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Naruto: Hyuga Simulation
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Dive into the mesmerizing universe of Naruto, where the ordinary life of high school student Ben takes an extraordinary turn as he's mysteriously transported into this captivating realm.
Armed with an enigmatic simulator system, Ben's insatiable curiosity propels him into an enthralling odyssey, adopting the guise of Hyuga Ren.
Brace yourself for an exhilarating expedition as he navigates a realm brimming with secrets, embarking on a journey that intertwines fate, adventure, and a dash of enigma.
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I want to give 5 stars, but I can't lie to the public. first of all you have to stop long simulation and useless detail in simulation. it just wastes a lot of useless chapters. i suggest you go read btth Life simulator system to use proper simulator system preferences. (Google translate)
Improve your grammar and get a editor because your writing is cluttered and needs a lot of improvement .I suggest using chatgpt to help with this or try getting some editing software (Try chatgpt tho and see how you feel about it) I see a lot of potential in this book but your english is holding it back
no interaction , stupid way of story telling , it doesn't feel like a story or novel at all , confusing . worst simulation ever ,
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It's a good story but it's just that nothing else, it's not special or anything. The simulations take up way too much space summarize it more. Other than that my complaints are minimal, make the paragraphs a little bit more readable and maybe actually have other characters than mc speak in 10 chapters.
Jilid 1
- 1 Chapter 1: hyuga ren 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2:Simulator 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: simulator 2 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 1 years ago
- 6 chapter 6 1 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 1 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 1 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 1 years ago
- 10 chapter 11 1 years ago
- 11 Chapter 12 1 years ago
- 12 Chapter 13 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 14 1 years ago
- 14 Chapter 15 1 years ago
5 star rewiew becasue i think this has potenial. my only complaint is the long justu discriptions and the half chapter note explaning what happend to the uchila. most of us reading naruto fanfic has read the manga/seen the anime. those of use that already know that stuff going to not read it and the discriptions of the justus so chapters seem thin even tho they arent. keep writing it will only get better no need to edit btw i have dyslexia btw sorry for misspellings if there are any