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Hey Author :: Its been a while . How about U Write a New one In Marvel verse ??
Gerçekten çok iyiydi. Kısa sürede okudum. Gerçekten sürükelyic bir olay örgüsüydü. İlk başta onunda diğer salak, kendi kendine boş yere kötü adam diyen ana karakter olacağını sanmıştım ama gerçek bir kötü adamdı. Yazarı çok tebrik ediyorum. Emeklerine sağlık. 🙏🙏
Well... thanks for the chapter, but, author name is? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Fast but good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I'm going to be honest. I can't stand the "villain" mc that doesn't have a reason to be one. But I don't wanna ruin the rating.
It goes for a good AU setting, but then immediately falls apart with plot holes (if his parents dont like arcturus why leave him with him etc.). Could've been good but the author cannot go a full half chapter without randomly dropping a line that shatters the HP worldbuilding and rules. like magic abilities that dont use magic, wands having infinite magic, 2 stones, insane permanent power ups that canonically AU or not should've needed a massive dark ritual from 'putting magic through your arm.'
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It has got a good plot but the way it is written makes it feel rushed and it doesn’t go into very many details.
do you feel the darkness too, child ??:)!! no, I am the darkness[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
The score is surprisingly low, there are 2 factors I value the most here. Evil MC and plot without unnecessary details, in fact, those who have already read several Harry Potter fanfictions will see the same thing in others and it is unpleasant, so I like the way the author acted here, there is a point without water and this is enough.
Hey Author :: Its been a while . How about U Write a New one In Marvel verse ??
Gerçekten çok iyiydi. Kısa sürede okudum. Gerçekten sürükelyic bir olay örgüsüydü. İlk başta onunda diğer salak, kendi kendine boş yere kötü adam diyen ana karakter olacağını sanmıştım ama gerçek bir kötü adamdı. Yazarı çok tebrik ediyorum. Emeklerine sağlık. 🙏🙏
Well... thanks for the chapter, but, author name is? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Fast but good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I'm going to be honest. I can't stand the "villain" mc that doesn't have a reason to be one. But I don't wanna ruin the rating.
It goes for a good AU setting, but then immediately falls apart with plot holes (if his parents dont like arcturus why leave him with him etc.). Could've been good but the author cannot go a full half chapter without randomly dropping a line that shatters the HP worldbuilding and rules. like magic abilities that dont use magic, wands having infinite magic, 2 stones, insane permanent power ups that canonically AU or not should've needed a massive dark ritual from 'putting magic through your arm.'
Good enough for me[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It has got a good plot but the way it is written makes it feel rushed and it doesn’t go into very many details.
do you feel the darkness too, child ??:)!! no, I am the darkness[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
The score is surprisingly low, there are 2 factors I value the most here. Evil MC and plot without unnecessary details, in fact, those who have already read several Harry Potter fanfictions will see the same thing in others and it is unpleasant, so I like the way the author acted here, there is a point without water and this is enough.