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We've seen what happens with Tsunade Senju as the fifth hokage. But what would happen when Naruto's twin sister, kid genius Natsuko Uzumaki, was selected as the fifth instead. Is the village safer with her as Hokage, or is it worse off? Let's see...
This was one of my first works that I wrote almost entirely on my phone, so the writing is incredibly chaotic. I was reading back through it, and I jump to a lot of different topics without warning.
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Honestly, the writing itself is atrocious with it swapping scenes so often and I honestly could not tell where I was after a while and how quickly it time skipped to the battle of Kage with no warning whatsoever. Also, you kept repeating lines and switching details about the character, going from a bunny to a wolf mask, and then back to a bunny. This story was so confusing to read that I didn't even get through the first chapter due to how chaotic it was.