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This is a good book. It has an awesome outline and outstanding plot that can drag us to keep turning pages over and over. The mc design and his development is too awesome. Not to mention, the world setting and writing style. All are good indeed. Keep it up author.
Okay alright, this one is good and I am tired of pretending otherwise! In library it goes! By the way - yes, the art is a eyecandy .
I like how the plot and world of story is wide and beyond the limits what we call normal. Its really interesting. I am excited to see how it will further progress.
Elite novel right here, romance done well, world building is fire and mc is interesting. To any prospective readers, you have found a gem, read it.
This is a great book and it has a lot of potential too, Please don't stop updating
I actually like the romance between Ye Fan and Fairy Xuan Xueqi in this cultivation story. They are so cute
Fun read in an unique perspective. The background story is really interesting and the mc starts off trying to revenge for old sect
I tot that the story is to kill the witch but it turn out to be a fun story about to love the witch lol
Great writing and plot, I think the only problem i have with the book are the characters description, there's not much to work with so it makes it difficult to imagine what they look like
The setting seems quite ruthless already and this already gives the feeling that this is a dangerous world of cultivation. i find it funny that the mc is trying to kill the lead female heroine in this story.
Finally a eastern cultivation with a smart mc. Although the mc is smart but he isnt good in the matters of the heart. But then, this may not be fair to the mc as the readers have the 4th wall.
I swear the cover did not entice me!!! Well... maybe it did.... Anyways! I read the starting few chapters and really found it interesting. The interaction between the ML and FL is always good! Good novel!! especially the cover!!
The characters are described thoroughly and I enjoyed the overall plot. I believe if there was more background on the cultivation world setting I would understand the story better. Keep up the great work!
I think your writing is great .Also you know how to make the plot interesting even though is a little hard to follow through. Not a chinese novel fun , but i admire you for the ideas. I think the book has potential and might become popular .Keep up ! Love it !
Hi! I’m leaving this review since I wanted to point out a few things I liked about this novel. I really like the world-building and lore, especially because it reminds me of historical times in real life. However, as a reader, I need more background on the different “Sects” since they were introduced right into the novel without any explanation. World-building needs further elaboration especially on the functions of the places or groups mentioned which is what this novel lacks for some reason. Overall, I really like the theme of this story. Eastern Fantasy is a really great genre to explore, and your story has potential. Please keep writing!
In this story, it is actually about the deep romance between the MC Ye Fan and the Fairy Xuan Xueqi in the ruthless world of cultivation. The MC will start off the story hating the Witch Xuan Xueqi but it was actually a misunderstanding. Their romances will be centerpiece to the story development.
This is a good book. It has an awesome outline and outstanding plot that can drag us to keep turning pages over and over. The mc design and his development is too awesome. Not to mention, the world setting and writing style. All are good indeed. Keep it up author.
Okay alright, this one is good and I am tired of pretending otherwise! In library it goes! By the way - yes, the art is a eyecandy .
I like how the plot and world of story is wide and beyond the limits what we call normal. Its really interesting. I am excited to see how it will further progress.
Elite novel right here, romance done well, world building is fire and mc is interesting. To any prospective readers, you have found a gem, read it.
This is a great book and it has a lot of potential too, Please don't stop updating
I actually like the romance between Ye Fan and Fairy Xuan Xueqi in this cultivation story. They are so cute
Fun read in an unique perspective. The background story is really interesting and the mc starts off trying to revenge for old sect
I tot that the story is to kill the witch but it turn out to be a fun story about to love the witch lol
Great writing and plot, I think the only problem i have with the book are the characters description, there's not much to work with so it makes it difficult to imagine what they look like
The setting seems quite ruthless already and this already gives the feeling that this is a dangerous world of cultivation. i find it funny that the mc is trying to kill the lead female heroine in this story.
Finally a eastern cultivation with a smart mc. Although the mc is smart but he isnt good in the matters of the heart. But then, this may not be fair to the mc as the readers have the 4th wall.
I swear the cover did not entice me!!! Well... maybe it did.... Anyways! I read the starting few chapters and really found it interesting. The interaction between the ML and FL is always good! Good novel!! especially the cover!!
The characters are described thoroughly and I enjoyed the overall plot. I believe if there was more background on the cultivation world setting I would understand the story better. Keep up the great work!
I think your writing is great .Also you know how to make the plot interesting even though is a little hard to follow through. Not a chinese novel fun , but i admire you for the ideas. I think the book has potential and might become popular .Keep up ! Love it !
Hi! I’m leaving this review since I wanted to point out a few things I liked about this novel. I really like the world-building and lore, especially because it reminds me of historical times in real life. However, as a reader, I need more background on the different “Sects” since they were introduced right into the novel without any explanation. World-building needs further elaboration especially on the functions of the places or groups mentioned which is what this novel lacks for some reason. Overall, I really like the theme of this story. Eastern Fantasy is a really great genre to explore, and your story has potential. Please keep writing!
In this story, it is actually about the deep romance between the MC Ye Fan and the Fairy Xuan Xueqi in the ruthless world of cultivation. The MC will start off the story hating the Witch Xuan Xueqi but it was actually a misunderstanding. Their romances will be centerpiece to the story development.