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Its a story of toxic romance. Its fun but its frustrating to no end. especially as you see catherine showing rather strange behavior. She seems oddly fine with everything and that irked me. As a reader, I found her strange. surprisingly Luis feels more human that her. She left me with a strange taste. I feel like her emotions haven't been explained in a depth which were required of a person who had to go through such a hard time.
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It's such a nice read, with the way you express the things are so good, easy to grasp the story, keep up the good work! All the best...
this idea of story is honestly really interesting. The story development is fantastic. the writing quality is a bit of, but I guess that can be fixed. Congratulations on a good story.
Writing quality is really high, but one thing I would like more is more idea of what each person is thinking about the situation. Also the flow from one chapter to the next feels slightly off. Besides that really solid writing and story and people who are a fan of this genre can't find many complaints. I would say keep reading and writing it suits you.
I stumbled upon this gem, and it's unlike anything I've usually read before. A story about a human clone is a refreshing twist, and it had me hooked from the start! 😘This novel blends elements of romance, suspense, and moral dilemmas seamlessly.From what i've read so far to chapter 7, the story centers on Luis Sanchez, a private detective with a complicated past, and it's his inner conflicts, manipulations and redemption that really hooked me. But what makes it fascinating is Catherine, the mysterious human clone. If I'm not wrong, she doesn't even know that she's a clone yet! There's this palpable tension between her and Luis that had me totally engrossed. Their unspoken desires? Yep, you'll want to keep reading to see where it all goes! The character development here is pretty impressive, especially with Luis. But I gotta admit, I wanted more from the supporting characters you know, a bit more depth to make them pop. And yeah, there were times when things felt like they were rushing ahead. Some scenes, I thought, could use a bit more time to really soak in. But hey, this is still a real page-turner. It keeps you guessing, and that tension between Luis and Catherine? Well, that's something you'll want to dive into for sure. Give it a shot!I'm pleasantly surprised by this gem and can't wait for more updates. I'd give it a solid 4.5 out of 5 stars! Great job, author!💞💝
I'm usually not a fan of such stories but you executed it really well! The plot is expressive and engaging. Your writing is complex(in a good way) and evokes the right feelings. It's impressive, honestly. I could be wrong but, I think the readers of this app, or even the traditional books prefer a simple language. I mean you can use such creative descriptions for every three or four paragraphs but I feel like you overdid it a little? For me though, it's negligible. I feel like you did a really good job! Keep going!
Its a story of toxic romance. Its fun but its frustrating to no end. especially as you see catherine showing rather strange behavior. She seems oddly fine with everything and that irked me. As a reader, I found her strange. surprisingly Luis feels more human that her. She left me with a strange taste. I feel like her emotions haven't been explained in a depth which were required of a person who had to go through such a hard time.
Membuka SPOILER It's such a nice read, with the way you express the things are so good, easy to grasp the story, keep up the good work! All the best...
this idea of story is honestly really interesting. The story development is fantastic. the writing quality is a bit of, but I guess that can be fixed. Congratulations on a good story.
Writing quality is really high, but one thing I would like more is more idea of what each person is thinking about the situation. Also the flow from one chapter to the next feels slightly off. Besides that really solid writing and story and people who are a fan of this genre can't find many complaints. I would say keep reading and writing it suits you.
I stumbled upon this gem, and it's unlike anything I've usually read before. A story about a human clone is a refreshing twist, and it had me hooked from the start! 😘This novel blends elements of romance, suspense, and moral dilemmas seamlessly.From what i've read so far to chapter 7, the story centers on Luis Sanchez, a private detective with a complicated past, and it's his inner conflicts, manipulations and redemption that really hooked me. But what makes it fascinating is Catherine, the mysterious human clone. If I'm not wrong, she doesn't even know that she's a clone yet! There's this palpable tension between her and Luis that had me totally engrossed. Their unspoken desires? Yep, you'll want to keep reading to see where it all goes! The character development here is pretty impressive, especially with Luis. But I gotta admit, I wanted more from the supporting characters you know, a bit more depth to make them pop. And yeah, there were times when things felt like they were rushing ahead. Some scenes, I thought, could use a bit more time to really soak in. But hey, this is still a real page-turner. It keeps you guessing, and that tension between Luis and Catherine? Well, that's something you'll want to dive into for sure. Give it a shot!I'm pleasantly surprised by this gem and can't wait for more updates. I'd give it a solid 4.5 out of 5 stars! Great job, author!💞💝
I'm usually not a fan of such stories but you executed it really well! The plot is expressive and engaging. Your writing is complex(in a good way) and evokes the right feelings. It's impressive, honestly. I could be wrong but, I think the readers of this app, or even the traditional books prefer a simple language. I mean you can use such creative descriptions for every three or four paragraphs but I feel like you overdid it a little? For me though, it's negligible. I feel like you did a really good job! Keep going!