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G why is the mc always a r a p e victim loser and out of nowhere he gets this op undeserved power to then go on to be a hero so people love him or be a r a p e victim turned psycho killing for the sake of killing Im not saying this another one of does cases but the summary sure doesn’t do it any favors
That was Crazy! I totally got hooked up by the unique story. as an addition also, the synopsis had a very descriptive idea that will make the readers interested and plus the beauty of your cover.
Yes, a story plot I have been looking forward too. It is really good if you ask me just that your synopsis gives the entire story away. Aside that, it is a good story, kudos author!
Although the Synopsis give all the information of how the novel is it is still a well paced book very interesting plot love the characters it's enjoyable hope to see more
There is a lot going on there and honestly, I find it difficult to read first povs and this one here, got me panicking from the first chapter. It got me too immersed and that's a good sign. Hoping for less trauma though but everything is fine. Looking forward to more from you and a happy ending for our caster.
I had mixed views on the novel it started off good because i was liking the writing and how the author allowed it to flow but it got redundant after a while. but if you could get past that its a lovely story.
The story is a good one, especially the narrative and its immersive ambiance. There are close to minimal in its mistakes and was a good read. With more chaps, I know it will explode! Keep it up and have a good day!
This is the first-ever review of this book(I am glad to have that honor). Not going to lie, your synopsis is already intriguing, so I would guess this book will pick up within the next year if you keep writing. I only read three chapters, and I could see much potential from each of the chapters. I am not a fan of big chapters or big paragraphs, so I would say you could try to make the chapters or the paragraphs smaller(not more than 2k words). There is some hardcore stuff going on, and the MC is not your typical hero, all of his traits show signs of anti-hero, from being troubled and over-swearing, and not trying to put himself in danger to save people. Though the author has some trouble with active and passive voice, I would say this is an awesome novel. Kudos to you, author, keep writing [img=recommend].
After carefully considering and reading this book, I realized what I should address.. . . . But before that, you should give it a try. It is a very good story with a promising plot..... . The first and very important question: Is it a harem? To truthfully answer that, no. While there are instances where the main character interacts with female supporting characters, it might seem like this is headed towards a harem, but believe me, it's not... . . . . N Now, the second question: Will there be romance? That's a rather complicated answer. To put it simply, yes, there will be But for side character . the main character, romance will be mostly absent, and he will have a very good relationship with a supporting female lead, like a bromance...... ..,.. . Now, a rather important question and my confession:..... .. ... Guys, it's about writing. The initial chapters are written in 1 POV and have a dark-tone narration because our MC was suffering from a dark phase of his life, not a real dark phase, but its after-effects....... . . ... .. Now, in later volumes, when he comes out from his dark phase, these chapters are written in 3 POVs. These chapters are lighter in tone, with comedy blended into them... ?.. .. . ... . Another important note: throughout the story, you'll discover changes in the narration style. That's because I am a newbie and have been learning new ways to write. So you'll notice changes in style from time to time as I am learning to write better chapters day by day.. . . . . And yeah, English is like my third language.
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G why is the mc always a r a p e victim loser and out of nowhere he gets this op undeserved power to then go on to be a hero so people love him or be a r a p e victim turned psycho killing for the sake of killing Im not saying this another one of does cases but the summary sure doesn’t do it any favors
That was Crazy! I totally got hooked up by the unique story. as an addition also, the synopsis had a very descriptive idea that will make the readers interested and plus the beauty of your cover.
Yes, a story plot I have been looking forward too. It is really good if you ask me just that your synopsis gives the entire story away. Aside that, it is a good story, kudos author!
Although the Synopsis give all the information of how the novel is it is still a well paced book very interesting plot love the characters it's enjoyable hope to see more
There is a lot going on there and honestly, I find it difficult to read first povs and this one here, got me panicking from the first chapter. It got me too immersed and that's a good sign. Hoping for less trauma though but everything is fine. Looking forward to more from you and a happy ending for our caster.
I had mixed views on the novel it started off good because i was liking the writing and how the author allowed it to flow but it got redundant after a while. but if you could get past that its a lovely story.
The story is a good one, especially the narrative and its immersive ambiance. There are close to minimal in its mistakes and was a good read. With more chaps, I know it will explode! Keep it up and have a good day!
This is the first-ever review of this book(I am glad to have that honor). Not going to lie, your synopsis is already intriguing, so I would guess this book will pick up within the next year if you keep writing. I only read three chapters, and I could see much potential from each of the chapters. I am not a fan of big chapters or big paragraphs, so I would say you could try to make the chapters or the paragraphs smaller(not more than 2k words). There is some hardcore stuff going on, and the MC is not your typical hero, all of his traits show signs of anti-hero, from being troubled and over-swearing, and not trying to put himself in danger to save people. Though the author has some trouble with active and passive voice, I would say this is an awesome novel. Kudos to you, author, keep writing [img=recommend].
After carefully considering and reading this book, I realized what I should address.. . . . But before that, you should give it a try. It is a very good story with a promising plot..... . The first and very important question: Is it a harem? To truthfully answer that, no. While there are instances where the main character interacts with female supporting characters, it might seem like this is headed towards a harem, but believe me, it's not... . . . . N Now, the second question: Will there be romance? That's a rather complicated answer. To put it simply, yes, there will be But for side character . the main character, romance will be mostly absent, and he will have a very good relationship with a supporting female lead, like a bromance...... ..,.. . Now, a rather important question and my confession:..... .. ... Guys, it's about writing. The initial chapters are written in 1 POV and have a dark-tone narration because our MC was suffering from a dark phase of his life, not a real dark phase, but its after-effects....... . . ... .. Now, in later volumes, when he comes out from his dark phase, these chapters are written in 3 POVs. These chapters are lighter in tone, with comedy blended into them... ?.. .. . ... . Another important note: throughout the story, you'll discover changes in the narration style. That's because I am a newbie and have been learning new ways to write. So you'll notice changes in style from time to time as I am learning to write better chapters day by day.. . . . . And yeah, English is like my third language.