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Fantastic read and nice use of crossovers. Really one of the few fanfictions that are really enjoyable. I hope you keep updating the story.
Started out reading this and thought it was quite a decent slow burn, but I very quickly made it to the latest chapter unable to put it down. I am now eagerly awaiting new chapters. Good character builder. Good use of introducing different tv casts. Good romance. Im hoping the current girlfriend is the one.
Hey bro I was watching Doctor House when I got to a chapter where I had to treat a CIA agent and I thought it would be great to have this in a chapter of the fic
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bro are you going to update today I'm waiting for the next chapter been waiting for a week
without a doubt an excellent fanfic that should become a printed novel for the quality of each chapter, you can feel the effort, determination and research on the part of the author, a light but not uncomfortable comedy, lively, charismatic, annoying, HUMAN characters in the sense of the word with their good, bad and gray sides, they don't feel robotic or forced, there's none of that garbage of "I'm extremely handsome or talented and I slap everyone"... I have a "slight" repugnance to those Asian type novels with protagonists who can face everyone despite all the difficulties, this fanfic is the opposite, the protagonist appears, makes mistakes, is humble, is not stupid, just absent-minded but still manages to earn your respect for him, which is not easy since most authors go the easy way of creating an arrogant MC for having the skills to do so. In order not to make this review too long, I love this fanfic and it's a torture to wait for another chapter. PS: The icing on the cake is that it has Dr. House.
This and "Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)" are some one of the best fics about slice of life. Well, you have to read the first ten chapter before, but the experience after that is good.
Its a really good fic. At start i felt like author was fumbling a bit, but lately every week on this day i wait in anticipation for this to update. I really feel like the characters depth in this fic is on a whole another level. Some of the lines make me like damn was this canon or the author just good?! Highly Recommend if anyone wants a Slice of Life with quiet a bit action and romance in it.
I like how this book is transitioning through different series. But I wish the MC will have more of HOUSE. Want to see how he becomes doctor and get involved with house characters
great fanfic rewrite, it's slow on update but good quality and a cheerful read.
Bueno es bastante equilibrado nose se me hace divertido como avanza la historia tiene un buen desarrollo un poco lenta pero nunca aburrida no tiene lagunas ni nada siempre se rellena
Honestly, at first, I found the interactions between the characters very strange, but I realized that the author did a great job portraying each character's personality. Before I knew it, I was hooked, wanting to read the next one, and luckily, I’m on vacation. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Great job on this fanfiction! It’s rare to come across something as original and well-written as your work here. There are times when the pacing feels a bit rushed or the characters come across as a little detached, but overall, the story is captivating and often immersive. I really appreciate the effort you put into crafting this unique story, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
This is more just like a question to the author and everyone in general how do you think Sheldon would introduce or talk about the MC when he’s an adult .
Like your story. I like your MC much more than original MC from DAD. keep going. I would like to support if youd will have advanced chapters somewhere, if you know what I mean)
This is actually a well written fanfic, wish for more. Good job and feed us more. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mc is a good guy somtimes too good to the point where I feel like he's trying too hard I kind of feel bad for him but I root for him as well
Some scenes are repetitive, though it would've been a little weird without those for transition. Remember, the author is not American, a doctor, a nurse, nor a fighter.
I like the story so far, and as I am reading ch57 there was little bit of romance, but after the cheerleader arc, I see nothing but medical jargon, and story is mostly about doctors and medicine. And don’t get me wrong that the story is good, but if you put romance tag than I expect it a little, but as of ch57 there is no real development. That’s the issue I have, and the medicine stuff makes it heavy. However remember it is just my opinion and that I like that there would be little more romance or drama, like there would be a mix of professional medic stuff and romance and his life. Or remove the tag entirely… In the end it is my personal opinion and preference, I will not drop it but I am a little disheartened.
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this story is AMAIZING!!!!! I was worried that having so many characters from different shows is going to feel forced but its so well done, and all the character feel like they came from their tv show their words their actions everything! Also I love the MC
love the book. please upload the chapters more frequently really love the story can't tell you how much 😁[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=In your face][img=Unalived][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
Es una gran novela hermano, aunque no voy muy adelantado hice esta portada con mucho cariño, no puse tantos personajes ya que sentí que saturaba mucho así que solo puse a los que considero mas importantes aparte del MC, que son sus padres y el Dr. House, como te digo no voy al día con la novela así que no se si me salte algo, espero que te guste hermano, sigue con el buen trabajo
apsolute masterpiece, the characters feel like they are straight from the shows, there is some real character development and the shows are wery well incoporated i like how some charaters are younger because the plot of their shows happends in the future insted of making the shows happen 20-30 years before they should, it feels wery well thout out and I realy enjoy reading it, please continue and good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well, I remembered that it's supposed to be my divine duty as an author to write my own review with 5 stars. If I really had to write my own review, I would give myself 3.7 stars. I'm still very much a novice when it comes to writing. I'll likely make repeated mistakes with the personalities of the characters I'll be borrowing for this story, and the situations may be somewhat unbelievable. However, if you're willing to endure that and accompany me as I improve my writing style, welcome.[img=recommend]
Fantastic read and nice use of crossovers. Really one of the few fanfictions that are really enjoyable. I hope you keep updating the story.
Started out reading this and thought it was quite a decent slow burn, but I very quickly made it to the latest chapter unable to put it down. I am now eagerly awaiting new chapters. Good character builder. Good use of introducing different tv casts. Good romance. Im hoping the current girlfriend is the one.
Hey bro I was watching Doctor House when I got to a chapter where I had to treat a CIA agent and I thought it would be great to have this in a chapter of the fic
History totality god Fuck yes[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
bro are you going to update today I'm waiting for the next chapter been waiting for a week
without a doubt an excellent fanfic that should become a printed novel for the quality of each chapter, you can feel the effort, determination and research on the part of the author, a light but not uncomfortable comedy, lively, charismatic, annoying, HUMAN characters in the sense of the word with their good, bad and gray sides, they don't feel robotic or forced, there's none of that garbage of "I'm extremely handsome or talented and I slap everyone"... I have a "slight" repugnance to those Asian type novels with protagonists who can face everyone despite all the difficulties, this fanfic is the opposite, the protagonist appears, makes mistakes, is humble, is not stupid, just absent-minded but still manages to earn your respect for him, which is not easy since most authors go the easy way of creating an arrogant MC for having the skills to do so. In order not to make this review too long, I love this fanfic and it's a torture to wait for another chapter. PS: The icing on the cake is that it has Dr. House.
This and "Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)" are some one of the best fics about slice of life. Well, you have to read the first ten chapter before, but the experience after that is good.
Its a really good fic. At start i felt like author was fumbling a bit, but lately every week on this day i wait in anticipation for this to update. I really feel like the characters depth in this fic is on a whole another level. Some of the lines make me like damn was this canon or the author just good?! Highly Recommend if anyone wants a Slice of Life with quiet a bit action and romance in it.
I like how this book is transitioning through different series. But I wish the MC will have more of HOUSE. Want to see how he becomes doctor and get involved with house characters
great fanfic rewrite, it's slow on update but good quality and a cheerful read.
Bueno es bastante equilibrado nose se me hace divertido como avanza la historia tiene un buen desarrollo un poco lenta pero nunca aburrida no tiene lagunas ni nada siempre se rellena
Honestly, at first, I found the interactions between the characters very strange, but I realized that the author did a great job portraying each character's personality. Before I knew it, I was hooked, wanting to read the next one, and luckily, I’m on vacation. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Great job on this fanfiction! It’s rare to come across something as original and well-written as your work here. There are times when the pacing feels a bit rushed or the characters come across as a little detached, but overall, the story is captivating and often immersive. I really appreciate the effort you put into crafting this unique story, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing it. Looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
This is more just like a question to the author and everyone in general how do you think Sheldon would introduce or talk about the MC when he’s an adult .
Like your story. I like your MC much more than original MC from DAD. keep going. I would like to support if youd will have advanced chapters somewhere, if you know what I mean)
This is actually a well written fanfic, wish for more. Good job and feed us more. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mc is a good guy somtimes too good to the point where I feel like he's trying too hard I kind of feel bad for him but I root for him as well
Some scenes are repetitive, though it would've been a little weird without those for transition. Remember, the author is not American, a doctor, a nurse, nor a fighter.
I like the story so far, and as I am reading ch57 there was little bit of romance, but after the cheerleader arc, I see nothing but medical jargon, and story is mostly about doctors and medicine. And don’t get me wrong that the story is good, but if you put romance tag than I expect it a little, but as of ch57 there is no real development. That’s the issue I have, and the medicine stuff makes it heavy. However remember it is just my opinion and that I like that there would be little more romance or drama, like there would be a mix of professional medic stuff and romance and his life. Or remove the tag entirely… In the end it is my personal opinion and preference, I will not drop it but I am a little disheartened.
Membuka SPOILER this story is AMAIZING!!!!! I was worried that having so many characters from different shows is going to feel forced but its so well done, and all the character feel like they came from their tv show their words their actions everything! Also I love the MC
love the book. please upload the chapters more frequently really love the story can't tell you how much 😁[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=In your face][img=Unalived][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
Es una gran novela hermano, aunque no voy muy adelantado hice esta portada con mucho cariño, no puse tantos personajes ya que sentí que saturaba mucho así que solo puse a los que considero mas importantes aparte del MC, que son sus padres y el Dr. House, como te digo no voy al día con la novela así que no se si me salte algo, espero que te guste hermano, sigue con el buen trabajo
apsolute masterpiece, the characters feel like they are straight from the shows, there is some real character development and the shows are wery well incoporated i like how some charaters are younger because the plot of their shows happends in the future insted of making the shows happen 20-30 years before they should, it feels wery well thout out and I realy enjoy reading it, please continue and good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well, I remembered that it's supposed to be my divine duty as an author to write my own review with 5 stars. If I really had to write my own review, I would give myself 3.7 stars. I'm still very much a novice when it comes to writing. I'll likely make repeated mistakes with the personalities of the characters I'll be borrowing for this story, and the situations may be somewhat unbelievable. However, if you're willing to endure that and accompany me as I improve my writing style, welcome.[img=recommend]