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I've finally completed the 100th chapter of my novel. I never imagined I could accomplish it, to be honest. I do not want to give another review, but I want to thanks all of you. I'd like to thank every single reader, no matter where you are in the world. I hope that all my readers find happiness and peace in their lives. We all come from different places, yet we're united by one story. As a writer, I've always wanted to create a story that unites people. I haven't fully achieved this dream yet, but I hope to do so in the not-so-distant future, right here in the same timeline where we all exist, without delving into alternate realities. Thank you all, each and every reader. Whether you like or dislike my novel, even if you hate it, the fact that you've read it is an honor I deeply appreciate. With every review and comment from you, I continuously strive to improve myself. Thank you, once again, for everything.
I have seen 25 chapters and I am really enjoying the story so farā¤ļø good luck author
I came here expecting a Rimuru-like level up considering he has a gluttony skill as well as being a Bat. I was expecting a Bat who'd later become a vampire with his own domain, but what did I get?Stupid talks about some randoms idiots I'll forget in a few seconds if I even bothered to read their conversations. Oh well, this ain for me.
The world and plot of the story is fun but I canāt give too much credit there since it is very easily āinfluencedā by other similar novels (virtually 10% of Webnovel alone follows similar plot lines). The problem for me was that the first 5 chapters were practically from an entirely different book. The author has spoken about their favorite books and what they were going for but needs a completely different start to the book for the characters to make sense. They clearly want to go the comedy route like the slime novels but completely missed the aspects of that series that allowed the comedy to make sense. Iām slime, the mc was a burnt out salaryman that had heroic tendencies but was an Everyman thrust into a magical world. This novelās mc shouldnāt get to have the same silliness and lack of purpose and urgency that made the slime succeed as a comedy. In addition to the problems in establishing the personality of the mc, the author also completely dropped the ball on transitioning the mcās personality and you can see two completely different characters speaking from chapter 5 to chapter 6. No explanation about the extreme comedy approach out of nowhere. One chapter he is extremely upset and confused about his new life and the next he is acting like killing people is his second favorite pastime? (Literally used the words āhuman juiceā when describing blood) Overall I think that the author had an idea for a comedy but got their genres confused and was not experienced enough to figure out how to make everything make sense. I can tell they made great strides in improving their grammar and syntax based on earlier reviews but that is only the absolute basics required to write something. Hopefully their next novel will include a more consistent point of view as an author once their writing ability and artistic visions are more solidified.
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Awesome character development at the perfect pace. The comedic relief adds to the storyline's uniqueness. a great read
Very good idea but every time the main character levels up the author, throw something in he dies who is levels something negative happens, and then all this is happening in repetition while dealing with a an unbelievably annoying system so my voice donāt waste your time
The premise is interesting, most of it isn't too bad but the author seems to not really understand nobility and royalty very well. Also, MC and many of the characters in general are a bit too mentally unstable and there are quite a few mistakes in the writing. There seems to be more mistakes towards the very beginning and then there's less as the story progresses but it's generally not the easiest read.It certainly feels like one of the first few novels of a young author.To the author of this novel, I wish you the best of luck but sadly I won't be reading on beyond the free chapters as it's a bit too difficult for me to enjoy it.
It's a good read. I really like the story and the author's writing style. I hope that the author won't quit and keep on releasing new chaps until the story is completed...
at this moment I realized that I needed to give it up, he evolved for a week, and when he woke up, the comrades of the dead man came and checked if he was breathing, A WEEK LATER, I am amazed at the stupid mistakes the author made at the very beginning of the novel, Iām afraid of what will happen next, so I skip it
it is one thing for the grammar of a novel to be bad, but the synopsis??? literally the first piece of material I read about your work and grammar is already horrible. please use grammarly, it's not hard
love this novel, the new take on reincarnation is good. expecting regular updates and hope the author doesn't drop it.
Interesting and fresh plot. I personally don't like the name Bong Junšš. Also the dialogues need some improvement. Steady updates and nice vocabulary
Review from Author: I'd like to say a few words about the Main Character. The Main Character is not what you guys might be thinking. There is character development, but it's more like a transformation rather than a traditional development. In the beginning, you will find that he is more like a friendly monster. However, when he acquires the new skill, Mimic, his personality undergoes a significant change. Why does it change? I've also written about this.
Membuka SPOILER I've finally completed the 100th chapter of my novel. I never imagined I could accomplish it, to be honest. I do not want to give another review, but I want to thanks all of you. I'd like to thank every single reader, no matter where you are in the world. I hope that all my readers find happiness and peace in their lives. We all come from different places, yet we're united by one story. As a writer, I've always wanted to create a story that unites people. I haven't fully achieved this dream yet, but I hope to do so in the not-so-distant future, right here in the same timeline where we all exist, without delving into alternate realities. Thank you all, each and every reader. Whether you like or dislike my novel, even if you hate it, the fact that you've read it is an honor I deeply appreciate. With every review and comment from you, I continuously strive to improve myself. Thank you, once again, for everything.
I have seen 25 chapters and I am really enjoying the story so farā¤ļø good luck author
I came here expecting a Rimuru-like level up considering he has a gluttony skill as well as being a Bat. I was expecting a Bat who'd later become a vampire with his own domain, but what did I get?Stupid talks about some randoms idiots I'll forget in a few seconds if I even bothered to read their conversations. Oh well, this ain for me.
The world and plot of the story is fun but I canāt give too much credit there since it is very easily āinfluencedā by other similar novels (virtually 10% of Webnovel alone follows similar plot lines). The problem for me was that the first 5 chapters were practically from an entirely different book. The author has spoken about their favorite books and what they were going for but needs a completely different start to the book for the characters to make sense. They clearly want to go the comedy route like the slime novels but completely missed the aspects of that series that allowed the comedy to make sense. Iām slime, the mc was a burnt out salaryman that had heroic tendencies but was an Everyman thrust into a magical world. This novelās mc shouldnāt get to have the same silliness and lack of purpose and urgency that made the slime succeed as a comedy. In addition to the problems in establishing the personality of the mc, the author also completely dropped the ball on transitioning the mcās personality and you can see two completely different characters speaking from chapter 5 to chapter 6. No explanation about the extreme comedy approach out of nowhere. One chapter he is extremely upset and confused about his new life and the next he is acting like killing people is his second favorite pastime? (Literally used the words āhuman juiceā when describing blood) Overall I think that the author had an idea for a comedy but got their genres confused and was not experienced enough to figure out how to make everything make sense. I can tell they made great strides in improving their grammar and syntax based on earlier reviews but that is only the absolute basics required to write something. Hopefully their next novel will include a more consistent point of view as an author once their writing ability and artistic visions are more solidified.
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Awesome character development at the perfect pace. The comedic relief adds to the storyline's uniqueness. a great read
Very good idea but every time the main character levels up the author, throw something in he dies who is levels something negative happens, and then all this is happening in repetition while dealing with a an unbelievably annoying system so my voice donāt waste your time
The premise is interesting, most of it isn't too bad but the author seems to not really understand nobility and royalty very well. Also, MC and many of the characters in general are a bit too mentally unstable and there are quite a few mistakes in the writing. There seems to be more mistakes towards the very beginning and then there's less as the story progresses but it's generally not the easiest read.It certainly feels like one of the first few novels of a young author.To the author of this novel, I wish you the best of luck but sadly I won't be reading on beyond the free chapters as it's a bit too difficult for me to enjoy it.
It's a good read. I really like the story and the author's writing style. I hope that the author won't quit and keep on releasing new chaps until the story is completed...
at this moment I realized that I needed to give it up, he evolved for a week, and when he woke up, the comrades of the dead man came and checked if he was breathing, A WEEK LATER, I am amazed at the stupid mistakes the author made at the very beginning of the novel, Iām afraid of what will happen next, so I skip it
it is one thing for the grammar of a novel to be bad, but the synopsis??? literally the first piece of material I read about your work and grammar is already horrible. please use grammarly, it's not hard
love this novel, the new take on reincarnation is good. expecting regular updates and hope the author doesn't drop it.
Interesting and fresh plot. I personally don't like the name Bong Junšš. Also the dialogues need some improvement. Steady updates and nice vocabulary
Review from Author: I'd like to say a few words about the Main Character. The Main Character is not what you guys might be thinking. There is character development, but it's more like a transformation rather than a traditional development. In the beginning, you will find that he is more like a friendly monster. However, when he acquires the new skill, Mimic, his personality undergoes a significant change. Why does it change? I've also written about this.
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