reborn as the perfect original, with some tricks

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EC_Wolf

I'ma do you a favor mate, alright? Now don't take offence because all I'm about to say will help you. 1, Dialogue, when a character speaks, it requires two things, 1, it's closed quotations, examples "Hi, you look nice," said a man. The man said, "Hey, you look nice." "Hey you look nice." 2, it's own paragraph, each character speaking owns it's own paragraph, so one chracter can have two soeaking setences in one because thats their paragraph, but another character can't share that paragraph, example, "Hey man, you look good," the man said, "What perfume did you put on." "Thank you, I put on yada yada," Said the woman."Oh that's nice."This is something you should really know because any book and fic contains these examples.Another thing to help you, time period dialect. If you're character is in a modern day setting, they won't call their mother, mother, they'll call her, mom, but if they're in an ancient setting or an older setting like ww2 era, than instead of mom, it would be mother.Now since im going by the top of the dome, thats all I can think of. You can go on reddit and quora for more, but a recommendation is to use grammarly for grammar mistakes and the like. Another recommendation is to read heavily followed fics over on fanfictions of your choice because they're famous for reason, i.e, most definitely for their grammar and their storytelling. Anyway good day to you.

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jjsjsjshxhf

MC is like a thousand years old and still to hasty. and seriously Telling Others he's secret to Peggy And to the others stupid decision to make making his family All known to shield and to other hydra.

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LemonSpatula

Not for me sorry… 10 wishes thats too much i rly hate overpowered protagonists

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Tasha_Williams_0673

Best originals novel I've seen so far please don't drop Its PEAK

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Cody_Mohr

I sincerely hope you continue the story because it's an interesting mix of the two

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Justindemigod

great so far but updates have become chaotic.

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Iam_Owler

I read up to chapter 18. And I can't resonate with the characters, especially the MC. This isn't for me either.

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Kimmy_World

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD AND IT IS THE BEST

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Bikerider

I love the main character especially after he isn’t just reacting to what others do or say Keep up the good work.