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Wow, potential is the name of the book, keep it up. I highly recommend this book.
Shameless Author Review. Gotta say that my writing style is very detail heavy and as an author I'm still learning to balance that or even enhance the plot with that. Thanks to an honest reviewer, shout-out of @Taufiqulalam, I think I've learned a thing or two to stop my strength as a heavy detail writer from being a weakness. So for all you with short fuses, give it a try, I promise you my isekai ain't generic.
Okay...let's begin, shall we? First of all, it reminds me of 'A Scarlet Letter' by Nathaniel Hawthorne. I loved the book to the letter. It was from the mid-17th century. I saw a reflection of that classical era in this writing. If you are a fan of descriptive narrative style, this book will blow your mind. I envy the writer as a fellow writer.. :D I am jealous. However, use of the old school realism will slow the pace at which your story develops. I don't mind slow development, but you may lose some potential readers. We won't want that to happen. The writer shows an excellent ability to describe the world as the character sees it. If you are okay with slow story buildup, you should not miss this. This is an excellent work of art.
I really like how descriptive the narration of the book. It's very easy to follow and understand what is being portrayed in every chapter. For a newbie reader like me that is something I really appreciate. The story is very interesting along with the world setting established in the story. It follows the popular tropes of Isekai reincarnation into a fantasy world of magic, so it needs to have more unexpected twists and unique plotlines in order to stand above the many books with the same tropes. I hope this book gets more attention from the readers. Keep working on the book, author.
I love the details and descriptions the plot also seemed unique in how it is about two protagonists [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was mesmmired by how the author narrates the story, he's so good in describing the flow and the writing is deep and figurative! I like reading such books where I can learn and expand my vocab^^ This story is good💯🙌🙌
4.8 overall, the author's consistency is GREAT also the way that each character has their own distinct identity. a compelling protagonist who awakens in an unfamiliar clearing, grappling with lost memories and a mysterious loss of magic. As he navigates the vibrant forest, his struggle to understand his predicament and regain his abilities becomes palpable. The rich descriptions of the natural surroundings and his internal monologue create an immersive experience, while the encounter with a young woman adds an intriguing layer of human connection to his journey. The narrative sets a promising foundation for a captivating exploration of identity, survival, and the unknown.
Recently finished the 8th Chapter and here are my following reviews for this story. Overall it's a nice story, a breath of fresh air. Really interesting with the concept of focusing on two protagonists rather than one that you mostly see in other isekai stories. Really looking forward with how this story progresses as more chapters get released. Keep up the good work author! Writing Quality 5/5 The writing quality just hits the spot for me, you can just vividly imagine the whole story in your head. The author's ability to foster immersion is truly commendable, making every moment within the story a delightful experience. Stability of Updates 3/5 It does suffer from a slight drawback in terms of update stability. Regrettably, the author has yet to establish a concrete release schedule for eager readers like me to anticipate. As a result, the arrival of new chapters remains sporadic. Story Development 5/5 In a genre where many stories falter due to hasty plot advancement and abrupt time skips, this story stands as a beacon of excellence. The story unravels at a steady pace, carefully nurturing the growth of its characters and their circumstances. I like this kind of deliberate approach as the realism it brought to the protagonist's development hooked me. Unlike numerous stories that begin their journey wielding overpowering abilities, this story takes a more grounded approach, promising genuine character and plot evolution in the chapters yet to come. Character Design 3/5 As much as I appreciate the author's ingenious storytelling and world-building, I must express some reservations regarding the character design. So far they are still stuck with the same character design as they were introduced. I expect to have at least a variety of designs in a fantasy character. World Background There is still not much revealed to the world our protagonists travelled to but with the vivid descriptions and storytelling of the author, it just feels so magical and I love it like that.
this story us very descriptive and dispite the title, it is not a true reincarnation story at least from the 3 chapters I have read! your story is very descriptive, but has pulled me in to continue reading, personally. It is a niche style of writing, some readers do prefer this style. pointers: vocabulary - while your unique use of vocabulary is amazing, the complex words make it a little confusing to read for me. perhaps look at a paragraph and have 1 complex word, it seems every sentence is filled! description - ask your self, why am I including this? does it add to the story? remeber your readers are very imaginative, being more suggestive in the world around you will help cut down the lengthy description. could the reader make the connection? in some cases simple sentences and language speaks volumes! I will continue to read this. please let me know if you want more feedback like this. I sometimes feel I am overstepping! [img=gift][img=Loving it]
Wow, potential is the name of the book, keep it up. I highly recommend this book.
Shameless Author Review. Gotta say that my writing style is very detail heavy and as an author I'm still learning to balance that or even enhance the plot with that. Thanks to an honest reviewer, shout-out of @Taufiqulalam, I think I've learned a thing or two to stop my strength as a heavy detail writer from being a weakness. So for all you with short fuses, give it a try, I promise you my isekai ain't generic.
Okay...let's begin, shall we? First of all, it reminds me of 'A Scarlet Letter' by Nathaniel Hawthorne. I loved the book to the letter. It was from the mid-17th century. I saw a reflection of that classical era in this writing. If you are a fan of descriptive narrative style, this book will blow your mind. I envy the writer as a fellow writer.. :D I am jealous. However, use of the old school realism will slow the pace at which your story develops. I don't mind slow development, but you may lose some potential readers. We won't want that to happen. The writer shows an excellent ability to describe the world as the character sees it. If you are okay with slow story buildup, you should not miss this. This is an excellent work of art.
I really like how descriptive the narration of the book. It's very easy to follow and understand what is being portrayed in every chapter. For a newbie reader like me that is something I really appreciate. The story is very interesting along with the world setting established in the story. It follows the popular tropes of Isekai reincarnation into a fantasy world of magic, so it needs to have more unexpected twists and unique plotlines in order to stand above the many books with the same tropes. I hope this book gets more attention from the readers. Keep working on the book, author.
I love the details and descriptions the plot also seemed unique in how it is about two protagonists [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was mesmmired by how the author narrates the story, he's so good in describing the flow and the writing is deep and figurative! I like reading such books where I can learn and expand my vocab^^ This story is good💯🙌🙌
4.8 overall, the author's consistency is GREAT also the way that each character has their own distinct identity. a compelling protagonist who awakens in an unfamiliar clearing, grappling with lost memories and a mysterious loss of magic. As he navigates the vibrant forest, his struggle to understand his predicament and regain his abilities becomes palpable. The rich descriptions of the natural surroundings and his internal monologue create an immersive experience, while the encounter with a young woman adds an intriguing layer of human connection to his journey. The narrative sets a promising foundation for a captivating exploration of identity, survival, and the unknown.
Recently finished the 8th Chapter and here are my following reviews for this story. Overall it's a nice story, a breath of fresh air. Really interesting with the concept of focusing on two protagonists rather than one that you mostly see in other isekai stories. Really looking forward with how this story progresses as more chapters get released. Keep up the good work author! Writing Quality 5/5 The writing quality just hits the spot for me, you can just vividly imagine the whole story in your head. The author's ability to foster immersion is truly commendable, making every moment within the story a delightful experience. Stability of Updates 3/5 It does suffer from a slight drawback in terms of update stability. Regrettably, the author has yet to establish a concrete release schedule for eager readers like me to anticipate. As a result, the arrival of new chapters remains sporadic. Story Development 5/5 In a genre where many stories falter due to hasty plot advancement and abrupt time skips, this story stands as a beacon of excellence. The story unravels at a steady pace, carefully nurturing the growth of its characters and their circumstances. I like this kind of deliberate approach as the realism it brought to the protagonist's development hooked me. Unlike numerous stories that begin their journey wielding overpowering abilities, this story takes a more grounded approach, promising genuine character and plot evolution in the chapters yet to come. Character Design 3/5 As much as I appreciate the author's ingenious storytelling and world-building, I must express some reservations regarding the character design. So far they are still stuck with the same character design as they were introduced. I expect to have at least a variety of designs in a fantasy character. World Background There is still not much revealed to the world our protagonists travelled to but with the vivid descriptions and storytelling of the author, it just feels so magical and I love it like that.
this story us very descriptive and dispite the title, it is not a true reincarnation story at least from the 3 chapters I have read! your story is very descriptive, but has pulled me in to continue reading, personally. It is a niche style of writing, some readers do prefer this style. pointers: vocabulary - while your unique use of vocabulary is amazing, the complex words make it a little confusing to read for me. perhaps look at a paragraph and have 1 complex word, it seems every sentence is filled! description - ask your self, why am I including this? does it add to the story? remeber your readers are very imaginative, being more suggestive in the world around you will help cut down the lengthy description. could the reader make the connection? in some cases simple sentences and language speaks volumes! I will continue to read this. please let me know if you want more feedback like this. I sometimes feel I am overstepping! [img=gift][img=Loving it]