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So far I'm really enjoying this book, please do not stop. I can only speak from my own perspective, but the storyline and characters are well developed. The story isn't over the top in any one direction, which gives it a nice balance. The POV chapters add a good amount of depth to both main and side characters. [img=More pls] Keep up the good work!
I will once again shamelessly drop a plug for this book. It is a well developed story, and a fun one. It's got world building, character development and a whole host of good plot and story points. It goes slow for story telling one moment and then drops you into a fight club the next. If you haven't read it yet I highly recommend giving it a chance.
The first 300 chapters are ok. There were everything I expected and more, character backstory and flaws, interesting wordldbuilding, mythology, a little bit sad that Aria (merc ai) is gone tho. The only thing that irks me is that LLC workers likes their jobs today bec pay is good but tomorrow they are at a strike? bec Limitless is a slave master? I mean, I get it! Limitless is working them too hard almost to the bones. But all this event takes place in what 2-3 days!!! It would make sense if was like months! Currently I'm pausing at chapter 313. It feels too stupid to read further for now, but will resume after few days. Book got good potential so it feels wrong to drop it.
Only problem is when he talks to the main heroine task it just feels like too much and I feel like the story is not progressing. Besides that most of the best moments for me was when the main heroines weren't there from the talks with specters to the first mercenary missions. The only thing I liked about the heroines was when they gave him upgrades pretty much cause most of the dialogue between them is darling this darling that and theb making a scene which made me want to skip 90% of chapters they were on as I felt the plot didnt progress. Its not that they dont deserve character developement but I dont like their interactions personally, prefer his interactions with the 2nd amendment squad more. The action scenes are amazing tho and the story and world building I like alot even the characters aside from the main heroines.
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Congratulations on achieving a 1000 chapter mark author. Keep Up The Good Work!!
SOUTHPOLE 5EYES HACKING AND RECOVERY SAVED MY LIFE (southpole5eyeshackingandrecoveringcompany.com). My name is Jeff La Prova and I am from Milan, Italy. I want to share my story to help others who, like me, have suffered from a scam. A few years ago, I was the victim of a scam so devastating that it almost destroyed my life. It all started with a young woman who claimed to be a soldier serving in Syria and Afghanistan. She seemed brave, honest, and compassionate. I trusted her. Over time, our bond grew and I fell deeply in love. So much so that I shared my Facebook password with her, thinking it was a gesture of trust. Little did I know that she would use this trust to take control of my account. She convinced me to sell my house and send her all the money, promising me a new house, car, and a future together. For two years, I believed her promises, sacrificing everything I had. But one day, she vanished, like smoke in the wind. When I realized I had been scammed, I was devastated. My heart was broken, my finances were ruined, and my faith in humanity was completely gone. I was so bitter and broken that I couldn’t even look at women the same way anymore. I thought my life was over. Then, one day, I came across a review about Southpole 5Eyes Hacking and Recovery Company. I was skeptical at first. I had already been scammed once and the idea of trusting someone else seemed impossible. But something inside me told me to give them a chance. Desperation can take you to places you would never consider. I approached them hesitantly, not expecting much. But to my surprise, their team was professional, empathetic, and highly knowledgeable. They assured me that they could get my money back, and even though I was full of doubts, I decided to trust them. By the end of September, they kept their promise. They got a significant portion of my lost money back. Even though the scammer had already spent part of it, getting even half of it back was a miracle. Half a loaf is better than nothing, as they say. Today I am sharing my story to encourage others like me. If you have been scammed, do not lose hope. Contact Southpole 5Eyes Hacking and Recovery. They gave me my life back when I thought everything was lost. They are reliable, trustworthy and persistent in their mission to help victims of online scams. Be patient and believe in the process. I can assure you that they will fight for you. I am living proof that recovery is possible and because of them, I have started to rebuild my life. Don't let scammers win. Do as I did. Contact Southpole 5Eyes and take back what is yours. #ScamAlert #ScamAwareness #OnlineScams #FraudRecovery #StopScamers #EthicalHackers #InformationSecurity #HackingServices #OnlineFraud #AntiScam #FinancialScams #CyberCrime #ScamVictim #FraudPrevention #MoneyRecovery #HackingAssistance #DigitalFraud #DataRecovery #ScamSupport #ProtectionFromScamers #LostMoneyRecovery #StopScams #OnlineSecurity #EthicalHacking #ScamHunters #FraudDetection #FraudAlert #FinancialFraud #CyberAttack #ScamRecovery #HackerSupport #DigitalFraud #FraudulentScams #ScamReporting #IdentityTheft #InternetScams #HackerCommunity #ScamPrevention #HackingSolutions #OnlineFraud #MoneyRecovery #CyberHackers #ProfessionalEthicalHackers #RecoveryExperts #FraudAssistance #FraudProtection #AntiFraud #TotalOnlineSecurity #DigitalFraud #OnlineFraudHelp #DefenseFromScams #StopCyberFraud #CyberHelp #EthicalHackingSupport #AntiFraudIntervention #RecoveryAgainstScams #DigitalFraudSupport #AntiFraudCampaign #EthicalHackingSupport #ScamCrisis #OnlineFraudAssistance #FraudSolutions #LostMoneyRecovery #HackerForRecovery #OnlineFraudAlert #HackedAccount #InternetSecurity #HackingExperts #OnlineFraudAssistance #FinancialRecovery #FraudWarning #CyberHelp #ScamAlarm #FraudRecoveryExperts #ScamAlert #CyberHackingSupport #RecoveryAssistance #EthicalHackerTeam #SecurityExperts #FraudSchemes #FightingScams #ProfessionalHackingSupport #CyberSecure #OnlineFraudDetection #ScamAwareness #FinancialFraud #CyberFraud #EthicalHackingTeam #FraudRecoveryExperts #FraudScams #SecurityFraud #AntiScamSupport
4+4+4+4+3/5=3.8 honestly a great novel and great writing. but the yanedere sides come out of no where. which should be on me considering the author likes to write about yanedere chicks. however I don't like the change. the mc develops his force. then his girls come and brutally attack the force with reasonable motives given the circumstances but it completely shifts the dynamic from one of following inspirational figures, being potentially blind to insider threats, to now having boarded the pirate ship and trying to keep the abuse experienced to a minimum. I still believe a majority here will like this and probably not see or be caught up in what i was. so many should still enjoy this. but myself? meowout
Honestly, an amazing action story and harem story that was most funny and serious very interesting. Can’t wait for more chapters of this.
Okay I haven’t read the book but for the synopsis and comments I know the book is going to be lit 🔥 🔥🔥🔥, And when I start I am going to make a second review on how good this book is
Great so far the world building is very unique and interesting the main character kicks butt and the battle is awesome
Officer: Sir, his coms are still on, do we remind him? Higher-ups: no. let him cook! Limitless: I'M STILL STANDING BETTER THAN I EVER DID, LOOKING LIKE A TRUE SURVIVOR, FEELING LIKE A LITTLE KID!~ 🎶🎶🎶
This is gem, at first for me its hard to understand as English is not my mother language and about all American jokes i completely clueless, you need give a shot till 30-50 chapter it gets so much better, the best part is world background in this novel is solid, and the mc is not common like other, harem but not a simp, ruthless and completely rule breaker. The powers here is born by strong desire after death in shape of regrets, but what if that desire is in shape of hope, i hope mc realize it by revealing the existence of revenants to the world and make them heroes that everyone want to be, and birth more of them by hope not regret
have been enjoying this story thoroughly, pacing is not too fast nor too slow, characters seem fleshed out and can get a real sense of the world from the events they have been described
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This story well deserving of the editor's choice features that it got recently. The world building is great and the pacing of the story is very good.
I really really like this book so far!! Its one of the cooler book I have read but there is 1 thing that kinda bugs me is Y is the MC not taking just women??? I mean would any guy want to drink another guys blood or kiss him to get his (fates) no they would NOT so y have guys in the group??? Im still in the beginning of the book but I really really hope that none of the girls die even though this is a book about death I really really hope that all the girls live and they all stay/be with the MC this way they can be there own family!!
1 - References about countries, like Brazil, shape a bit about how your characters act and think. 2 - Intelligent Dialogues, as your characters are conceived from a point of view, they are concrete, they have a way of thinking and speaking based on their past, the place they live, etc. 3 - Good Premise, I really enjoy books about the apocalypse and yours presents a unique take that I hadn’t read about before. There are some similar ones, but not exactly the same. It has everything to be a great story intertwining the present day with the hell gate. 4 - Emotion and fantasy, I really liked how you make your readers want to read the next chapter and then the next, because you really want to know how the book continues, you keep wondering how the MC will get out of this situation, or what he will do, and what you would do if you were in his place, often you can't find a better way to do what the MC did, which is great, it means there’s someone thinking behind the plot. 5 - Book made for adults, and lastly, it’s a book that is not meant for children or teenagers, with comedies in situations that would never fit in real life, many animes and light novels are like that, like One Piece for example. There is blood, death, and cruelty where it normally should be in real life, or at least if we were in that situation, I haven't seen if there's 18+ content, but I hope it does, as it really is part of life.
I love the main story and the actions the battle scenes are amazing The fun service are all right but it can be improved over all this book is focused on the main story and I love it only small amount of fun service which is good not not unlike those other books
I liked it a lot at first i thought it was intresting, with a lot of potential. However when the mc started taking needless risk, and didn't care about anything including living or dying as long as it was on his terms. I started to feel likethewtory was contradicting itself. At first hei s really mad at himself for dying even though it was his choice to interfere with the lady he saved. Hoever now he doesn't care if lives or dies as long as it's on his terms. I mean hejustgot another chance it feels so foolish to just throw it away because hes cocky and reckless.
I'm surprised that this story was hidden on webnovel for so long. Compared to 99% of novels here this book is better in every aspect, it's original, characters and background are interesting as well as writing quality, which doesn't have mistakes for a not focused eye. Considering how the book started some insanity in characters isn't bad, though sometimes sudden over-cringe moments happen, even then they are short so it's not a big problem. I'm happy that i clicked onto the recommendation(or whatever it was) picture when i opened the app. Let's just say that {fate} brought me here xD
The main character, John Smith, is reborn with an incredible power that makes him super strong but still believable. The female characters are really well-written, and their relationships with John feel genuine. In just two weeks of the story's timeline, the plot covers over 500 chapters and stays exciting throughout. This webnovel is perfect if you love a mix of action and fantasy with great character development. Highly recommend!
I really like this book and hope it sticks around for the long run. I have to hand it to the author hes really creative with the MC abilities
You can see the care and effort put into this novel. This has become my favourite novel in this app. Apart from the harem setting, nothing in this novel follows your typical stereotypes.
Figured it was time to do a review, since starting this novel I have enjoyed it since the start. The story is amazing combining our worlds history with the new Reaper world and they fit together so nicely. The character development of the Sirens and John is wonderful seeing how they all have changed since the start. Updates very frequently so I don't have to wait long to continue with the story. I absolutely recommend this book, it does take some time to get going and there is a lot of backstory that has to be covered but it is worth reading.
How dare you make a story that plays on my emotions in such a variety of ways! Take my coins and votes you monster... but keep uploading. now this story runs from exciting fights to seeling of sadness in a wild whirlwind to a story highly recommended
Hello, Seeing as I have written this book to over 500 chapters for the last eight months, I feel like I earned the right to give myself another review. (To balance out the two braincell incels who cannot read tags.) Many things have changed since I began writing this for one people actually read it now. But in all seriousness If I were to rate my work it would still be a five. Because of the following reasons. 1. I have uploaded consistently for over 220 days as of this writing. (With multiple mass releases in between) While my Priv is expensive, I believe it is worth the price my readers pay for it. 2. My grasp of flow has vastly compared to what it once was. (So much so looking at my older chapters makes me annoyed.) 3. John and the Seven Sirens are multifaceted characters who I wrote very well. They have fears, dreams, quirks and personalities that give life to them as real people. (Give their character pages some love!) Unlike most harem book. my girls kick A! a lot of it. they are not damsels in distress, and you see how they fall in love with my MC in the Heroine Chapters in their POV. They need John as much as he needs them. and they argue, they fight but they still find their way back to each other. This is what I believe a harem should be. and I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing them. 4. My lore. I am quite proud of how I managed to tie so many different bits of history, mythology and fantasy. together. and like an onion, the readers accompany John as he learns and finds his place in the world. Hard to say anything because I don't want to spoil anything, but many have praised the lore. And if you give it some time, I am sure you will too. 5. Finally, the love and dedication I have given this book. With over 650,000 words as of this writing. Suffice to say I have written a lot. This book earned peanuts during the first 6 months (Missed my first MGS). However, I felt that even if it did not earn anything I wanted to finish it. I already dropped two books prior to this. The first one no one read, the second because the book died when I got covid. I wanted this book to be different. Quality wise, my work has a high standard. Unlike most authors my status screens are small. I also actively try to make them even smaller. I do not waste chapters on needless things. Each side character, each event are all part of the overarching story. Meaning of the 500 chapters up to this point. I am proud to say I do not have even one filler chapter. Each chapter is written to drive the plot forward. Apart from the research needed, each chapter needs about 2 hours. so, you can only guess how long the 500 chapters took. For reference, for my honeymoon (Smut) volume Elysium. I needed to research over 2 days before I wrote a single word. Quite happy with how it came out. Need to wrap this up. But yeah. this book is awesome. the characters are flawed, relatable and show us how even in the depths of hell, hope and joy can exist. If this work has given you some nuggets of wisdom. if it made you chuckle as the characters bond with one another. if it made your blood rush as you wondered what would happen next. Please support it. I offer all my work for Limitless to my God in heaven, to Jesus Christ my king. to whom without, I would not have been able to endure the hardship to continue writing this book. And to everyone who has supported Limitless but has stopped, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wish for you people all the happiness in the world. To those that read and found my work boring. Thank you for your time. I hope you find a book that brings you joy. Finally, to the readers who support the work and join me in each chapter. Thank you all. Buckle in your seats and prepare for an epic Journey. Kiss your harem in love, and lock and load. Because I promise you this. by the time Limitless has concluded. it would be a journey unlike any other. May your fate, end the darkness.
So far I'm really enjoying this book, please do not stop. I can only speak from my own perspective, but the storyline and characters are well developed. The story isn't over the top in any one direction, which gives it a nice balance. The POV chapters add a good amount of depth to both main and side characters. [img=More pls] Keep up the good work!
I will once again shamelessly drop a plug for this book. It is a well developed story, and a fun one. It's got world building, character development and a whole host of good plot and story points. It goes slow for story telling one moment and then drops you into a fight club the next. If you haven't read it yet I highly recommend giving it a chance.
The first 300 chapters are ok. There were everything I expected and more, character backstory and flaws, interesting wordldbuilding, mythology, a little bit sad that Aria (merc ai) is gone tho. The only thing that irks me is that LLC workers likes their jobs today bec pay is good but tomorrow they are at a strike? bec Limitless is a slave master? I mean, I get it! Limitless is working them too hard almost to the bones. But all this event takes place in what 2-3 days!!! It would make sense if was like months! Currently I'm pausing at chapter 313. It feels too stupid to read further for now, but will resume after few days. Book got good potential so it feels wrong to drop it.
Only problem is when he talks to the main heroine task it just feels like too much and I feel like the story is not progressing. Besides that most of the best moments for me was when the main heroines weren't there from the talks with specters to the first mercenary missions. The only thing I liked about the heroines was when they gave him upgrades pretty much cause most of the dialogue between them is darling this darling that and theb making a scene which made me want to skip 90% of chapters they were on as I felt the plot didnt progress. Its not that they dont deserve character developement but I dont like their interactions personally, prefer his interactions with the 2nd amendment squad more. The action scenes are amazing tho and the story and world building I like alot even the characters aside from the main heroines.
Membuka SPOILER Congratulations on achieving a 1000 chapter mark author. Keep Up The Good Work!!
SOUTHPOLE 5EYES HACKING AND RECOVERY SAVED MY LIFE (southpole5eyeshackingandrecoveringcompany.com). My name is Jeff La Prova and I am from Milan, Italy. I want to share my story to help others who, like me, have suffered from a scam. A few years ago, I was the victim of a scam so devastating that it almost destroyed my life. It all started with a young woman who claimed to be a soldier serving in Syria and Afghanistan. She seemed brave, honest, and compassionate. I trusted her. Over time, our bond grew and I fell deeply in love. So much so that I shared my Facebook password with her, thinking it was a gesture of trust. Little did I know that she would use this trust to take control of my account. She convinced me to sell my house and send her all the money, promising me a new house, car, and a future together. For two years, I believed her promises, sacrificing everything I had. But one day, she vanished, like smoke in the wind. When I realized I had been scammed, I was devastated. My heart was broken, my finances were ruined, and my faith in humanity was completely gone. I was so bitter and broken that I couldn’t even look at women the same way anymore. I thought my life was over. Then, one day, I came across a review about Southpole 5Eyes Hacking and Recovery Company. I was skeptical at first. I had already been scammed once and the idea of trusting someone else seemed impossible. But something inside me told me to give them a chance. Desperation can take you to places you would never consider. I approached them hesitantly, not expecting much. But to my surprise, their team was professional, empathetic, and highly knowledgeable. They assured me that they could get my money back, and even though I was full of doubts, I decided to trust them. By the end of September, they kept their promise. They got a significant portion of my lost money back. Even though the scammer had already spent part of it, getting even half of it back was a miracle. Half a loaf is better than nothing, as they say. Today I am sharing my story to encourage others like me. If you have been scammed, do not lose hope. Contact Southpole 5Eyes Hacking and Recovery. They gave me my life back when I thought everything was lost. They are reliable, trustworthy and persistent in their mission to help victims of online scams. Be patient and believe in the process. I can assure you that they will fight for you. I am living proof that recovery is possible and because of them, I have started to rebuild my life. Don't let scammers win. Do as I did. Contact Southpole 5Eyes and take back what is yours. #ScamAlert #ScamAwareness #OnlineScams #FraudRecovery #StopScamers #EthicalHackers #InformationSecurity #HackingServices #OnlineFraud #AntiScam #FinancialScams #CyberCrime #ScamVictim #FraudPrevention #MoneyRecovery #HackingAssistance #DigitalFraud #DataRecovery #ScamSupport #ProtectionFromScamers #LostMoneyRecovery #StopScams #OnlineSecurity #EthicalHacking #ScamHunters #FraudDetection #FraudAlert #FinancialFraud #CyberAttack #ScamRecovery #HackerSupport #DigitalFraud #FraudulentScams #ScamReporting #IdentityTheft #InternetScams #HackerCommunity #ScamPrevention #HackingSolutions #OnlineFraud #MoneyRecovery #CyberHackers #ProfessionalEthicalHackers #RecoveryExperts #FraudAssistance #FraudProtection #AntiFraud #TotalOnlineSecurity #DigitalFraud #OnlineFraudHelp #DefenseFromScams #StopCyberFraud #CyberHelp #EthicalHackingSupport #AntiFraudIntervention #RecoveryAgainstScams #DigitalFraudSupport #AntiFraudCampaign #EthicalHackingSupport #ScamCrisis #OnlineFraudAssistance #FraudSolutions #LostMoneyRecovery #HackerForRecovery #OnlineFraudAlert #HackedAccount #InternetSecurity #HackingExperts #OnlineFraudAssistance #FinancialRecovery #FraudWarning #CyberHelp #ScamAlarm #FraudRecoveryExperts #ScamAlert #CyberHackingSupport #RecoveryAssistance #EthicalHackerTeam #SecurityExperts #FraudSchemes #FightingScams #ProfessionalHackingSupport #CyberSecure #OnlineFraudDetection #ScamAwareness #FinancialFraud #CyberFraud #EthicalHackingTeam #FraudRecoveryExperts #FraudScams #SecurityFraud #AntiScamSupport
4+4+4+4+3/5=3.8 honestly a great novel and great writing. but the yanedere sides come out of no where. which should be on me considering the author likes to write about yanedere chicks. however I don't like the change. the mc develops his force. then his girls come and brutally attack the force with reasonable motives given the circumstances but it completely shifts the dynamic from one of following inspirational figures, being potentially blind to insider threats, to now having boarded the pirate ship and trying to keep the abuse experienced to a minimum. I still believe a majority here will like this and probably not see or be caught up in what i was. so many should still enjoy this. but myself? meowout
Honestly, an amazing action story and harem story that was most funny and serious very interesting. Can’t wait for more chapters of this.
Okay I haven’t read the book but for the synopsis and comments I know the book is going to be lit 🔥 🔥🔥🔥, And when I start I am going to make a second review on how good this book is
Great so far the world building is very unique and interesting the main character kicks butt and the battle is awesome
Officer: Sir, his coms are still on, do we remind him? Higher-ups: no. let him cook! Limitless: I'M STILL STANDING BETTER THAN I EVER DID, LOOKING LIKE A TRUE SURVIVOR, FEELING LIKE A LITTLE KID!~ 🎶🎶🎶
This is gem, at first for me its hard to understand as English is not my mother language and about all American jokes i completely clueless, you need give a shot till 30-50 chapter it gets so much better, the best part is world background in this novel is solid, and the mc is not common like other, harem but not a simp, ruthless and completely rule breaker. The powers here is born by strong desire after death in shape of regrets, but what if that desire is in shape of hope, i hope mc realize it by revealing the existence of revenants to the world and make them heroes that everyone want to be, and birth more of them by hope not regret
have been enjoying this story thoroughly, pacing is not too fast nor too slow, characters seem fleshed out and can get a real sense of the world from the events they have been described
Membuka SPOILER This story well deserving of the editor's choice features that it got recently. The world building is great and the pacing of the story is very good.
I really really like this book so far!! Its one of the cooler book I have read but there is 1 thing that kinda bugs me is Y is the MC not taking just women??? I mean would any guy want to drink another guys blood or kiss him to get his (fates) no they would NOT so y have guys in the group??? Im still in the beginning of the book but I really really hope that none of the girls die even though this is a book about death I really really hope that all the girls live and they all stay/be with the MC this way they can be there own family!!
1 - References about countries, like Brazil, shape a bit about how your characters act and think. 2 - Intelligent Dialogues, as your characters are conceived from a point of view, they are concrete, they have a way of thinking and speaking based on their past, the place they live, etc. 3 - Good Premise, I really enjoy books about the apocalypse and yours presents a unique take that I hadn’t read about before. There are some similar ones, but not exactly the same. It has everything to be a great story intertwining the present day with the hell gate. 4 - Emotion and fantasy, I really liked how you make your readers want to read the next chapter and then the next, because you really want to know how the book continues, you keep wondering how the MC will get out of this situation, or what he will do, and what you would do if you were in his place, often you can't find a better way to do what the MC did, which is great, it means there’s someone thinking behind the plot. 5 - Book made for adults, and lastly, it’s a book that is not meant for children or teenagers, with comedies in situations that would never fit in real life, many animes and light novels are like that, like One Piece for example. There is blood, death, and cruelty where it normally should be in real life, or at least if we were in that situation, I haven't seen if there's 18+ content, but I hope it does, as it really is part of life.
I love the main story and the actions the battle scenes are amazing The fun service are all right but it can be improved over all this book is focused on the main story and I love it only small amount of fun service which is good not not unlike those other books
I liked it a lot at first i thought it was intresting, with a lot of potential. However when the mc started taking needless risk, and didn't care about anything including living or dying as long as it was on his terms. I started to feel likethewtory was contradicting itself. At first hei s really mad at himself for dying even though it was his choice to interfere with the lady he saved. Hoever now he doesn't care if lives or dies as long as it's on his terms. I mean hejustgot another chance it feels so foolish to just throw it away because hes cocky and reckless.
I'm surprised that this story was hidden on webnovel for so long. Compared to 99% of novels here this book is better in every aspect, it's original, characters and background are interesting as well as writing quality, which doesn't have mistakes for a not focused eye. Considering how the book started some insanity in characters isn't bad, though sometimes sudden over-cringe moments happen, even then they are short so it's not a big problem. I'm happy that i clicked onto the recommendation(or whatever it was) picture when i opened the app. Let's just say that {fate} brought me here xD
The main character, John Smith, is reborn with an incredible power that makes him super strong but still believable. The female characters are really well-written, and their relationships with John feel genuine. In just two weeks of the story's timeline, the plot covers over 500 chapters and stays exciting throughout. This webnovel is perfect if you love a mix of action and fantasy with great character development. Highly recommend!
I really like this book and hope it sticks around for the long run. I have to hand it to the author hes really creative with the MC abilities
You can see the care and effort put into this novel. This has become my favourite novel in this app. Apart from the harem setting, nothing in this novel follows your typical stereotypes.
Figured it was time to do a review, since starting this novel I have enjoyed it since the start. The story is amazing combining our worlds history with the new Reaper world and they fit together so nicely. The character development of the Sirens and John is wonderful seeing how they all have changed since the start. Updates very frequently so I don't have to wait long to continue with the story. I absolutely recommend this book, it does take some time to get going and there is a lot of backstory that has to be covered but it is worth reading.
How dare you make a story that plays on my emotions in such a variety of ways! Take my coins and votes you monster... but keep uploading. now this story runs from exciting fights to seeling of sadness in a wild whirlwind to a story highly recommended
Hello, Seeing as I have written this book to over 500 chapters for the last eight months, I feel like I earned the right to give myself another review. (To balance out the two braincell incels who cannot read tags.) Many things have changed since I began writing this for one people actually read it now. But in all seriousness If I were to rate my work it would still be a five. Because of the following reasons. 1. I have uploaded consistently for over 220 days as of this writing. (With multiple mass releases in between) While my Priv is expensive, I believe it is worth the price my readers pay for it. 2. My grasp of flow has vastly compared to what it once was. (So much so looking at my older chapters makes me annoyed.) 3. John and the Seven Sirens are multifaceted characters who I wrote very well. They have fears, dreams, quirks and personalities that give life to them as real people. (Give their character pages some love!) Unlike most harem book. my girls kick A! a lot of it. they are not damsels in distress, and you see how they fall in love with my MC in the Heroine Chapters in their POV. They need John as much as he needs them. and they argue, they fight but they still find their way back to each other. This is what I believe a harem should be. and I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing them. 4. My lore. I am quite proud of how I managed to tie so many different bits of history, mythology and fantasy. together. and like an onion, the readers accompany John as he learns and finds his place in the world. Hard to say anything because I don't want to spoil anything, but many have praised the lore. And if you give it some time, I am sure you will too. 5. Finally, the love and dedication I have given this book. With over 650,000 words as of this writing. Suffice to say I have written a lot. This book earned peanuts during the first 6 months (Missed my first MGS). However, I felt that even if it did not earn anything I wanted to finish it. I already dropped two books prior to this. The first one no one read, the second because the book died when I got covid. I wanted this book to be different. Quality wise, my work has a high standard. Unlike most authors my status screens are small. I also actively try to make them even smaller. I do not waste chapters on needless things. Each side character, each event are all part of the overarching story. Meaning of the 500 chapters up to this point. I am proud to say I do not have even one filler chapter. Each chapter is written to drive the plot forward. Apart from the research needed, each chapter needs about 2 hours. so, you can only guess how long the 500 chapters took. For reference, for my honeymoon (Smut) volume Elysium. I needed to research over 2 days before I wrote a single word. Quite happy with how it came out. Need to wrap this up. But yeah. this book is awesome. the characters are flawed, relatable and show us how even in the depths of hell, hope and joy can exist. If this work has given you some nuggets of wisdom. if it made you chuckle as the characters bond with one another. if it made your blood rush as you wondered what would happen next. Please support it. I offer all my work for Limitless to my God in heaven, to Jesus Christ my king. to whom without, I would not have been able to endure the hardship to continue writing this book. And to everyone who has supported Limitless but has stopped, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wish for you people all the happiness in the world. To those that read and found my work boring. Thank you for your time. I hope you find a book that brings you joy. Finally, to the readers who support the work and join me in each chapter. Thank you all. Buckle in your seats and prepare for an epic Journey. Kiss your harem in love, and lock and load. Because I promise you this. by the time Limitless has concluded. it would be a journey unlike any other. May your fate, end the darkness.