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Very enjoyable read with the grammar that is slightly off in some places but easy to read anyways. While I wish the chapters were a bit longer for my tastes, they are fine as they are, overall I would recommend giving this story a read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
Very enjoyable read with the grammar that is slightly off in some places but easy to read anyways. While I wish the chapters were a bit longer for my tastes, they are fine as they are, overall I would recommend giving this story a read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………