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This is my second review after writing about 237 chapters. The story is slow paced nevertheless I liked what I wrote so I am gonna give myself a five star. Also if you have any questions ask me here I will do my best to reply as soon as possible.
Read up to ch32 and have to say its very good for me who likes isekai trope with system panel and skills. Its not iskeai but it is very similar since mc and his step-sister are in other world that is merged with earth. Also this story seems to be focusing on romance and action at both times so quite liked this. Hence a 5 star review from me.
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Synopsis look terrible , written by a 10years old kid. .....................................................................................................................................
“Well, there are no slaves here, but there is a servant system. Let's go. We should first eat and then head there later," he suggested, heading back to the inn first.” The MC is okay with slaves? Major L.
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This is an amazing webnovel with plenty of RPG elements, action, and a great plot. It appears to have a slow pace, but is interesting enough to have me hooked onto it. Recommended.
A very good story up to around the 100s chapters. The MC become very subservient to his sister and it’s annoying almost like she is the MC. Yandere is one thing but he does what she says in the end.
the novel itself is pretty good, but the updated chapters have slowed way down
This is my second review after writing about 237 chapters. The story is slow paced nevertheless I liked what I wrote so I am gonna give myself a five star. Also if you have any questions ask me here I will do my best to reply as soon as possible.
Read up to ch32 and have to say its very good for me who likes isekai trope with system panel and skills. Its not iskeai but it is very similar since mc and his step-sister are in other world that is merged with earth. Also this story seems to be focusing on romance and action at both times so quite liked this. Hence a 5 star review from me.
Membuka SPOILER Synopsis look terrible , written by a 10years old kid. .....................................................................................................................................
“Well, there are no slaves here, but there is a servant system. Let's go. We should first eat and then head there later," he suggested, heading back to the inn first.” The MC is okay with slaves? Major L.
Membuka SPOILER This is an amazing webnovel with plenty of RPG elements, action, and a great plot. It appears to have a slow pace, but is interesting enough to have me hooked onto it. Recommended.
A very good story up to around the 100s chapters. The MC become very subservient to his sister and it’s annoying almost like she is the MC. Yandere is one thing but he does what she says in the end.
the novel itself is pretty good, but the updated chapters have slowed way down