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Your story is amazing you are the only one i have found that can apply Pokémon in a non Pokémon world brilliantly without the world being a cartoon or anime. Why have you stopped writing though, are you experiencing writers block or something? We as readers have a right to know.
read till chapter 22, the story just ain't it for me. The mc is not really to my taste, would've gotten caught or died way earlier were it not for some doses of plot armor. He tries to be 'secretive' which is understandable since it's marvel and he can grow strong very quickly, but then he tells a random girl he saved about his pokémon. He is pretty naive, but somehow SHIELD can't find him. There is also a lacking amount of character interactions, except for some short talks when he saves someone or with his pokémon. The story is a very good idea tho, a pokemon master in marvel is very interesting and original, but it seems like the mc doesn't have to put in much work and has a rapid improvement (learns psychic/aura by 'facing death'). I mean, he ain't no Saiyan so why he suddenly transforming and gettin' white eyes and all that. Apparently he "Doesn't care about himself, but only cares of his Pokémon". His idea of wanting to make his world a second world of pokémon is pretty interesting. With the perk he got others wont be able to get anything from researching him or his pokémon so it is a nice goal. I'm afraid the mc will get too strong too fast unless you pull some nerfs. We are a few years before iron man 1 after all, so by that time he would have a lot of op pokémon and his mastery over aura/psychic should be very high. He would bulldoze through all the events unless the author decides to introduce comic elements, but that won't happen.
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This is so good please keep it up also please dont let him get caught till the start of them collecting the heros for the avengers program e
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I like how the story is going, I would like you to put a human partner in it, please please please please please please please please please please
I have read till the introduction of ghastly. Up till now, I think you need to do more world building. Attacking regular people with pokemon attacks at higher level will be very hard. You need to introduce more super human villans
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really nice Story so far. i can't wait for the moment when he either gets Kyogre or Groudon THAT will shake the world. i was wondering wich starter he would use at first. me personally would have used chimchar. but your most likely only using pokemon from Red right?
cuando el siguiente capitulo que esto se esta poneinedo relamente interesante? con todo pero lo relamente estoy esperando es cuando se metan en la ecuacion a los pokemon legendarios
Your story is amazing you are the only one i have found that can apply Pokémon in a non Pokémon world brilliantly without the world being a cartoon or anime. Why have you stopped writing though, are you experiencing writers block or something? We as readers have a right to know.
read till chapter 22, the story just ain't it for me. The mc is not really to my taste, would've gotten caught or died way earlier were it not for some doses of plot armor. He tries to be 'secretive' which is understandable since it's marvel and he can grow strong very quickly, but then he tells a random girl he saved about his pokémon. He is pretty naive, but somehow SHIELD can't find him. There is also a lacking amount of character interactions, except for some short talks when he saves someone or with his pokémon. The story is a very good idea tho, a pokemon master in marvel is very interesting and original, but it seems like the mc doesn't have to put in much work and has a rapid improvement (learns psychic/aura by 'facing death'). I mean, he ain't no Saiyan so why he suddenly transforming and gettin' white eyes and all that. Apparently he "Doesn't care about himself, but only cares of his Pokémon". His idea of wanting to make his world a second world of pokémon is pretty interesting. With the perk he got others wont be able to get anything from researching him or his pokémon so it is a nice goal. I'm afraid the mc will get too strong too fast unless you pull some nerfs. We are a few years before iron man 1 after all, so by that time he would have a lot of op pokémon and his mastery over aura/psychic should be very high. He would bulldoze through all the events unless the author decides to introduce comic elements, but that won't happen.
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This is so good please keep it up also please dont let him get caught till the start of them collecting the heros for the avengers program e
Membuka SPOILER I like how the story is going, I would like you to put a human partner in it, please please please please please please please please please please
I have read till the introduction of ghastly. Up till now, I think you need to do more world building. Attacking regular people with pokemon attacks at higher level will be very hard. You need to introduce more super human villans
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really nice Story so far. i can't wait for the moment when he either gets Kyogre or Groudon THAT will shake the world. i was wondering wich starter he would use at first. me personally would have used chimchar. but your most likely only using pokemon from Red right?
cuando el siguiente capitulo que esto se esta poneinedo relamente interesante? con todo pero lo relamente estoy esperando es cuando se metan en la ecuacion a los pokemon legendarios