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The 7th and 8th chapter was very intriguing and was a great point to turn the story around. Loved It !
This is my first time reading fantasy romance novel and I must say that the author has a strong grip over what she wants to deliver to her Audience in a detailed and sequential manner. Every next chapter is having a twist and turn which is making the character development process easy and understandable to readers to why the characters are turning good , bad or turning cold. ! 🤍
I was gliding through the chapters like a champ but then I realised I haven't plagued anyone's mind with my reviews. Cant't let that happen, can I?so first and foremost, The writing quality is good if you ignore the occasional grammatical error. I find her word choices a bit funny but that's how I like things so it isn't a deal breaker.As for the plot, it honestly isn't something you won't expect but also not something you can hit a guess and land a bulls eye. You can try tho.Now the pace of the story is quite good. It isn't going mach Jesus and also isn't rivaling a snail. Sweet spot I dare say.As for the giggles, I ship Lunar with Bernice.ah I forgot...the chapter word count is also quite nice so don't fret if you are a fast reader.
It's a beautifully knitted story. Especially I felt the FL's emotions. Some minor grammatical errors but that can be fixed. I was so engrossed in the beginning and would like to see where it goes. Good luck author.
Hehehe, it is only me who already get hook up just by the synopsis? and it's not dissapointed me. I Like the the opening of the story and FL character is suited me very well. The ML is also kinda hot(the most important≧∇≦). i cannot make lot of comment since i'm afraid it would be a spoiler. But so far it's a good story. I cant wait for the future development of the story. i'll add it to my library. Fighting author-san(σ≧▽≦)σ
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So here this shameless author writing her review after completing 75 chapters and I can guarantee one thing it is a mix up every emotions . At first this novel is going to remind you that it is a very normal contractual marriage but it is beyond that. It has supernatural powers, mysteries ,so many supernatural beings, divines and lot more . I can say it won't bore u ..
So this is a really good read. At first i though it was another generic marriage novel but naw it pretty good the buildup to the marriage ceremony was pretty good and the face that the plot was revealed in the title. How To End This Marriage so I'm actually anticipating everything going sideways for this girl which i really like. I definitely suggest people give it a read.
The writing quality and the development of the story are top-notch, neither too fast nor too slow just the perfect pace. It will surely be great to read, I'll be waiting for it to update more.
Plot is interesting... the story development is good, it slowly appears to its own path. Character design is good as well. WAITING FOR the next update. just thora check karo first few chapters... [img=recommend]
Reading all the updated chapters I came to know why it had mystery genre as well. The starting gave me the vibe of breaking a girls feelings toward her first love but than again the way it has portrayed that she died when no one around really put so much mystery. So many questions take place. Like where was the husband? Why the entire mention was Eempty? Why he get angry over his parents death? So much questions. I will wait to see the mystery unfolds.
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Frankly, the book is written well, there are grammatical mistakes though. I feel that at some places the story isn’t clear, like where she is interacting with the lunar god and the sword. Also, I find the character of FL irritating because she is just shouting at people, gods etc. I understand that she has been through a lot but still, does only shouting help?
The 7th and 8th chapter was very intriguing and was a great point to turn the story around. Loved It !
This is my first time reading fantasy romance novel and I must say that the author has a strong grip over what she wants to deliver to her Audience in a detailed and sequential manner. Every next chapter is having a twist and turn which is making the character development process easy and understandable to readers to why the characters are turning good , bad or turning cold. ! 🤍
I was gliding through the chapters like a champ but then I realised I haven't plagued anyone's mind with my reviews. Cant't let that happen, can I?so first and foremost, The writing quality is good if you ignore the occasional grammatical error. I find her word choices a bit funny but that's how I like things so it isn't a deal breaker.As for the plot, it honestly isn't something you won't expect but also not something you can hit a guess and land a bulls eye. You can try tho.Now the pace of the story is quite good. It isn't going mach Jesus and also isn't rivaling a snail. Sweet spot I dare say.As for the giggles, I ship Lunar with Bernice.ah I forgot...the chapter word count is also quite nice so don't fret if you are a fast reader.
It's a beautifully knitted story. Especially I felt the FL's emotions. Some minor grammatical errors but that can be fixed. I was so engrossed in the beginning and would like to see where it goes. Good luck author.
Hehehe, it is only me who already get hook up just by the synopsis? and it's not dissapointed me. I Like the the opening of the story and FL character is suited me very well. The ML is also kinda hot(the most important≧∇≦). i cannot make lot of comment since i'm afraid it would be a spoiler. But so far it's a good story. I cant wait for the future development of the story. i'll add it to my library. Fighting author-san(σ≧▽≦)σ
Membuka SPOILER So here this shameless author writing her review after completing 75 chapters and I can guarantee one thing it is a mix up every emotions . At first this novel is going to remind you that it is a very normal contractual marriage but it is beyond that. It has supernatural powers, mysteries ,so many supernatural beings, divines and lot more . I can say it won't bore u ..
So this is a really good read. At first i though it was another generic marriage novel but naw it pretty good the buildup to the marriage ceremony was pretty good and the face that the plot was revealed in the title. How To End This Marriage so I'm actually anticipating everything going sideways for this girl which i really like. I definitely suggest people give it a read.
The writing quality and the development of the story are top-notch, neither too fast nor too slow just the perfect pace. It will surely be great to read, I'll be waiting for it to update more.
Plot is interesting... the story development is good, it slowly appears to its own path. Character design is good as well. WAITING FOR the next update. just thora check karo first few chapters... [img=recommend]
Reading all the updated chapters I came to know why it had mystery genre as well. The starting gave me the vibe of breaking a girls feelings toward her first love but than again the way it has portrayed that she died when no one around really put so much mystery. So many questions take place. Like where was the husband? Why the entire mention was Eempty? Why he get angry over his parents death? So much questions. I will wait to see the mystery unfolds.
Membuka SPOILER
Frankly, the book is written well, there are grammatical mistakes though. I feel that at some places the story isn’t clear, like where she is interacting with the lunar god and the sword. Also, I find the character of FL irritating because she is just shouting at people, gods etc. I understand that she has been through a lot but still, does only shouting help?