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what a shitty attitude this guy has. one moment he is claiming that he wants to stand at the top and the other he is complaining about his being taken through trials to get more power. after being given the object he adamantly refuses....brain dead mc i tell u
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Read the 145 (of 147 ) free chapters. Very disappointing , their were spelling errors that made it hard to read what was being said, the plot has potential the author just need to capitalise on it.
Good grammar and story, but it's got a lot of subtle and hidden repetition along with just enough unnecessary details that I lost interest. The author is good at disguising it, but it's chapter length padding nonetheless. If you read this, just know that there will probably a good handful of sentences per chapter that are either paraphrased repetitions or completely unnecessary details that add absolutely nothing to the story or mental picture being pained...and it gets worse as the story progresses. ⬆️ See what I did there? Expect that a lot from this book!
i like copy talent cliche but this one is a disappointment. copy talent and mastering talent is 2 different thing. we know that but at least go look for talent that can mutually complement each others rather than 30 chapters of filler
a good novel for a beginner author keep up the spirit just kinda annoying if u keep telling the inner thoughts of the mc in the chapters i have read only about 4 chapters its kinda unbearable 😔it's my fault just not my type u know the story doesn't have the flow in it rn but it's alright and kinda forced but u can deliver into it it's just that there should be a balance about what the mc does and what the mc thinks like there is no need to say that my future is bright in an old fashioned way it's boring and kinda annoying but rest of all is absolutely amazing considering your age and experience
Great story , Have potential like that pheonix is from another realm stronger than this world,Absorbing monster body with pearl,improve talent copy by telekinesis.Mainly story need harem (not many) ie, strong mature woman with background rather than burden girls who lag behind.I have read a novel similar but Chinese raw. {can collect everything 我能採集萬物} the only disappointment is that mc is a mud headed with 0 girl knowledge,reject everyone.novel is great but no soul.Please add some interesting fmc...hahagood job anyway 👍
This novel is very good, but I wanted to know, what about your other work? Did you do it just to do it or do you not have time to continue? ....m
Highly Recommended!!! The writing quality is decent and its easy to keep up with the story so far. I am waiting for more chapters. :) [img=recommend] [img=update]
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I really like this type of novels and you made it so perfectly as a start, i hope you keep it up like this and hope this novel contain no harem and cultivation realms ahead not common suh apiece of capage like other novels from the same type.
Not a fan of this novel Mc.....but people who like to read hero wannabe-ish mc then this could be for you
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Harem might be nice later on on the novel but not right know since the mc is weak and it would bring a lot of unnecessary stupid plots also it would be nice if the mc learned all the sub occupation the useful ones since he would not need to pay other people money to make pills or other stuff he needs for him although i would be nice if he made some friends with insane talent on the sub occupations and later on to make a sect that would be awesome and make the sect the best in the world and the go to higher worlds after he finishes all the stuff he has to do go and make a sect in the upper worlds also i like the mc seems to be smart and not like every other mc ho has 0-IQ also having intermediate fire talent that increases comprehension is there like a separate normal talent of comprehension that can make the mc comprehend faster
Hey Author, I want to ask these qsns because I don't want to pick a novel that will be dropped suddenly 1. are you going to drop the novel at 40 ch's like many others 2. can you tell me for how many more chapters you have the story in your mind approximately
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Your book starts off very interesting with the copy concept. A couple decisions the MC makes that to me make no sense and nothing is explained is one when fighting the creature with high darknes ability why not copy it since he only had an intermediate one. Two when fighting the fire lion in the trial when not copy the blaze strike skill? And the part where he goes to the desertt I get what your trying to do but this part of the story is really boring and to many chapters with no progress makes it boring. You need to wrap up the desert much quicker this is really hard to read and hoping it ends soon I liked the beginnin but at this point it’s hard to keep going. I would even consider rewriting this part to condense it into a few chapters instead of the like 15-20 it is so far.
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So far novel is ok,not very good not very bad,best part for me is the update frequency, author is updating at least two chapters daily and the writing is also good so if anyone wanna read a novel like this,you can give it a try.
This novel is simply great, overpowered mc,with a good conscience and pride,the world building is also amazing and the character design is now progressing but still ,it is one of the best novel I have read .
Overall, the story is interesting and easy to understand. There are not many unfamiliar or deep words used in the story, that makes it a bit relaxing to read. Also, the system used in the story can be easily understood. The Skill of the MC is something to wait for. Like what kind of skills he would copy and how he would integrate them together. But there's something I want to call out to the Author. I hope you can show more what kind of a person the MC is before he wakes up in the body of the black hair boy with blue eyes. I mean the MC's new body. I just can't sympathize with a MC who wakes up in a new world and decides to stand above all without proper motivation. I only read until chapter 5 but I will write a review again after I see what I'm looking for in the chapters ahead.
This novel has great potential,its updates are also good daily at least two chapters which is not easy,I like op mc novels so this is my kind and I really liked it very much
so far so great, it also wasn't to difficult to read, i was curious if he'll ever be able to merge abilities together making new techniques with different capabilities.
So far the story is great, narration is captivating with the way the author serves imagery and descriptions, readers will visualize the flow of the story easily, and grammar is good too! This story is a good read. One must try it!👏👏
I like the op protagonist trope~ he really adapts fast haha i'm interested in seeing where this story is going. and also he's not on earth, right?
Early review/ i like the concept of the story and it's well written good pacing so far has it moments to get hyped it's enjoyable and you can visualize the conversation they're having overall pretty good start
A great read! The author can seamlessly can ease into the story. It didn’t feel hard or confusing to read- this isn’t always easy to do so good job author! Excellent grammar as well barely go none that I found, this novel has real potential it already feels like a good one right off the bat. Good work author, can’t wait to see Jiang Lei grow as a character in the upcoming chps [img=recommend]!
so far so good, book has potential I also like your copying concept looking forward to what's gonna happen, well done engaging story.
Interesting novel that packs a punch. It's engaging with little to no grammar mistakes, the conversation doesn't feel stiff and flows smoothly. I also like the characters which are breaking the stereotypes of xianxia novels. Also I love how the mc is just like me with his nervousness when talking to others.
Hi friends, I am the author of this book and it is also the first time I am writing something so please kindly remind me of my mistakes if you get one. Now let's talk about some details of our mc 1. He is overpowered but only at his own level, if someone's realm is higher than him then they can beat him. 2. For now MC's character is in development, he is originally from Earth so he has the ideals and principles of a Earthling. 3. If you have any questions about if it is harem or not , then it totally depends on you , honestly I haven't think about adding romance to this novel but you can choose it , If you want it to be No heroine, Single Heroine or Multiple Heroine (Five to Six). That's it for now ,If you want to ask any question or you find an error or mistake in my novel, feel free to tell me, I will try to answer all your questions.
what a shitty attitude this guy has. one moment he is claiming that he wants to stand at the top and the other he is complaining about his being taken through trials to get more power. after being given the object he adamantly refuses....brain dead mc i tell u
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Read the 145 (of 147 ) free chapters. Very disappointing , their were spelling errors that made it hard to read what was being said, the plot has potential the author just need to capitalise on it.
Good grammar and story, but it's got a lot of subtle and hidden repetition along with just enough unnecessary details that I lost interest. The author is good at disguising it, but it's chapter length padding nonetheless. If you read this, just know that there will probably a good handful of sentences per chapter that are either paraphrased repetitions or completely unnecessary details that add absolutely nothing to the story or mental picture being pained...and it gets worse as the story progresses. ⬆️ See what I did there? Expect that a lot from this book!
i like copy talent cliche but this one is a disappointment. copy talent and mastering talent is 2 different thing. we know that but at least go look for talent that can mutually complement each others rather than 30 chapters of filler
a good novel for a beginner author keep up the spirit just kinda annoying if u keep telling the inner thoughts of the mc in the chapters i have read only about 4 chapters its kinda unbearable 😔it's my fault just not my type u know the story doesn't have the flow in it rn but it's alright and kinda forced but u can deliver into it it's just that there should be a balance about what the mc does and what the mc thinks like there is no need to say that my future is bright in an old fashioned way it's boring and kinda annoying but rest of all is absolutely amazing considering your age and experience
Great story , Have potential like that pheonix is from another realm stronger than this world,Absorbing monster body with pearl,improve talent copy by telekinesis.Mainly story need harem (not many) ie, strong mature woman with background rather than burden girls who lag behind.I have read a novel similar but Chinese raw. {can collect everything 我能採集萬物} the only disappointment is that mc is a mud headed with 0 girl knowledge,reject everyone.novel is great but no soul.Please add some interesting fmc...hahagood job anyway 👍
This novel is very good, but I wanted to know, what about your other work? Did you do it just to do it or do you not have time to continue? ....m
Highly Recommended!!! The writing quality is decent and its easy to keep up with the story so far. I am waiting for more chapters. :) [img=recommend] [img=update]
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Membuka SPOILER I really like this type of novels and you made it so perfectly as a start, i hope you keep it up like this and hope this novel contain no harem and cultivation realms ahead not common suh apiece of capage like other novels from the same type.
Not a fan of this novel Mc.....but people who like to read hero wannabe-ish mc then this could be for you
Membuka SPOILER Harem might be nice later on on the novel but not right know since the mc is weak and it would bring a lot of unnecessary stupid plots also it would be nice if the mc learned all the sub occupation the useful ones since he would not need to pay other people money to make pills or other stuff he needs for him although i would be nice if he made some friends with insane talent on the sub occupations and later on to make a sect that would be awesome and make the sect the best in the world and the go to higher worlds after he finishes all the stuff he has to do go and make a sect in the upper worlds also i like the mc seems to be smart and not like every other mc ho has 0-IQ also having intermediate fire talent that increases comprehension is there like a separate normal talent of comprehension that can make the mc comprehend faster
Hey Author, I want to ask these qsns because I don't want to pick a novel that will be dropped suddenly 1. are you going to drop the novel at 40 ch's like many others 2. can you tell me for how many more chapters you have the story in your mind approximately
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe xexexe
Membuka SPOILER Your book starts off very interesting with the copy concept. A couple decisions the MC makes that to me make no sense and nothing is explained is one when fighting the creature with high darknes ability why not copy it since he only had an intermediate one. Two when fighting the fire lion in the trial when not copy the blaze strike skill? And the part where he goes to the desertt I get what your trying to do but this part of the story is really boring and to many chapters with no progress makes it boring. You need to wrap up the desert much quicker this is really hard to read and hoping it ends soon I liked the beginnin but at this point it’s hard to keep going. I would even consider rewriting this part to condense it into a few chapters instead of the like 15-20 it is so far.
Membuka SPOILER So far novel is ok,not very good not very bad,best part for me is the update frequency, author is updating at least two chapters daily and the writing is also good so if anyone wanna read a novel like this,you can give it a try.
This novel is simply great, overpowered mc,with a good conscience and pride,the world building is also amazing and the character design is now progressing but still ,it is one of the best novel I have read .
Overall, the story is interesting and easy to understand. There are not many unfamiliar or deep words used in the story, that makes it a bit relaxing to read. Also, the system used in the story can be easily understood. The Skill of the MC is something to wait for. Like what kind of skills he would copy and how he would integrate them together. But there's something I want to call out to the Author. I hope you can show more what kind of a person the MC is before he wakes up in the body of the black hair boy with blue eyes. I mean the MC's new body. I just can't sympathize with a MC who wakes up in a new world and decides to stand above all without proper motivation. I only read until chapter 5 but I will write a review again after I see what I'm looking for in the chapters ahead.
This novel has great potential,its updates are also good daily at least two chapters which is not easy,I like op mc novels so this is my kind and I really liked it very much
so far so great, it also wasn't to difficult to read, i was curious if he'll ever be able to merge abilities together making new techniques with different capabilities.
So far the story is great, narration is captivating with the way the author serves imagery and descriptions, readers will visualize the flow of the story easily, and grammar is good too! This story is a good read. One must try it!👏👏
I like the op protagonist trope~ he really adapts fast haha i'm interested in seeing where this story is going. and also he's not on earth, right?
Early review/ i like the concept of the story and it's well written good pacing so far has it moments to get hyped it's enjoyable and you can visualize the conversation they're having overall pretty good start
A great read! The author can seamlessly can ease into the story. It didn’t feel hard or confusing to read- this isn’t always easy to do so good job author! Excellent grammar as well barely go none that I found, this novel has real potential it already feels like a good one right off the bat. Good work author, can’t wait to see Jiang Lei grow as a character in the upcoming chps [img=recommend]!
so far so good, book has potential I also like your copying concept looking forward to what's gonna happen, well done engaging story.
Interesting novel that packs a punch. It's engaging with little to no grammar mistakes, the conversation doesn't feel stiff and flows smoothly. I also like the characters which are breaking the stereotypes of xianxia novels. Also I love how the mc is just like me with his nervousness when talking to others.
Hi friends, I am the author of this book and it is also the first time I am writing something so please kindly remind me of my mistakes if you get one. Now let's talk about some details of our mc 1. He is overpowered but only at his own level, if someone's realm is higher than him then they can beat him. 2. For now MC's character is in development, he is originally from Earth so he has the ideals and principles of a Earthling. 3. If you have any questions about if it is harem or not , then it totally depends on you , honestly I haven't think about adding romance to this novel but you can choose it , If you want it to be No heroine, Single Heroine or Multiple Heroine (Five to Six). That's it for now ,If you want to ask any question or you find an error or mistake in my novel, feel free to tell me, I will try to answer all your questions.