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Author Sama you ran away after making mrle addicted to lance and didn't even inform when you will be back .This book is amazing . So plz come back and give your pitiful readers more updates
I’m really enjoying this story so far. I wanted to leave a review because I can tell how much the author cares about their characters and writing. It is very nice to read the author notes ❤️❤️❤️
Lance is a smart MC! I enjoy watching things play out from his perspective and even as an omniscient reader he still manages to notice things that I didn't even pay attention to! There are mysteries being hinted at about the system and I'm excited to see where the author goes with that. Updates are consistent and always a satisfying length to read. The characters have more depth than I was expecting and my only point of criticism is that I wish the first arc was longer to give the side characters more time to shine and give the love interests a more slow development. This is just my preference though because I enjoy longer arcs in world hopping stories. So I hope that future arcs aren't as short! I LOVE the fact that this author allows the side characters to be intelligent. One of my biggest annoyances when reading is when the MC is the only one with a brain but this isn't like that at all. People doubt the MC and he isn't the only one who comes up with ideas. I also like the system! Systems can sometimes be annoying but this one has a personality that isn't overbearing or boring. It's a good balance. That's all I have to say. I hope the author stays encouraged to write and has fun doing this! I've been reading since there were only 7 chapters and I hope to see it through to the end!
I love it no doubt the Character design is AMAZING and Story development just everything I am hoarding up till the end of the arc![img=recommend]
Oh my lord! I absolutely love the first arc of the novel! The character illustrations are fantastic, bringing the story to life in a vivid and captivating way. Can't wait to see where the story goes next! I LOVE DUKE ARTHUR'S FACE. [img=update]
Arc Character Illustrations at each chapter's comments.Thank you for reading.TAISHU ©️.
Author Sama you ran away after making mrle addicted to lance and didn't even inform when you will be back .This book is amazing . So plz come back and give your pitiful readers more updates
I’m really enjoying this story so far. I wanted to leave a review because I can tell how much the author cares about their characters and writing. It is very nice to read the author notes ❤️❤️❤️
Lance is a smart MC! I enjoy watching things play out from his perspective and even as an omniscient reader he still manages to notice things that I didn't even pay attention to! There are mysteries being hinted at about the system and I'm excited to see where the author goes with that. Updates are consistent and always a satisfying length to read. The characters have more depth than I was expecting and my only point of criticism is that I wish the first arc was longer to give the side characters more time to shine and give the love interests a more slow development. This is just my preference though because I enjoy longer arcs in world hopping stories. So I hope that future arcs aren't as short! I LOVE the fact that this author allows the side characters to be intelligent. One of my biggest annoyances when reading is when the MC is the only one with a brain but this isn't like that at all. People doubt the MC and he isn't the only one who comes up with ideas. I also like the system! Systems can sometimes be annoying but this one has a personality that isn't overbearing or boring. It's a good balance. That's all I have to say. I hope the author stays encouraged to write and has fun doing this! I've been reading since there were only 7 chapters and I hope to see it through to the end!
I love it no doubt the Character design is AMAZING and Story development just everything I am hoarding up till the end of the arc![img=recommend]
Oh my lord! I absolutely love the first arc of the novel! The character illustrations are fantastic, bringing the story to life in a vivid and captivating way. Can't wait to see where the story goes next! I LOVE DUKE ARTHUR'S FACE. [img=update]
Arc Character Illustrations at each chapter's comments.Thank you for reading.TAISHU ©️.