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You had a good concept something that no one has ever used on this page with over 1000 stories. but to ruin it by stuffing useless wishes into it, a sheer nonsense development of basic shonen, out of canon for 80 years anyway
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From the first time I read it, I loved this story. I hope to continue, and hopefully remain consistent in writing this story until it's finished.
I read chapter 1 trash wishes and I got a feeling this novel the mc going to have oc haram no Risa no Akeno no Asia no Graffia the Aaruth so stupid made the mc Graffia son and that coward dad Bruh 3 stars u lucky its not 1
Unfortunately this is an edgy self-insert to help the author cope. Nothing wrong with that per-say, just makes for a terrible read in my opinion.
You had a good concept something that no one has ever used on this page with over 1000 stories. but to ruin it by stuffing useless wishes into it, a sheer nonsense development of basic shonen, out of canon for 80 years anyway
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
From the first time I read it, I loved this story. I hope to continue, and hopefully remain consistent in writing this story until it's finished.
I read chapter 1 trash wishes and I got a feeling this novel the mc going to have oc haram no Risa no Akeno no Asia no Graffia the Aaruth so stupid made the mc Graffia son and that coward dad Bruh 3 stars u lucky its not 1
Unfortunately this is an edgy self-insert to help the author cope. Nothing wrong with that per-say, just makes for a terrible read in my opinion.