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Has a lot of potential definitely needs to have character development of the character from being a child at some point if it does that then it will be very good but a great star nonetheless
ok this is not a story for you, if you want a mature mc, Mc is not evil and he is as innocent as child ( which I is the best thing about this fanfic ), don't think about story as it's just Mc enjoying his life to full. He trust others and do stupid things, it's a good for you if you want to relax and have a little fun time reading something not a serious story. If you want to give it a try then go ahead Thanks author π ( and please give us more chapter )
I've read up to chapter 14, it's a good start and makes you smile when reading this fanfic but it's a bit boring to read this fanfic because the MC character lacks growth It's not a matter of strength but his wisdom is hindered by his small body. I don't know how growth is considering he doesn't age. this is just a personal opinion.
ΠΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½Π°Ρ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΠ°, ΠΏΡΠΎΠ±Π»Π΅ΠΌΠ° ΡΠΎΠ»ΡΠΊΠΎ Π² ΡΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΠΈ Π²ΡΡ ΠΎΠ΄Π° Π³Π»Π°Π² Π½ΠΎ Ρ ΠΎΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ΅ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ ΡΠ°Π· Π΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ½Ρ Π²ΡΡ ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΡΡ 1 ΡΠ°Π· Π² Π½Π΅Π΄Π΅Π»Ρ.
the story is good just heavily put off by the baby fetish that happening. The MC is a full-ass grown adult since reincarnation he just wants to be a toddler and pretends to be one even knowing he is mentally older but goes oh well I'm a baby.
Very wholesome and good story and for those worried this is a child forever story seems like the author is hinting at the character eventually becoming an adult
It's going in a good direction, is wholesome and I love the interactions. please keep it up and don't drop it <3 Nowadays the fanfic kept just repeating and got no new perspective at least this is good change of pace.
Finally there's a book where the MC looks like a kid. The only downside is that he's thinking like a kid. It would have been 5/5 otherwise.
At first the story went fine, but after I found out that he does not grow up and he will always have the mentality of a child and he will never become calmer and will always whine and cry for any reason, I gave it up, I donβt like whiny and forever naive mc
This story is very fluffy and wholesome. It makes me feel really happy inside.
Nice fanfic, so far so good πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Obligatory Author review I am having so much fun writing my fanfic. It's so much fun and I hope you all like reading it I am trying for a update every week to every other week but I don't want to risk burnout so I write when I can also here is a picture of the MC with a suit.
Has a lot of potential definitely needs to have character development of the character from being a child at some point if it does that then it will be very good but a great star nonetheless
ok this is not a story for you, if you want a mature mc, Mc is not evil and he is as innocent as child ( which I is the best thing about this fanfic ), don't think about story as it's just Mc enjoying his life to full. He trust others and do stupid things, it's a good for you if you want to relax and have a little fun time reading something not a serious story. If you want to give it a try then go ahead Thanks author π ( and please give us more chapter )
I've read up to chapter 14, it's a good start and makes you smile when reading this fanfic but it's a bit boring to read this fanfic because the MC character lacks growth It's not a matter of strength but his wisdom is hindered by his small body. I don't know how growth is considering he doesn't age. this is just a personal opinion.
ΠΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½Π°Ρ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΠ°, ΠΏΡΠΎΠ±Π»Π΅ΠΌΠ° ΡΠΎΠ»ΡΠΊΠΎ Π² ΡΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΠΈ Π²ΡΡ ΠΎΠ΄Π° Π³Π»Π°Π² Π½ΠΎ Ρ ΠΎΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ΅ ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ ΡΠ°Π· Π΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ½Ρ Π²ΡΡ ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΡΡ 1 ΡΠ°Π· Π² Π½Π΅Π΄Π΅Π»Ρ.
the story is good just heavily put off by the baby fetish that happening. The MC is a full-ass grown adult since reincarnation he just wants to be a toddler and pretends to be one even knowing he is mentally older but goes oh well I'm a baby.
Very wholesome and good story and for those worried this is a child forever story seems like the author is hinting at the character eventually becoming an adult
It's going in a good direction, is wholesome and I love the interactions. please keep it up and don't drop it <3 Nowadays the fanfic kept just repeating and got no new perspective at least this is good change of pace.
Finally there's a book where the MC looks like a kid. The only downside is that he's thinking like a kid. It would have been 5/5 otherwise.
At first the story went fine, but after I found out that he does not grow up and he will always have the mentality of a child and he will never become calmer and will always whine and cry for any reason, I gave it up, I donβt like whiny and forever naive mc
This story is very fluffy and wholesome. It makes me feel really happy inside.
Nice fanfic, so far so good πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Obligatory Author review I am having so much fun writing my fanfic. It's so much fun and I hope you all like reading it I am trying for a update every week to every other week but I don't want to risk burnout so I write when I can also here is a picture of the MC with a suit.