Sigh.....
I want to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude to all of you.
As a newbie writer working on my first novel, I have received a mix of reactions, some of which were not as positive as I had hoped.
However, I am incredibly thankful for those of you who appreciated my concepts and chapters, supported me, and provided valuable feedback. Your power stones, opinions, and constructive criticism have truly encouraged and helped me along the way.
With that being said, after careful consideration, I have made the difficult decision to bring this book to a close. I will no longer be posting any further chapters here.
Although I had made countless plans and scenarios in mind which included his zanpakuto like weapon, his connection with death and the other 3 pillars of reality, exploring his origins, his accidental transportation to another universe after an epic clash and his defeat i.e to (Universe - 616), about his journey to the other cosmos and then also thought about introducing and connecting it with two new main characters of other two novels blah blah blah.... the list goes on.
You know I have really thought of the far end future but I finally understood that having ideas is one thing, but effectively delivering them to the audience is a different challenge altogether.
So this would be the last chapter of it and for it was responsible mainly two reasons:-
1.) Firstly, I have received a range of reactions and comments, with a many expressing dissatisfaction with the recent chapters. As a writer, it's important for me to create a story that resonates with you, and despite rewriting it, I have been unable to achieve that goal.
2.) Secondly, the beginning of my college life is fast approaching. Settling into a new environment demands considerable time and effort, and I would have to postpone further updates for a few months, even if I didn't quit.
As I mentioned before, I have been working on enhancing the chapter descriptions and refining my writing style in this novel. However, you saw that my current efforts also have their limitation and this type of content was only within my capabilities for now. Crafting a narrative that resonates with each and every one of you is indeed a challenging endeavor.
However, before bidding farewell to this novel, I would like to sincerely address your concerns and seek your feedback regarding the weaknesses and flaws you have observed in my writing style and specific areas where you found it lacking throughout this rewritten novel.
I genuinely value your insights and urge you to provide detailed feedback rather than brief comments or GIFs, as some of the responses I received left me confused and unsure of their meaning.
I want to emphasize that I will be actively participating in this conversation and genuinely invite you to share your thoughts.
Your comments and insights are of great importance to me as I reflect on whether to continue with that 'cultivation novel' or even think of pursuing any future writing endeavors.