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the first sentence of this novel [Inside a small but luxurious bedroom, there is a handsome boy who has just awakened.]Now, you will understand how this novel will be. It's just a translated novel, and the grammar is written in a way that resembles how Chinese is translated into English, which is disappointing."
Just another system fic. I have come to despise them. It's take all the fun out off character development and give power to cheaply and without effort.
You should edit the chapters and make the first letter of the sentence a big letter.It's hard to even rate this properly because it's hard to read and it makes my eyes ache.
this is shameless author, please give your suggestions and criticsas long as it will make my story better i'll take all your critics
This novel desperately needs an editor. The number of run on sentences are annoying as hell. I was quite excited to read this at first from the premise but once I got into it I couldn't continue reading.
the first sentence of this novel [Inside a small but luxurious bedroom, there is a handsome boy who has just awakened.]Now, you will understand how this novel will be. It's just a translated novel, and the grammar is written in a way that resembles how Chinese is translated into English, which is disappointing."
Just another system fic. I have come to despise them. It's take all the fun out off character development and give power to cheaply and without effort.
You should edit the chapters and make the first letter of the sentence a big letter.It's hard to even rate this properly because it's hard to read and it makes my eyes ache.
this is shameless author, please give your suggestions and criticsas long as it will make my story better i'll take all your critics
This novel desperately needs an editor. The number of run on sentences are annoying as hell. I was quite excited to read this at first from the premise but once I got into it I couldn't continue reading.