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tbh, this is heavily AU. It doesn't really follow powerlevel of One Piece. It's more like a dark One Punch Man. The Author focused on his own story more than One Piece. He took a few things from One Piece's powersystem and then overblown it outta proportion to make the MC OP without any external help. The more you read the more bland it kinda feels. Don't expect One Piece when you read this, more like the Author was on an acid trip while writing this story. Overall 2.6 stars. Only 5 stars is update stability because of finished story. Well, powerscaling is a mess in this story. To each their own, I don't enjoy it that much because the interactions don't feel like One Piece.
I love the story building. And while I can understand the ending, I want more of the story. If the author can do this story one more time as an AU to this world it would be 🔥. I mean the author can do so many fanfics of this fanfic.
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He gets too strong too quickly, being able to cut off PRIME WB arm at 15 is like admiral level
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An excellent one piece fanfic, even if I find it a shame that it's already finished I really liked the story and it's character. It's also one of the rare times where I like a story where the MC so quickly becomes the strongest in his world. In addition, the behavior of the MC, even having become the strongest, is truly exceptional for me. Thanks again and I'm looking forward to the next story
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Too OP too quickly without any cheats and sort of too much thinking, talking and reactions instead of actions but otherwise a good read for those who like OP MC. Ending seemed abrupt but on the other hand avoided the disappointment issue usually faced in the ffs.
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The only thing I didn't like is that the strength of mc was not properly portrayed in the beginning 20 chapters. Him not getting any cheats(devil fruits, teachings, bloodlines) and him becoming op all by himself was too much to be accepted easily.
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Amazing stuff pls dont ndrop it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Hmm, it's ok I suppose. The MC grew unnaturally strong too quickly and the storytelling is not the best. The idea for the Spandam character is good but it doesn't leave me invested in the story. The novel is not for me but good luck 👍
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This novel feels like opm and overlord, where we have an overly powerfull character with little to no ambition but without the comedy sections, only the absolute bafflement of other characters when they get to know his power. The main character has a very strict personal code that he follows at all costs and knowingly classifies it as madness, that is what transforms this novel in something else than a simple powerfantasy.
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Oh, readers who wandering in the realm of fantasy, heed my call! With each spoken word, I create a new world. When these pages are opened, dreams take shape. When these letters are arranged, truth comes to fruition. Fill, fill, fill, fill, fill. Repeat five times, but as each fill is completed, destroy. Pay heed to my words. My will creates your fantasies, and your power stone shapes my destiny. If you abide by this feeling and follow my desires and reasons, then answer my summons. I hereby swear to be your greatest fantasy writer in the world, To vanquish all evil that denies the power stone in this world. Seven realms concealed within the power of words, emerge from the ocean of the fantasy realm, Eternal Wanderer!
Is there going to be any romance? How many waifus will he have 1 or multiple? Im more of a harem fan but iusually will read any one pieCe fanfic as long as there is atleast a single love interest
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It's a good story and different from the usual ones. Not action or adventure packed. But it's an interesting story to read.
tbh, this is heavily AU. It doesn't really follow powerlevel of One Piece. It's more like a dark One Punch Man. The Author focused on his own story more than One Piece. He took a few things from One Piece's powersystem and then overblown it outta proportion to make the MC OP without any external help. The more you read the more bland it kinda feels. Don't expect One Piece when you read this, more like the Author was on an acid trip while writing this story. Overall 2.6 stars. Only 5 stars is update stability because of finished story. Well, powerscaling is a mess in this story. To each their own, I don't enjoy it that much because the interactions don't feel like One Piece.
I love the story building. And while I can understand the ending, I want more of the story. If the author can do this story one more time as an AU to this world it would be 🔥. I mean the author can do so many fanfics of this fanfic.
Membuka SPOILER He gets too strong too quickly, being able to cut off PRIME WB arm at 15 is like admiral level
Membuka SPOILER An excellent one piece fanfic, even if I find it a shame that it's already finished I really liked the story and it's character. It's also one of the rare times where I like a story where the MC so quickly becomes the strongest in his world. In addition, the behavior of the MC, even having become the strongest, is truly exceptional for me. Thanks again and I'm looking forward to the next story
Membuka SPOILER Too OP too quickly without any cheats and sort of too much thinking, talking and reactions instead of actions but otherwise a good read for those who like OP MC. Ending seemed abrupt but on the other hand avoided the disappointment issue usually faced in the ffs.
Membuka SPOILER The only thing I didn't like is that the strength of mc was not properly portrayed in the beginning 20 chapters. Him not getting any cheats(devil fruits, teachings, bloodlines) and him becoming op all by himself was too much to be accepted easily.
,.......vmcmfkfkfjdjdifkduadjdj Rjdjdjdmhyeudududidjdjdjfhdhdggshdhdhdhxjfjcndkddluhd bskbsksmhskyjdmhxhmd hxjysntsgnzjtsmhskyhdkudumdmudmyzmhdmyeymdmyd. hdkyueulrkuskyrdkyekysmhskysmhdmyzmgsktzmhxmhdukeukdlurp8hdlyemyzngajts
Amazing stuff pls dont ndrop it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Hmm, it's ok I suppose. The MC grew unnaturally strong too quickly and the storytelling is not the best. The idea for the Spandam character is good but it doesn't leave me invested in the story. The novel is not for me but good luck 👍
Good........................................ ...............................................................................................................................
This novel feels like opm and overlord, where we have an overly powerfull character with little to no ambition but without the comedy sections, only the absolute bafflement of other characters when they get to know his power. The main character has a very strict personal code that he follows at all costs and knowingly classifies it as madness, that is what transforms this novel in something else than a simple powerfantasy.
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Oh, readers who wandering in the realm of fantasy, heed my call! With each spoken word, I create a new world. When these pages are opened, dreams take shape. When these letters are arranged, truth comes to fruition. Fill, fill, fill, fill, fill. Repeat five times, but as each fill is completed, destroy. Pay heed to my words. My will creates your fantasies, and your power stone shapes my destiny. If you abide by this feeling and follow my desires and reasons, then answer my summons. I hereby swear to be your greatest fantasy writer in the world, To vanquish all evil that denies the power stone in this world. Seven realms concealed within the power of words, emerge from the ocean of the fantasy realm, Eternal Wanderer!
Is there going to be any romance? How many waifus will he have 1 or multiple? Im more of a harem fan but iusually will read any one pieCe fanfic as long as there is atleast a single love interest
Membuka SPOILER
It's a good story and different from the usual ones. Not action or adventure packed. But it's an interesting story to read.