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Primitive Man

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A merciless and unforgiving world where a common cold could kill you, a world where survival of the fittest applied—

A world where humans aren't at the top of the food chain.

A world where the roar of predators echoes through the wilderness, and the threat of being hunted lingers around every corner. A world where the natural elements are both beautiful and deadly, with raging storms and scorching heat waves that can wipe out entire communities.

Every day is a battle for survival, with individuals and groups fighting tooth and nail to secure food, shelter, and water. The weak and vulnerable are often left behind, their fate sealed by the brutal law of the jungle.

And in this same age, same jungle there was a young boy, whose fate changed when he heard an unknown voice in his head.

Garnt woke up feeling a little better after he was on the verge of death because of a single wound he suffered from hunting, and the first thing he noticed was that everything around him looked foreign to him, even though the cave he was lying in was supposed to be his home.

While he was unconscious from the injuries, Garnt saw several things he couldn't even understand.

He saw people using brick-like equipment to communicate with each other and flying monsters that happily served humans by taking them inside their bodies. A bizarre world where everyone covered their bodies. He saw giant structures that stood even taller than the largest caves he had seen and suddenly a voice questioned his mind about what he witnessed.

[Why do these waters look muddy? Why don't you filter them?]
What are you talking about? This is how they are supposed to look. 

[Why are these weapons so blunt?]
They are sharp enough for me.

[Where are your clothes, Don't you get cold?]
What are clothes, I don't know.

[Why do men and women look like they don't feel anything while having sex? Wasn't it supposed to be romantic and sensual?]
What do you mean? It is just an activity for procreation.

After witnessing such a world, Garnt felt like they were missing something important. His current status looked like a living hell when he compared it with the vision he had. But was that vision real? Does something like that really exist?

[Yes, it exists. Do you want to see that world? I will help you, but in exchange, you should make my dream come true.]

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Author's Note:

—This story has R-18 elements to it, but no netorare (NTR)

—This story doesn't follow the real evolution process from the Pre-historic period and there are some added fantasy elements since this is a work of fiction.

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    ElectricLuna

    Hello Everyone🔥If you have any questions or requests leave them here, I will try my best to answer. Thank you for reading💖

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    ShoTen
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    I will give a complete honest review! Okay concept people have tried here and there. Primitive boy getting a system. Fresh. Writing quality okay. But main thing lacking is relatively of main charcacter to reader, for some reason I cannot connect to the main character at all.There is one novel with somewhat similar settings but fantasy, an modern guy waking as goblin, he was fully grasped to that cultural settings yet was relatable to modern readers, I was hoping for something like that, but it's okay.Good Luck.

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    Wild_Zeelo

    Nice new refreshing concept. Really excited to see the future of this story. Stone age people discovering the technology is such and interesting concept.

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    Daoistwaterdrop

    Pre historic era book. Very interested the world, the grammar is good. The update speed is alright. You got something good here author, keep it up.

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    Black_Domain

    A different model,.Good job..Hope mc will have modern mindset.

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    Niazh
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    I would highly recommend this book to the new readers and see it in a positive light . There are going to be fantasy elements in the future right ? I have read 2 manga/manhua of this type and honestly they were great though sadly they were ruined by bad plot and other race harem stuff as the pure human feel was lost on later parts .... high hopes for this one too . so far its doing great other then the system that can get you material things that's a bit .... yeah .. everything else is good ... its good to see the mc's development . Hopefully you'll not ruin the relationships by making them his women and not calling them mom or aunt anymore 😜 the taboo fell must carry on . Good luck and well wishes.

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    AniRev

    I've only read the free chapters so far and it seems alright. However, the author keeps abandoning his/her older books. I'm gonna wait this out until it ends or it passes 1000ch to know for sure that the author will stick with this one. Otherwise it's a waste of time. Reading 300 chapters only to find out that the author abandoned the book is depressing.

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    Loove_Zendaya

    Take 5 stars author 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥I really like this story

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    Sai_Fruit_centre

    I like the story so far just want to know if it's available somewhere else since it's really difficult to read all the chapters with limited daily pass

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    Ebin_Sibi

    where can i read without unlocking chapters?

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    Kaniu
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    here can advertise your novel, please tell me here can advertise your novel, please tell me here can advertise your novel, please tell me

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    T_O_K_Y_O

    This novel was surprisingly good (In my own opinion) My ratings for this novel is- Story 8/10Action 6.5/10Romance 8/10Harem 7.5/10Kingdom building 6/10Lemon 8/10Overall :7.8/10The story as its early volumes so I've only write my ratings I'm gonna write full details later The only downside on this novel is Informations were sometimes inaccurate and sometimes it doesn't make sense also lack of infos, Slow story but well I've understand since this has a slice of life tag

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    Iamapoordaoist

    Theres just something different about a primitive background that I love. Its an above average in quality for webnovel and I was bummed when i ran out of chapters.

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    FemdomEnjoyer

    I like the theme a lot. Being the world so harsh I'm not expecting any exploration for the foreseeable future, but hopefully we get to see the outside and build something! Oh my, just seeing the clan building and technologic development tags I'm salivating. Hopefully the world can be interactive too like taming beasts and doing business and conflicts with other tribes or species!

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    Krull1297

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    Kw0z
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    For anyone who wants to read a really good manga with an extremely similar concept to this, read Sousei no Taiga. Peak fiction

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    Leonardo_Jesus

    One of my favorite novels here, consistent and well written about evolution of a caveman with a person as a system

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    Aurelion_Sol_5284

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    Poor_hoodlum

    a waste time.. author is also a primitive man................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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    DragonCrusader47

    I’ve been out of touch with this book so I don’t know how many chapters are being released per month or week but I’ll give it a 4 to be fair. And I would like to see character designs and pictures so I can have an idea of what they look like. Anyone who has ideas about these don’t be afraid to share them!

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    Chapter 243: Choose 7 months ago

    Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume

    1. Information Sheet 1 years ago

    Jilid 2 : Villageman Arc

    1. 37
      A new village 1 years ago
    2. 38
      Typical men 1 years ago
    3. 39
      Current state 1 years ago
    4. 40
      A cat fight 1 years ago
    5. 41
      Unami 1 years ago
    6. 42
      Normal relationship (R-18) 1 years ago
    7. 43
      A village banquet 1 years ago
    8. 44
      Absurd status 1 years ago
    9. 45
      Faliure 1 years ago
    10. 46
      Confession 1 years ago
    11. 47
      Jealousy of a tough woman 1 years ago
    12. 48
      Decide Aunt(R-18) 1 years ago
    13. 49
      Ayra ask for forgiveness (R-18) 1 years ago
    14. 50
      Inside or outside (R-18) 1 years ago
    15. 51
      Friends or foe 1 years ago
    16. 52
      Ruthless Rona 1 years ago
    17. 53
      A brave woman 1 years ago
    18. 54
      Wild duel 1 years ago
    19. 55
      Push down that woman 1 years ago
    20. 56
      Submissive but fierce (R-18) 1 years ago
    21. 57
      Dangerous disease 1 years ago
    22. 58
      Common enemy 1 years ago
    23. 59
      Another cat fight 1 years ago
    24. 60
      Jealousy 1 years ago
    25. 61
      I won't be jealous again (R-18) 1 years ago
    26. 62
      Iron ores 1 years ago
    27. 63
      Regrets of Ganna 1 years ago
    28. 64
      Alloys 1 years ago
    29. 65
      Moga 1 years ago
    30. 66
      Double attack 1 years ago
    31. 67
      Moga vs Baktou 1 years ago
    32. 68
      This is what I want 1 years ago
    33. 69
      First encounter 1 years ago
    34. 70
      Not today 1 years ago
    35. 71
      Familiar white 1 years ago
    36. 72
      Baktou's dream 1 years ago
    37. 73
      I don't want any regrets 1 years ago
    38. 74
      Unami (R-18) 1 years ago
    39. 75
      Tears from above and below (R-18) 1 years ago
    40. 76
      Maro's pack 1 years ago
    41. 77
      Recovered parents 1 years ago
    42. 78
      Bloody trap 1 years ago
    43. 79
      Sad news 1 years ago
    44. 80
      Meeting mother-in-law 1 years ago
    45. 81
      Suspicious behaviour 1 years ago
    46. 82
      Adoption 1 years ago
    47. 83
      Decisive Battle I - Welcome back 1 years ago
    48. 84
      Decisive Battle II - Inspiration 1 years ago
    49. 85
      Decisive Battle III - Impossible 1 years ago
    50. 86
      Hopeless Eva 1 years ago
    51. 87
      Please do it for me 1 years ago

    Jilid 3 : Battle of Systems Arc

    1. 88
      Fresh start 1 years ago
    2. 89
      Sexy Rona in a waterfall (R-18) 1 years ago
    3. 90
      Slippery rocks (R-18) 1 years ago
    4. 91
      Get pregnant (R-18) 1 years ago
    5. 92
      My kind mother (R-18) 1 years ago
    6. 93
      First step (R-18) 1 years ago
    7. 94
      Confession 1 years ago
    8. 95
      Escape 1 years ago
    9. 96
      Woman addicted to kindness (R-18) 1 years ago
    10. 97
      First condom (R-18) 1 years ago
    11. 98
      Cold hunting 1 years ago
    12. 99
      Rescue Mission I - Surprise 1 years ago
    13. 100
      Rescue Mission II - Bath in the hot spring (R-18) 1 years ago
    14. 101
      Rescue Mission III - Teaching a lesson (R-18) 1 years ago
    15. 102
      Rescue Mission IV - A dream of hot spring 1 years ago
    16. 103
      Spring arrives 1 years ago
    17. 104
      Chameleon 1 years ago
    18. 105
      Current Development 1 years ago
    19. 106
      First wedding I - Preparation 1 years ago
    20. 107
      First Wedding II - Wedding day 1 years ago
    21. 108
      First Wedding III - Oath 1 years ago
    22. 109
      First Wedding IV - Kiss 1 years ago
    23. 110
      First Wedding V - Honeymoon (R-18) 1 years ago
    24. 111
      First Wedding VI - Guessing game (R-18) 1 years ago
    25. 112
      First Wedding VII - Domination loss (R-18) 1 years ago
    26. 113
      Rumours & Development 1 years ago
    27. 114
      Pregnancy cravings & Sea 1 years ago
    28. 115
      Grand plan & Moga's revival 1 years ago
    29. 116
      New life 1 years ago
    30. 117
      Happy news around the village 1 years ago
    31. 118
      Gifts & Reaction 1 years ago
    32. 119
      Untouchable beast 1 years ago
    33. 120
      Is this really a Chameleon? 1 years ago
    34. 121
      Bad news 1 years ago
    35. 122
      Siege weapons 1 years ago
    36. 123
      Request for another massage (R-18) 1 years ago
    37. 124
      Coward (R-18) 1 years ago
    38. 125
      Forbidden but they seek it (R-18) 1 years ago
    39. 126
      Breaking morals (R-18) 1 years ago
    40. 127
      Sound of death 1 years ago
    41. 128
      A giant turd 1 years ago
    42. 129
      Scream 1 years ago
    43. 130
      Pain & hope 1 years ago
    44. 131
      Garo & Ganna 1 years ago
    45. 132
      Be cautious 1 years ago
    46. 133
      Change of clothes (R-18) 1 years ago
    47. 134
      Horrible woman 1 years ago
    48. 135
      DNA essence collector 1 years ago
    49. 136
      Dinosaur Attack I - Aggression 1 years ago
    50. 137
      Dinosaur Attack II - Another one 1 years ago
    51. 138
      Dinosaur Attack III - Battle of giants 1 years ago
    52. 139
      Respect 1 years ago
    53. 140
      Third bionic element 1 years ago
    54. 141
      Baktou's special request 1 years ago
    55. 142
      Cuck or not (R-18) 1 years ago
    56. 143
      Too aroused (R-18) 1 years ago
    57. 144
      Garnt went too far 1 years ago
    58. 145
      Last syringe 1 years ago
    59. 146
      Turning point I - Can't leave 1 years ago
    60. 147
      Turning point II - Find Telvi 1 years ago
    61. 148
      Turning point III - My dream 1 years ago
    62. 149
      Turning point IV - Rejection & Reaction 1 years ago
    63. 150
      Turning point V - Help 1 years ago
    64. 151
      Turning point VI - Death & Birth 1 years ago
    65. 152
      Turning point VII - Post battle & Going back 1 years ago
    66. 153
      Turning point VIII - Declaration of war 1 years ago

    Jilid 4 : Battle of Sea Arc

    1. 154
      Modern Village 1 years ago
    2. 155
      Bullies 1 years ago
    3. 156
      Family Party 1 years ago
    4. 157
      Garnt family gathering 1 years ago
    5. 158
      Aroma of meat 1 years ago
    6. 159
      Libido explosion (R-18) 1 years ago
    7. 160
      Ordinary family (R-18) 1 years ago
    8. 161
      Surpassing limits (R-18) 1 years ago
    9. 162
      Backlash & Locust Attack 1 years ago
    10. 163
      Dangerous situation 1 years ago
    11. 164
      Taking Advantage 1 years ago
    12. 165
      Seaside village 1 years ago
    13. 166
      Winter arrives 1 years ago
    14. 167
      Sacrifice & Budival Injection 1 years ago
    15. 168
      Traitor & Creature 1 years ago
    16. 169
      Megalodon 1 years ago
    17. 170
      Going wild (R-18) 1 years ago
    18. 171
      Is this really okay? (R-18) 1 years ago
    19. 172
      End of winter & fools 1 years ago
    20. 173
      Signs 1 years ago
    21. 174
      Gunpowder 1 years ago
    22. 175
      Chaos of land 1 years ago
    23. 176
      Cave of death 1 years ago
    24. 177
      Impact 1 years ago
    25. 178
      Megalodon II 1 years ago
    26. 179
      Comfort 1 years ago
    27. 180
      You're not my brother (R-18) 1 years ago
    28. 181
      Ruined (R-18) 1 years ago
    29. 182
      It's finally happening 1 years ago
    30. 183
      Meteor 1 years ago
    31. 184
      New projects 1 years ago
    32. 185
      Move forward 1 years ago
    33. 186
      Firepower 1 years ago
    34. 187
      Virginity (R-18) 1 years ago
    35. 188
      Peeping is prohibited (R-18) 1 years ago
    36. 189
      Wake up to my mother (R-18) 1 years ago
    37. 190
      Kalina 1 years ago
    38. 191
      Mining village 1 years ago
    39. 192
      Creating Traditions 1 years ago
    40. 193
      Dangerous dive 1 years ago
    41. 194
      Same as that day 1 years ago
    42. 195
      Erika & Mia 1 years ago
    43. 196
      Massacre 1 years ago
    44. 197
      Healing 1 years ago
    45. 198
      Judgment of a mother-in-law 1 years ago
    46. 199
      Return of wild animals 1 years ago
    47. 200
      Wild hips (R-18) 1 years ago
    48. 201
      Reinforcement (R-18) 1 years ago
    49. 202
      Dangerous Gamble 1 years ago
    50. 203
      Dire situation 1 years ago
    51. 204
      Forest fire 1 years ago
    52. 205
      First step toward Baktou 12 months ago
    53. 206
      Imposter 12 months ago
    54. 207
      Tough choice 12 months ago
    55. 208
      Bloodshed of brothers 12 months ago
    56. 209
      Interfernce 12 months ago
    57. 210
      Third party 11 months ago
    58. 211
      Brother out of control 11 months ago
    59. 212
      No choice 11 months ago
    60. 213
      Rescue mission 11 months ago
    61. 214
      It's happening 11 months ago

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