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This story has potential in it and im hopeful to see what the author would give in the future The only issue that i had was the pace of this story After 115 chapters, only does the MC even think about batting in a match
I really enjoy this story for the most part. It’s one of the few baseball fanfics where it’s not focused on the mc pitching. It’s only just about reaching high school about 180 chapters in, but for the most part it’s still enjoyable read. I only have 2 main problems with this story and neither are bad enough to make me not read it. Those 2 are 1. The MCs personality shifting to fit the scenario, as in the mc will be described as mature, then wear Dino pajamas with a tail at home alone. And 2. Which is an extension of 1, will be described as having genius level skills in obsering and analyzing people then become a dense anime protagonist on steroids and not notice the most obvious shit a 4 year old could notice. Overall a decent story and worth a read if you are into baseball anime
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106 chapters, and the main character still hasn't joined a baseball team as a player or properly played an official game. The premise of the story was interesting, a hitter in a story about pitchers, but your main character is just insufferable now. Maybe you should have titled the story as, Sawamura has a decent coach in middle school, instead of the strongest hitter.
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I would give it five stars, and I understand the story is slow paced, and I understand that the character is the epitome of stubborn tsundere that can’t admit he likes baseball with his friends, but it’s chapter 60, we’re still in the first year of middle school and the mc has actually played baseball for maybe a month or something 3 years ago. so frankly, the only reason he still feels like the main character is because you made him so stupidly OP for his age and we focus on his POV a lot. Other wise, this could literally just be what if sawamura had a decent coach in middle school and you’d get the same story.
Good story but the story is still long[img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze]
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its a great fanfic, keep writing and don't dropped this fic...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ..................................... ......................................
I highly recommend this to you guys to read. It may have few chapters as of now but with the Author updating it everyday, expect more chapters in just a few weeks, writing quality is also really good. A little spoiler tho. The story starts a little different from the usual reincarnation story I have read. It intrigued me how the Author made the MC into a normal person who's not into baseball, which is typical in most of the fanfic I read. (although we all know he will love it soon anyway, but you get to read it first how he learns about baseball and plays the game). I am actually wondering how Shu_21 is making this story fast paced, not too draggy and still getting more interesting as the story goes . (Given how Sendo who zoned out most of the time 🤣.) Thank you Shu_21 for sharing this story. I am also following closely your other fanfic "The Monster", you guys should also give that story a try. ❤️
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Really good, i really like the slow pace but it can be very slow to some people
This story has potential in it and im hopeful to see what the author would give in the future The only issue that i had was the pace of this story After 115 chapters, only does the MC even think about batting in a match
I really enjoy this story for the most part. It’s one of the few baseball fanfics where it’s not focused on the mc pitching. It’s only just about reaching high school about 180 chapters in, but for the most part it’s still enjoyable read. I only have 2 main problems with this story and neither are bad enough to make me not read it. Those 2 are 1. The MCs personality shifting to fit the scenario, as in the mc will be described as mature, then wear Dino pajamas with a tail at home alone. And 2. Which is an extension of 1, will be described as having genius level skills in obsering and analyzing people then become a dense anime protagonist on steroids and not notice the most obvious shit a 4 year old could notice. Overall a decent story and worth a read if you are into baseball anime
Membuka SPOILER 106 chapters, and the main character still hasn't joined a baseball team as a player or properly played an official game. The premise of the story was interesting, a hitter in a story about pitchers, but your main character is just insufferable now. Maybe you should have titled the story as, Sawamura has a decent coach in middle school, instead of the strongest hitter.
Membuka SPOILER I would give it five stars, and I understand the story is slow paced, and I understand that the character is the epitome of stubborn tsundere that can’t admit he likes baseball with his friends, but it’s chapter 60, we’re still in the first year of middle school and the mc has actually played baseball for maybe a month or something 3 years ago. so frankly, the only reason he still feels like the main character is because you made him so stupidly OP for his age and we focus on his POV a lot. Other wise, this could literally just be what if sawamura had a decent coach in middle school and you’d get the same story.
Good story but the story is still long[img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze]
Membuka SPOILER its a great fanfic, keep writing and don't dropped this fic...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ...................................... ..................................... ......................................
I highly recommend this to you guys to read. It may have few chapters as of now but with the Author updating it everyday, expect more chapters in just a few weeks, writing quality is also really good. A little spoiler tho. The story starts a little different from the usual reincarnation story I have read. It intrigued me how the Author made the MC into a normal person who's not into baseball, which is typical in most of the fanfic I read. (although we all know he will love it soon anyway, but you get to read it first how he learns about baseball and plays the game). I am actually wondering how Shu_21 is making this story fast paced, not too draggy and still getting more interesting as the story goes . (Given how Sendo who zoned out most of the time 🤣.) Thank you Shu_21 for sharing this story. I am also following closely your other fanfic "The Monster", you guys should also give that story a try. ❤️
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Really good, i really like the slow pace but it can be very slow to some people