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Good opening. It gave me the vibe of Dune. It intrigued me, seriously. But, it is more about the Elf girl.Perhaps the next chapter would be focussed on Varis? Keep the spirit up!
where are you in my book, I miss you go there, it's cool, your book is good but if it were me I'd be better, if you know it's a joke my bro I'll read it but it's already 5 stars my consecrated[img=strong]
Welcome to my novel. I hope you will enjoy reading my novel. I will try my best to write it, kindly give me feedback and support my book by adding it to your reading list and perhaps giving me a power stone. Anyway, happy reading~
make me curious what would happend to mc in the future. i'll do collection for now.
Good opening. It gave me the vibe of Dune. It intrigued me, seriously. But, it is more about the Elf girl.Perhaps the next chapter would be focussed on Varis? Keep the spirit up!
where are you in my book, I miss you go there, it's cool, your book is good but if it were me I'd be better, if you know it's a joke my bro I'll read it but it's already 5 stars my consecrated[img=strong]
Welcome to my novel. I hope you will enjoy reading my novel. I will try my best to write it, kindly give me feedback and support my book by adding it to your reading list and perhaps giving me a power stone. Anyway, happy reading~
make me curious what would happend to mc in the future. i'll do collection for now.