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Tulis ulasanCouldn't get past ch.10.The writing screams Chinese manhua, which isn't inherently bad but I just don't like the way they do things, metaphors and jokes just don't land the same way in English. I didn't really mind the harem thing, his hate for MJ is kinda warranted though but taken too far. The transformation just screams edgelord rage guts wannabe, which is cringe asf. Don't get how all the reviewers gave 5/5, this fic is mid at best.
Me gusta .π ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππGwen.
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The book idea is pretty good, I like the use of a sign in system, but the rewawards are random so sometimes he gets something busted sometimes he doesnβt. The background is pretty good and so is the character development. My only issue is grammar, sometimes find it unbearable with how bad the grammar can be, but the story makes up for it in other areas
i like it but too few chapters +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ nice
keep going bro,I'm looking forward to the continuation, hopefully it's not like other fanfictions that stop in the middle of the story or even at the beginning of the story
It is a great story on a par with the best, thanks for this powerful story, thanks for such a gem, much success and the best, I hope it lasts a long time and thanks.
hahahaha another amazing fic by peter x gwen i'm from brazil and i follow your fic anxiously and i'm waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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This story has a great potential. This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential Gwen is the best girl in Marvel)
It is a nice fanfic i like the peter x gwen ship so recommended me more fanfics of peter x gwen ok guys
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I know giving this a 5-star is shameless of me, and I'm ashamed.... however it's to motivate myself, I didn't read and was informative of Marvel Comics I read some but only a little.... I watched the spider man movies though..... if I made a mistake kindly scold me... i like it π Here a pic of Gwenpool! for yah!
Couldn't get past ch.10.The writing screams Chinese manhua, which isn't inherently bad but I just don't like the way they do things, metaphors and jokes just don't land the same way in English. I didn't really mind the harem thing, his hate for MJ is kinda warranted though but taken too far. The transformation just screams edgelord rage guts wannabe, which is cringe asf. Don't get how all the reviewers gave 5/5, this fic is mid at best.
Me gusta .π ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππGwen.
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The book idea is pretty good, I like the use of a sign in system, but the rewawards are random so sometimes he gets something busted sometimes he doesnβt. The background is pretty good and so is the character development. My only issue is grammar, sometimes find it unbearable with how bad the grammar can be, but the story makes up for it in other areas
i like it but too few chapters +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ nice
keep going bro,I'm looking forward to the continuation, hopefully it's not like other fanfictions that stop in the middle of the story or even at the beginning of the story
It is a great story on a par with the best, thanks for this powerful story, thanks for such a gem, much success and the best, I hope it lasts a long time and thanks.
hahahaha another amazing fic by peter x gwen i'm from brazil and i follow your fic anxiously and i'm waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Another awesome Peter x Gwen fanfic Another awesome Peter x Gwen fanfic Another awesome Peter x Gwen fanfic Another awesome Peter x Gwen fanfic
This story has a great potential. This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential This story has a great potential Gwen is the best girl in Marvel)
It is a nice fanfic i like the peter x gwen ship so recommended me more fanfics of peter x gwen ok guys
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I know giving this a 5-star is shameless of me, and I'm ashamed.... however it's to motivate myself, I didn't read and was informative of Marvel Comics I read some but only a little.... I watched the spider man movies though..... if I made a mistake kindly scold me... i like it π Here a pic of Gwenpool! for yah!