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this book was a good one but author decided to rewrite. any book that has a rewrite ends up being dropped. giving it 1* because it will be dropped soon if not already
i previously rate this fic as perfect 5 star. but back then the story is great and the chapters goes thru 170 chapters iirc. but then unfortunately the author decide to rewrite the whole thing and delete all the good story we reviewer so loved before. the new rewriten story is so completely different from before, a critical character issei is erased from existence. you can imagine that all these reviews before this one refer to completely different story you see now in this fic. the current fic is not necessarily bad but certainly boring and not interesting at all. so if you guys new reader see that there is a lot of positive reviews before my review, it was not meant for this current fic. still dont let this knowledge stop you from trying to read this fic! maybe its actually good for you bu certainly not for me
It's a disaster for a novel with 4.8 rating, which possibly bought or propped by alt accounts. I understand that this is just a smut but this thing just is unreadable.
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Author, please create Lady Pheonix with MC chapters. Anthen Lady Pheonix th***some with venelana. and finally oyakodon. And also with Riser Pheonix queen peerage.
Well, i only lasted 7 chaps. Rias is presented as a loose c*m dump, nothing like her original persona. Feels like author pulled the d3vils from h3ntai ntr and added his self-insert MC who sleeps with those loose dumps, while they still keep their relationships.Truly unpleasant. Can't read more.
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hello author I am currently writing this to you in regards to your story and I gotta say it's very good and I'm amazed at how you write the story and the level of details.I applaud you for your hard work and if you keep writing your dxd story until the end and hopefully your next story will be as good as your previous story.......p.s make them more smutty and take your time with it
Different from a normal story, only for perverts like me: v. So if you come looking for something else you can leave now :). .
Nice story and plot but the POV's are mixed and the writing is awkward. If u improve on these points the books will be 10 times better.
This High School Harem DxD lemon book are amazing. Just keep reading, just keep reading. 🇯🇵🎌💕🎌💕🎌💕🎌💕🇯🇵
Protagonist (Takashi Mitarai): 9.8/10 Harem: 10/10 Love: 9.6/10 Story: 10/10 ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️
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One of the best Harem DXD fanfic I ever read & really keeps getting better. (Really need to recommend to read this). One ❤️ love to Rias Gremory One 💜 love to Akeno Himejima
One of the best DXD Harem Fanfic I ever read & the best NTR (good version of NTR). (You know what, f**k Issei).
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
Shameless Review from the author. I Just wanna say I hope you enjoy my Fic For me it's a High Quality stuff, I hope it's the same for you And Yeah this Fic is still ongoing for at least 60 more chapters.. Cheers 🖤
this book was a good one but author decided to rewrite. any book that has a rewrite ends up being dropped. giving it 1* because it will be dropped soon if not already
i previously rate this fic as perfect 5 star. but back then the story is great and the chapters goes thru 170 chapters iirc. but then unfortunately the author decide to rewrite the whole thing and delete all the good story we reviewer so loved before. the new rewriten story is so completely different from before, a critical character issei is erased from existence. you can imagine that all these reviews before this one refer to completely different story you see now in this fic. the current fic is not necessarily bad but certainly boring and not interesting at all. so if you guys new reader see that there is a lot of positive reviews before my review, it was not meant for this current fic. still dont let this knowledge stop you from trying to read this fic! maybe its actually good for you bu certainly not for me
It's a disaster for a novel with 4.8 rating, which possibly bought or propped by alt accounts. I understand that this is just a smut but this thing just is unreadable.
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Author, please create Lady Pheonix with MC chapters. Anthen Lady Pheonix th***some with venelana. and finally oyakodon. And also with Riser Pheonix queen peerage.
Well, i only lasted 7 chaps. Rias is presented as a loose c*m dump, nothing like her original persona. Feels like author pulled the d3vils from h3ntai ntr and added his self-insert MC who sleeps with those loose dumps, while they still keep their relationships.Truly unpleasant. Can't read more.
Membuka SPOILER hello author I am currently writing this to you in regards to your story and I gotta say it's very good and I'm amazed at how you write the story and the level of details.I applaud you for your hard work and if you keep writing your dxd story until the end and hopefully your next story will be as good as your previous story.......p.s make them more smutty and take your time with it
Different from a normal story, only for perverts like me: v. So if you come looking for something else you can leave now :). .
Nice story and plot but the POV's are mixed and the writing is awkward. If u improve on these points the books will be 10 times better.
This High School Harem DxD lemon book are amazing. Just keep reading, just keep reading. 🇯🇵🎌💕🎌💕🎌💕🎌💕🇯🇵
Protagonist (Takashi Mitarai): 9.8/10 Harem: 10/10 Love: 9.6/10 Story: 10/10 ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️
Membuka SPOILER One of the best Harem DXD fanfic I ever read & really keeps getting better. (Really need to recommend to read this). One ❤️ love to Rias Gremory One 💜 love to Akeno Himejima
One of the best DXD Harem Fanfic I ever read & the best NTR (good version of NTR). (You know what, f**k Issei).
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
Shameless Review from the author. I Just wanna say I hope you enjoy my Fic For me it's a High Quality stuff, I hope it's the same for you And Yeah this Fic is still ongoing for at least 60 more chapters.. Cheers 🖤