there's only three chapters so far, so I really want to know what happens next. I hope to see more stories from the author.
Got me in tears after the synopsis and then the first chapter... There's only 2 chapters for now so there's nothing much that i can say, but with how the writer writes so far, it'll turn out to be an amazing story for sure. Author just needs to be consistent with the updates and edit the chapter since i saw some mistakes in the first two chap 🫣 Nonetheless, keep up the good work, author!
Wow, a strong female character we are going to see. Liked the father and daughter moment at the first chapter. Waiting for the new chapters, how the story will fold.
Great plot line. This is not my typical genre but the title got me interested. To satisfy my curiosity I started reading never really intending to finish a chapter but alas I got hooked on and finish the available chapters and payoffs for the privilege chapters. Now I understand the saying “Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back “
Highly recommend! Halfway through and I'm liking the story a lot. The characterizations are wonderful and it's refreshing to step out of the collective West. The quality of the world building is great and stays in focus, and one can get a great sense of the traditions at play and how they interact with the characters. Quality wise, there are no glaring errors and while a minor misspelling or missing punction will appear it's nothing major.
I really love this novel. The storytelling is compelling, the characters memorable and relatable. In overall, the book is a must-read for all audiences.Keep it up dear author
Safiya's journey from grieving daughter to skilled assassin in her quest for truth and vengeance in Dakar is a captivating and emotionally charged story of resilience and determination.
Always been a fan of great FL characters, and am always regretful thay we don't get too many well written ones, especially this generation. Which is what makes me appreciate novels like these, that have genuine depth to those characters, and are not only fun to follow, but also very inspiring. Keep up the good work fr[img=recommend]
The novel is really good with both an interesting plot and characters. Keep it up author.
I love their familial bond. Sadly, it didn't last long since it's necessary for the plot. It's a very promising story with a good write up and great potential. Keep up the good work, author!
So far the story is interesting ...got me hooked from the first chapters .... I wonder what our FL will become ...perhaps a powerful strong girl ?The writing style is impeccable, very detailed with nice descriptions ! Love it ! Definitely recommend it !
Its not every day you see a strong and determined FL. The author did an amazing job with the plot and character development, I won't lie, I'm hooked already, I'll keep reading and see how this ends.
The writing is very beautiful. I loved how you described the environment and the traditions. It was a lovely read. The story pace was a little slow. The characters are well-groomed. I liked the FL personality. Just pay attention to the verbs' time. Wish you the best.
A nice story!! was hooked instantly, that amazing! it's a great read! Won't say much, this novel is just interesting Keep it up, Author!!
A female lead story packed with action and adventure, I was looking for a story like this for a long time! Keep it up, author, we need more stories like this!
Ah, there's a special charm in female protagonists who possess unwavering determination. It's truly captivating to follow characters who navigate challenges with resilience, adding depth and a relatable strength to the narrative. Their tenacity not only propels the story forward but also resonates with readers, making the journey all the more engaging and inspiring.
Wow I love this book already.Its a masterpiece unfolding before my eyes which is captivating and impressed.Keep the chapters coming and don't stop.
What a strong FL. Safiya is awesome. I love how you have potraid her and the plot setting descriptions are awesome. Congratulations Author for the good work
This book is definitely worth reading i tell ya... 🤗🤗 The first chapter itself was captivating...
Really good storyline. Recommended to people who like revenge stories and assassin stories .
A captivating and strong female character! The father-daughter dynamic in the first chapter was particularly engaging. I can hardly wait for the upcoming chapters to see how the plot will unfold. The beginning of the story, revealing the beautiful relationship between Safiya and her father, was a well-made choice, establishing a solid foundation. I have some speculations about the directions the narrative will take and am eager to see if some of them will come true. Congratulations on the excellent start!
It is a good story. I have read the first few chapters and I found the plot and the background interesting. The characters are also good. Keep it up.
it's a good story that captivate you from the start i hope to see more of it. please i like to know how you got your book cover because i have been trying to do mine .
There is good description and a promising storyline, building up in a way that doesn't seem rushed or simply copied and pasted, as such some others.
Its definitely a well written book. The grammer, the plot and the characters show that you are working on this seriously. Continue writing ![img=update][img=recommend]
HI @zeera_jay this seems like a very promising story! I hope to read more in the future. I also like the cover. Can I ask where you got it from or if you made it?
Hello author! The story begins by revealing the beautiful relationship between Safiya and her father, it was a good start! And I have some deductions about how the story will continue, I hope I'm right on some points. In any case, I believe that Safiya's journey will bring us many more sighs.
A very interesting start, I have to say. But there's only three chapters so far, so I really want to know what happens next. I hope to see more stories from the author.
Got me in tears after the synopsis and then the first chapter... There's only 2 chapters for now so there's nothing much that i can say, but with how the writer writes so far, it'll turn out to be an amazing story for sure. Author just needs to be consistent with the updates and edit the chapter since i saw some mistakes in the first two chap 🫣 Nonetheless, keep up the good work, author!
Wow, a strong female character we are going to see. Liked the father and daughter moment at the first chapter. Waiting for the new chapters, how the story will fold.
Great plot line. This is not my typical genre but the title got me interested. To satisfy my curiosity I started reading never really intending to finish a chapter but alas I got hooked on and finish the available chapters and payoffs for the privilege chapters. Now I understand the saying “Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back “