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I love how the story is progressing, but since it's not finished yet, and I haven't finished reading, I'll be looking forward to what will happen, especially in Rina's character development. I hope to see more developments and events in the story.
Hello! As a new author here, I would greatly appreciate your support through reviews and comments. Your feedback serves as a valuable source of motivation for me to continue writing. And to kick things off, I'll unapologetically grant my own story a 5-star review hehe 😉
Messy storytelling, jumping between narrators in weird ways, and has the weirdest dialog ever: it is pretensious and unnatural, nobody talks that way. Also the angst is so overwhelming, it's not even funny.
I love how the story is progressing, but since it's not finished yet, and I haven't finished reading, I'll be looking forward to what will happen, especially in Rina's character development. I hope to see more developments and events in the story.
Hello! As a new author here, I would greatly appreciate your support through reviews and comments. Your feedback serves as a valuable source of motivation for me to continue writing. And to kick things off, I'll unapologetically grant my own story a 5-star review hehe 😉
Messy storytelling, jumping between narrators in weird ways, and has the weirdest dialog ever: it is pretensious and unnatural, nobody talks that way. Also the angst is so overwhelming, it's not even funny.