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What a sweet story you have written Author! Loved it. This story is short, sweet, romantic and wholesome. It has a happily ever after end. A must read. Eagerly waiting for your new project. 😘🤗❤️
Wonderful story. I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys a possessive, bad boy who loves his queen. Well, written and satisfying.
I started reading because I saw this is a short novel and the chapter is below 100. It was so interesting to read this novel as the author is actively using Pov of both FL and ML. Hope to get a good and happy ending.
I'm reading this after its completion, and it's a nice story with amazing flow and developments. I'm glad I stumbled upon this piece. The story moves at a smooth pace, making every development and scenario feel quite apt. I do wish there were more scenes with the supporting characters, but that would mean adding more chapters. Overall, I'm happy with this happily-ever-after kind of book.
it looks good, especially the visuals are so beautiful, I would love to read it!!! 😍😍😍😍
saya sangat sangat menyukai ceritanya, terima kasih buat penulis yang sudah membuat cerita ini, ketika pertama kali membacanya saya langsung suka dan menambahkan ke daftar perpustakaan dan menjadi favorit, keren dan salut buat penulis, semangat 💪💪💪 untuk menulis cerita bagus lainnya 👍👍👍❤🥰😘🙏🙏🙏
With a synopsis like that, would you except me to not read? The first chapter? Immediately got me hooked, I don't like 1st POV and don't usually read them. But this one is different. I haven't read a lot of chapters, but this much is enough for me to love this book almost immediately!
This was very beautiful story. I highly recomend if you are looking fir short sweet, no misunderstanding, no cheating between main leads, VERY VERY POSSessive Ml. Thank you Author it was worth reading 😍🥹😍😍
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I loved the story of Alexander and Alisha! I also loved the supporting characters. It was very well written and not drawn out. Thank you, dear Author!
the book was detailed and a very 3xciyibg reF. Able to keep up with all characters.
I'm on chapter 55 and I am truly enjoying this story. I love the author's writing style and the pace was great.
Loving the story so far. I love how the ML loves and protects his FL. I hope the relationship keeps sailing smoothly. Looking forward to more chapters. Nice read so far. Kudos to the author.
If you read the synopsis of the book, it won't lie to you. You get what it promises you, and that's not a bad thing. It's a cute contemporary romance story told in a somewhat unconventional double-first person method. That is to say, it shifts between the two leads, but will use first person in both cases. It clearly delineates between those shifts, however, so it shouldn't be too confusing. The grammar feels a little bit stilted, and the pacing at the beginning of the story feels a bit rushed. However, the grammatical errors to not so plague the book as to really cause problems with reading it, and the pacing works itself out once the author gets a little more comfortable with the story. Overall, I'd consider this story a worthwhile read if you enjoy the genre or if the synopsis appeals to you. It doesn't shake things up too much, but it doesn't have to. It knows what it's about, and it's focused on delivering that to the reader. Personally, I can always appreciate a story that gives me exactly what I signed up for. I give a thumbs-up.
I love this novel, the character design, and how the story flows. I highly recommend it! I cannot stop reading it, and absolutely addicted!! Keep it up author!
Author writes absolutely beautifully. The novel has so much potential. She does a great job at building a background story and personality for her characters, so that the reader would understand their motivations. Plus the storyline moves along rather quickly, so it is always exciting. Great job author! Can't wait to read more.
A solid start for a FL novel. I am personally not a fan of 1st POV narrative but I do agree that the chapters that shift between the characters' POVs have a personal feel to them. While the plot itself or the character design doesn't bring anything really "fresh", you can't deny that there is always a sense of intrigue when we encounter the clash of the "cold" ML character and the "pure and sincere" FL character. I wish you all the best with this work and hope it will attract more readers!
I fall in love with this story and with the male lead too. The plot is really interesting.
The synopsis made me excited to open the book. I loved the book itself thus far. There's an innocence to it (I don't know why). The characters just draw you in and make you want to keep reading. I loved the FL's willful blindness to Jack (Team Alex, here)
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Just from the synopsis enough to make me want to read it. The genre and plot is suited me well, even though i only read 8 chapter but i can see the potential from the story, i like the Fl personality a lot. overall its good novel, i'll add it to my library and cheer on the author to keep updating!
really good novel, the romance is good and the flow of words going well, I will keep it in my library for binge reading, keep up the work author.
Great novel, full five star review, there are only eight chapters for now, so I will come again after a thorough reading. Good luck! I love the name Alisha btw! keep writing!
What a sweet story you have written Author! Loved it. This story is short, sweet, romantic and wholesome. It has a happily ever after end. A must read. Eagerly waiting for your new project. 😘🤗❤️
Wonderful story. I highly recommend this to anyone who enjoys a possessive, bad boy who loves his queen. Well, written and satisfying.
I started reading because I saw this is a short novel and the chapter is below 100. It was so interesting to read this novel as the author is actively using Pov of both FL and ML. Hope to get a good and happy ending.
I'm reading this after its completion, and it's a nice story with amazing flow and developments. I'm glad I stumbled upon this piece. The story moves at a smooth pace, making every development and scenario feel quite apt. I do wish there were more scenes with the supporting characters, but that would mean adding more chapters. Overall, I'm happy with this happily-ever-after kind of book.
it looks good, especially the visuals are so beautiful, I would love to read it!!! 😍😍😍😍
saya sangat sangat menyukai ceritanya, terima kasih buat penulis yang sudah membuat cerita ini, ketika pertama kali membacanya saya langsung suka dan menambahkan ke daftar perpustakaan dan menjadi favorit, keren dan salut buat penulis, semangat 💪💪💪 untuk menulis cerita bagus lainnya 👍👍👍❤🥰😘🙏🙏🙏
With a synopsis like that, would you except me to not read? The first chapter? Immediately got me hooked, I don't like 1st POV and don't usually read them. But this one is different. I haven't read a lot of chapters, but this much is enough for me to love this book almost immediately!
This was very beautiful story. I highly recomend if you are looking fir short sweet, no misunderstanding, no cheating between main leads, VERY VERY POSSessive Ml. Thank you Author it was worth reading 😍🥹😍😍
Membuka SPOILER I loved the story of Alexander and Alisha! I also loved the supporting characters. It was very well written and not drawn out. Thank you, dear Author!
the book was detailed and a very 3xciyibg reF. Able to keep up with all characters.
I'm on chapter 55 and I am truly enjoying this story. I love the author's writing style and the pace was great.
Loving the story so far. I love how the ML loves and protects his FL. I hope the relationship keeps sailing smoothly. Looking forward to more chapters. Nice read so far. Kudos to the author.
If you read the synopsis of the book, it won't lie to you. You get what it promises you, and that's not a bad thing. It's a cute contemporary romance story told in a somewhat unconventional double-first person method. That is to say, it shifts between the two leads, but will use first person in both cases. It clearly delineates between those shifts, however, so it shouldn't be too confusing. The grammar feels a little bit stilted, and the pacing at the beginning of the story feels a bit rushed. However, the grammatical errors to not so plague the book as to really cause problems with reading it, and the pacing works itself out once the author gets a little more comfortable with the story. Overall, I'd consider this story a worthwhile read if you enjoy the genre or if the synopsis appeals to you. It doesn't shake things up too much, but it doesn't have to. It knows what it's about, and it's focused on delivering that to the reader. Personally, I can always appreciate a story that gives me exactly what I signed up for. I give a thumbs-up.
I love this novel, the character design, and how the story flows. I highly recommend it! I cannot stop reading it, and absolutely addicted!! Keep it up author!
Author writes absolutely beautifully. The novel has so much potential. She does a great job at building a background story and personality for her characters, so that the reader would understand their motivations. Plus the storyline moves along rather quickly, so it is always exciting. Great job author! Can't wait to read more.
A solid start for a FL novel. I am personally not a fan of 1st POV narrative but I do agree that the chapters that shift between the characters' POVs have a personal feel to them. While the plot itself or the character design doesn't bring anything really "fresh", you can't deny that there is always a sense of intrigue when we encounter the clash of the "cold" ML character and the "pure and sincere" FL character. I wish you all the best with this work and hope it will attract more readers!
I fall in love with this story and with the male lead too. The plot is really interesting.
The synopsis made me excited to open the book. I loved the book itself thus far. There's an innocence to it (I don't know why). The characters just draw you in and make you want to keep reading. I loved the FL's willful blindness to Jack (Team Alex, here)
Membuka SPOILER Just from the synopsis enough to make me want to read it. The genre and plot is suited me well, even though i only read 8 chapter but i can see the potential from the story, i like the Fl personality a lot. overall its good novel, i'll add it to my library and cheer on the author to keep updating!
really good novel, the romance is good and the flow of words going well, I will keep it in my library for binge reading, keep up the work author.
Great novel, full five star review, there are only eight chapters for now, so I will come again after a thorough reading. Good luck! I love the name Alisha btw! keep writing!
Loved this story! Well written. I recommend 🤍