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Hello everyone. This is the author's shameless review of the book so far. If you have any questions, leave them here. This will serve as a Q&A.
Wow this story chapter is so long, and it is straight Hantai, and I see no Apocalypse's in the first few chapters.
I am in the early chaps and I am quite impress. Not sure if it is a spoiler because the time travel plot is quite obvious from the beginning. Anyway, your light version of »all you zombies » is very well written without error on the greatest time travel paradox ever. Just missing the fact that Leyan is a female version of xyaoyun but it would be a complete headache, so I am glad u miss this part.
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So this book looks pretty good!! I read the description and was really interested in it but there is 1 thing the is bothering me.... It says no system so Y is that?? Y isnt there a system in this book if stuff can come out of nowhere 1 day and all that?? Thats what i got out of the description.... it just seems weird if this book has stuff going on in it and no system!!! I think a system should be in this book just from reading the description but thats just my opinion!!
the story is promising, but when I read chapter 10 and above the changes in names and some grammar mistake makes my immersive reading skill kinda weird, and based on author words at the end of January the changes in name will be edited for all chapter so I'll wait till then
I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.
Edition. I read the first chapter and I will give my review that I rarely give. It has a lot of potential, readable and all, the only thing that bothers a bit is that sometimes I feel like you are confusing Xiaoyun with Yunyun, but from the flow of the paragraph it is understandable. But you have to put a little more attention to that part. I'm a fan of the harem, but with coherency. I see this one as having a lot of potential in that even though it's in###t, it makes for something worth watching (since it's obviously fictional). I'll keep reading and try to give another review if I don't forget, keep up the good work author.
the only bad thing is... the setting is in china... dude all chinese name is hard to remember... their name just like and almost same with other people...
It’s been a while since an apocalypse book has gained my interest like this one has. The author has created an interesting world with a interesting mc, the grammar although average at the beginning gets better overtime and the author is consistent with updates. Highly recommend to any prospective readers. And author keep up the good work.
Well written story with an apocalypse setting, likable characters and a little mystery. I hope the MC matures with the difficult circumstances and becomes more domineering and decisive so he can protect his family. keep up the good work author
Decided to draw a rough map on where everything is. I don't recommend taking the scale of things literally. Its more of where everything is at rather than how far they are. The comments in this post are the other three photo of the map I drew that you might wanted to check if you want to visualize it.
Hello everyone. This is the author's shameless review of the book so far. If you have any questions, leave them here. This will serve as a Q&A.
Wow this story chapter is so long, and it is straight Hantai, and I see no Apocalypse's in the first few chapters.
I am in the early chaps and I am quite impress. Not sure if it is a spoiler because the time travel plot is quite obvious from the beginning. Anyway, your light version of »all you zombies » is very well written without error on the greatest time travel paradox ever. Just missing the fact that Leyan is a female version of xyaoyun but it would be a complete headache, so I am glad u miss this part.
Membuka SPOILER So this book looks pretty good!! I read the description and was really interested in it but there is 1 thing the is bothering me.... It says no system so Y is that?? Y isnt there a system in this book if stuff can come out of nowhere 1 day and all that?? Thats what i got out of the description.... it just seems weird if this book has stuff going on in it and no system!!! I think a system should be in this book just from reading the description but thats just my opinion!!
the story is promising, but when I read chapter 10 and above the changes in names and some grammar mistake makes my immersive reading skill kinda weird, and based on author words at the end of January the changes in name will be edited for all chapter so I'll wait till then
I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.
Edition. I read the first chapter and I will give my review that I rarely give. It has a lot of potential, readable and all, the only thing that bothers a bit is that sometimes I feel like you are confusing Xiaoyun with Yunyun, but from the flow of the paragraph it is understandable. But you have to put a little more attention to that part. I'm a fan of the harem, but with coherency. I see this one as having a lot of potential in that even though it's in###t, it makes for something worth watching (since it's obviously fictional). I'll keep reading and try to give another review if I don't forget, keep up the good work author.
the only bad thing is... the setting is in china... dude all chinese name is hard to remember... their name just like and almost same with other people...
It’s been a while since an apocalypse book has gained my interest like this one has. The author has created an interesting world with a interesting mc, the grammar although average at the beginning gets better overtime and the author is consistent with updates. Highly recommend to any prospective readers. And author keep up the good work.
Well written story with an apocalypse setting, likable characters and a little mystery. I hope the MC matures with the difficult circumstances and becomes more domineering and decisive so he can protect his family. keep up the good work author
Decided to draw a rough map on where everything is. I don't recommend taking the scale of things literally. Its more of where everything is at rather than how far they are. The comments in this post are the other three photo of the map I drew that you might wanted to check if you want to visualize it.