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Very good honest review of this: It is a pleasant surprise. To begin with, I didn't read it here, I read it on 69shuba, which is in Chinese, but for some reason, Google's automatic translator did a great job of translating this story, if there were lines, names and phrases that didn't translate well , but overall, it was enjoyable. I would define the plot as "what if the skills in the game The Witcher 3 that apparently make you OP were canon in the story" We all know that The Witcher 3 has an incredible story and game system, but it always seemed a little silly to me that in the gameplay you can wipe out a camp of 50 people, but in the cinematics more than 3 people can easily overwhelm you, this story is basically a character with the strength of the game in the story, the system abilities are the same as in the game, it is literally a system from The witcher 3 in the world of The witcher. It has certain nods to Game of Thrones as you may have already read, since the character's last name is Lannister, but it is not annoying, in general it is a very good read.
It's readable, but it's not the best. The systems are good, and he plans everything he will do. It's good, but I would have given it 3 stars if the translation was better. I never give 5 or 4 stars to a translated novel; I would have given those ratings to the original writer.
Till chapter 27 the MC focused on becoming stronger as fast as he could while staying true to his goals and caring only about himself. But from chapter 27 each saga started to drag on for multiple chapters for no reason, each fight was more than several chapters when it could have ended in one chapter and be done with it. And the MC himself, for some reason decided to give his 3 daughters to some dryads idiotically! I mean come on!! The flow of the story is quite good, but the translation is bad, the quality is such that every chapter there are multiple times the translator confuses the pronouns and addresses a male as a "she" and a female as a "he"... Sometimes even going as far as to address a person as a "it"... It's understandable but not good. However despite the bad translation I have still read till chapter 118 in one go since it was so good of a plot. I've enjoyed reading how the MC progressively got stronger using his system, his character growth, the slow Kingdom Building, and in general the story as a whole. So except for the writing quality which will get only one star, I will give this fanfic of five star in everything else.
if you're hesitant after seeing that this is a tl, don't worry. the story doesn't feel like the unsual chinese stories. maybe partly because of the tl's changes.
Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.
Honestly I really do love this story, by far it’s had me on the edge of my seat with every one of the latest chapters and I can’t stop myself from wanting more. If there was a patr30n for this I’d sign up immediately. Keep up the fantastic work Magic Man. A gift from me to you.
Spoiler........!..................... He had a three child when he was only 15 years old.
this history is very good , continue it , it has potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story. If you like the witcher I suggest you read this. 5-star review from me.😁
El mejor fanfic de the witcher que leido muy buenas historia lastima que vallan pocos capitulos me gusta como vas aumentando de poco a poco la fuerza del mc y como es capaz de aprovecharcel sistema,
I'm just here to ask if the translator/author will change the story after it ended, because i've read this and to be honest i was looking forward for the mc to start another adventure after he basically became the king of cintra but the author rushed the ending where he eliminated all the threats and started another adventure and that's it, the author didn't continue to write the stories where he traveled the multiverse and why that Gaunter O'Dimm helped him and wants him to become a multiversal entity. I hope the translator or someone who see the potential of this FF in Webnovel will continue writing it. I'll rate this a perfect 5 since its actually quite a good witcher SI FF
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Hmmm. Ive read a couple hundred of chs since i found this here in wn, and i just "kinda" finished it so here's my opinion/review on this ff. Great start/ premise and system but it kinda went stale in the end. Not to say it had a horrible end but it lost its identity/ what made it special on the start of the fic. I skipped a few dozen chs in the ending parts and just read the epilogue. There are parts that i felt could've been better but all in all its an average decent fic. Not a masterpiece cause it lost its "style" /flavor towards the end. The book ended like less than a day ago which is quite a surprise.
i have read this novel but the original author said this isn't a harem.so you should remove the harem tag if you're not gonna change it.
This novel has potential.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Whats the original name i wanna find a mtl of this story..................................................................................................
Chinese novel name????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel has potential. Let's see what it will be like in the future. ...........,.....,.....,.,..............,..............,.................,....................,......................,........................,..................,..................,.............
the story is good overall, the writing is pleasant, the protagonist is so-so and the system is quite balanced, MC doesn't have to op in 10 chapters, I just wish he didn't have witcher powers like in 99.9% of the stories. fanfics, there are infinite skill options and it has a system but it still looks for witcher skills, other than that the rest is ok
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09/10 Eu não sei se é a obra que boa demais, ou eu que tenho péssimo gosto, porém eu amei e espero ansiosamente pelo lançamento de cada capítulo. a única parte da obra que não me agradou foi o fato do protagonista ter que passar pela transformação em witcher, enquanto Cintra é destruída. ...meu mano swade morreu injustamente...
Membuka SPOILER Very good honest review of this: It is a pleasant surprise. To begin with, I didn't read it here, I read it on 69shuba, which is in Chinese, but for some reason, Google's automatic translator did a great job of translating this story, if there were lines, names and phrases that didn't translate well , but overall, it was enjoyable. I would define the plot as "what if the skills in the game The Witcher 3 that apparently make you OP were canon in the story" We all know that The Witcher 3 has an incredible story and game system, but it always seemed a little silly to me that in the gameplay you can wipe out a camp of 50 people, but in the cinematics more than 3 people can easily overwhelm you, this story is basically a character with the strength of the game in the story, the system abilities are the same as in the game, it is literally a system from The witcher 3 in the world of The witcher. It has certain nods to Game of Thrones as you may have already read, since the character's last name is Lannister, but it is not annoying, in general it is a very good read.
It's readable, but it's not the best. The systems are good, and he plans everything he will do. It's good, but I would have given it 3 stars if the translation was better. I never give 5 or 4 stars to a translated novel; I would have given those ratings to the original writer.
Till chapter 27 the MC focused on becoming stronger as fast as he could while staying true to his goals and caring only about himself. But from chapter 27 each saga started to drag on for multiple chapters for no reason, each fight was more than several chapters when it could have ended in one chapter and be done with it. And the MC himself, for some reason decided to give his 3 daughters to some dryads idiotically! I mean come on!! The flow of the story is quite good, but the translation is bad, the quality is such that every chapter there are multiple times the translator confuses the pronouns and addresses a male as a "she" and a female as a "he"... Sometimes even going as far as to address a person as a "it"... It's understandable but not good. However despite the bad translation I have still read till chapter 118 in one go since it was so good of a plot. I've enjoyed reading how the MC progressively got stronger using his system, his character growth, the slow Kingdom Building, and in general the story as a whole. So except for the writing quality which will get only one star, I will give this fanfic of five star in everything else.
if you're hesitant after seeing that this is a tl, don't worry. the story doesn't feel like the unsual chinese stories. maybe partly because of the tl's changes.
Translation is good. The story is good, but I can't say whether it's because it borrowed a lot from the original or the author managed to develop many good original parts, I haven't read the original books but from what I know about the games the author borrowed a lot, which is normal since It's a fanfic. I couldn't bear to read here and I went to see an MTL and from what I saw, even with the bad translation of where I read it, it's still good until the end, it's a little slow from the beginning until a little after the middle of the story but it's ok, in the end it's just it gets faster because it seems that the original author lost readers and decided to speed up the end of the novel. There are about 200 to 250 chapters of MC preparing to win the war, which I found dragging, then it's about 150 until the end of it all, this being the war from the first invasion of Cintra until the end in which the MC defeats everyone ("rules the world"), the original author seemed to want to make it longer with the same rhythm as the beginning but when that didn't work he started summarizing things and skipping battles just showing results, the although it was well done. The ending is good, it kind of leaves open but The witcher arc is finished in this novel, it is only shown that the mc can go to other worlds in the end, but Ciri could already do that in the original, it is open only in this part what seems that the author does not intend to continue, but I feel that the novel is over and it ended well, anything else can be put in another novel or something like that. I'm not a fan of many Chinese works as they usually have low quality but this one surprised me a little, but the original material is also good.
Honestly I really do love this story, by far it’s had me on the edge of my seat with every one of the latest chapters and I can’t stop myself from wanting more. If there was a patr30n for this I’d sign up immediately. Keep up the fantastic work Magic Man. A gift from me to you.
Spoiler........!..................... He had a three child when he was only 15 years old.
this history is very good , continue it , it has potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story. If you like the witcher I suggest you read this. 5-star review from me.😁
El mejor fanfic de the witcher que leido muy buenas historia lastima que vallan pocos capitulos me gusta como vas aumentando de poco a poco la fuerza del mc y como es capaz de aprovecharcel sistema,
I'm just here to ask if the translator/author will change the story after it ended, because i've read this and to be honest i was looking forward for the mc to start another adventure after he basically became the king of cintra but the author rushed the ending where he eliminated all the threats and started another adventure and that's it, the author didn't continue to write the stories where he traveled the multiverse and why that Gaunter O'Dimm helped him and wants him to become a multiversal entity. I hope the translator or someone who see the potential of this FF in Webnovel will continue writing it. I'll rate this a perfect 5 since its actually quite a good witcher SI FF
Membuka SPOILER Hmmm. Ive read a couple hundred of chs since i found this here in wn, and i just "kinda" finished it so here's my opinion/review on this ff. Great start/ premise and system but it kinda went stale in the end. Not to say it had a horrible end but it lost its identity/ what made it special on the start of the fic. I skipped a few dozen chs in the ending parts and just read the epilogue. There are parts that i felt could've been better but all in all its an average decent fic. Not a masterpiece cause it lost its "style" /flavor towards the end. The book ended like less than a day ago which is quite a surprise.
i have read this novel but the original author said this isn't a harem.so you should remove the harem tag if you're not gonna change it.
This novel has potential.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Whats the original name i wanna find a mtl of this story..................................................................................................
Chinese novel name????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel has potential. Let's see what it will be like in the future. ...........,.....,.....,.,..............,..............,.................,....................,......................,........................,..................,..................,.............
the story is good overall, the writing is pleasant, the protagonist is so-so and the system is quite balanced, MC doesn't have to op in 10 chapters, I just wish he didn't have witcher powers like in 99.9% of the stories. fanfics, there are infinite skill options and it has a system but it still looks for witcher skills, other than that the rest is ok
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09/10 Eu não sei se é a obra que boa demais, ou eu que tenho péssimo gosto, porém eu amei e espero ansiosamente pelo lançamento de cada capítulo. a única parte da obra que não me agradou foi o fato do protagonista ter que passar pela transformação em witcher, enquanto Cintra é destruída. ...meu mano swade morreu injustamente...
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