Leveling Up With Uchiha Obito's Power In Another World

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Ygreat

Finally I found a story where the main character has the power of Kamui, please don't drop this story, because I like this. well, keep on updating, don't stop writing this story. update a lot and be consistent [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 1

Friren

My assumptions about extremely bad fanfiction on English and Asian platforms are becoming a reality. Such disgusting stories featuring characters from different worlds. You can write a story without these "Game Systems". Well, or an author is Asian who has a very poor understanding of Western fantasy. And even more so, they ruined Obito Uchiha. A classic for such works.

This one is a bit... flat. The characters almost speak with one 'voice' and its easy for my mind to drift due to the monotony. The mythical 'rewrite' could fix it, it has decent bones, but that hardly ever happens and doesn't help what we have now. If I manage to stick with it, I might change this review

LV 1

tris_krits

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LV 1

VITOR_CHaves

It irritates me that I describe a dialogue, rather than making abut,I like everything else. MC is not straight-laced, but he is not cruel, and he does good if a problem appears in front of him.

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LV 4

Ayries_Jesea

I like the story at the start but the way the paragraphs change or the lack of dialogue make the story lack something that doesn't make me like the characters are alive

LV 4

Nathan_Dragio

The story is amazing please don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍