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Bab 4: BEHIND THE SCENES

It has been four days since he got grounded along with his homies Dipper and Robbie. The got suspended for a week along with him from school.

His only reaction to that.

Vacation.

In this week he can only grind himself to be the very best of shape.

When he meets his homies, he is going to apologize roping them into this mess.

Hope their parents don't turn his robot into scrap.

It took time, blood and sweat to make it.

If not for his homies he could not even finish the first one.

Best of all he heard from his mom that at the very end they did not snitch on him.

They lied how they got it from an Alien but did not mention his name.

When he meets them again, he is going to party the hell out together.

His homeboys always coming to the clutch, true friends he can leave his back to.

Instead of having too many friends, make a friend that will not leave you at the moment of trouble.

The Group chat had been going okay for now, at least no one is calling names on each other. Not to mention he learned the troublesome fact that they were baited to click yes.

Irene Belserion for her dragon problem.

Poker Girl Yumeko for excitement.

Kurumi to get rid of her curse.

Esdeath to find a worthy opponent.

Maya Yotsuba to destroy the world or maybe something else.

In the chat Maya Yotsuba used all of her points to get a healing potion from Irene through trade channel in the guideline he wrote. Knowing her past he can only curse mankind for it and its worst impulses.

Irene was more than happy to provide it for Maya and getting those points she could use it to alleviate her pain as a hybrid dragon by buying a tool.

She was still bitching around not getting points but after Yumiko showed her world through screenshots she was intrigued.

Another world.

She was fascinated by the concept as she thought she had been tricked by this chat group and grumbling non-stop.

No one used Gacha yet which was still surprising.

Knowing the number of tears, blood and despair there was in playing gacha one can only say less about it.

As admin he can see who bought what in the shop and what is being traded.

Kurumi used her points to buy something that will purify curses.

Knowing the plot of "Date A live" he understands why.

Wescott can go fuck himself.

Esdeath is chilling literally as usual.

No one sold anything in the group which is a relief.

He cannot imagine what type of disaster it would cause.

Yumeko seems to be smart as she is spending time checking over the item that she wants.

She does not know which path to take and he appreciates she is planning out reading descriptions of all the abilities. He will only help her if she wants his advice, he does want to reach out first as it will seem to bossy.

This morning he bought mystic codes of fraga clan especially the suit.

The suit for enforcers is top notch.

He bought book for Bajiquan, some black keys and sacraments with their skill to use them and some materials to make a bounded field like ether clumps.

All of the cost around 3000 points for him.

But now comes the moment of truth.

Gacha.

The dreadful world that can cause create demon lord Gudako to receive critical damage.

Truly a force to be reckoned with.

Samuel shivers at the thought of it. But he had no problem playing gacha in real life.

He was rich as fuck in his past life.

But in this life, he is bound to puke blood.

First, he needs to buy some luck.

He gave a mental command and bought out the terminal and searched for an equipment that will give an increase in luck.

Surely, he found it.

[ORB OF GODESS RANNI| RANK: LEGENDARY | CREDITS: 5000 | SIDE AFFECTS: NEGATIVE KARMA INDUCTION]

[ORB OF GODESS RANNI: THIS WAS AN ORB GIVEN TO THE TARNISHED FOR ONE OF HIS QUESTS IN A DIFFERENT TIMELINE. IT POSSESES THE RUNE OF LUCK. ONCE USED IT WOULD INCREASE ONES LUCK FOR 24 HOURS. BUT BEWARE FOR THE USER. NEGATIVE KARMA WOULD FOLLOW UNTIL THE DEBT IS PAID]

Samuel gave a weary breath.

The debts of the past would be paid in the future.

A sacrifice must be made.

There is no free meal without consequences.

But Gacha is a one in a lifetime opportunity, no wonder Gudako became what she is.

The pain and despair of Gacha can change a man.

He would kill for a cigarette now.

With a sight Samuel made a resolute expression.

"Buy it"

[CONFRIM PURCHASE]

[Y/N]

"Yes"

With a flash of light an orb appeared in front of Samuel floating.

He grabbed it and put some mana into it.

He closed his eyes and remembered the image of his death to activate his circuits.

A blown-up space station.

As he input that magical energy, he realized something.

His circuit rotation speed increases every time he casts structural analysis and reinforcement.

It may be because of the excess mystery in the air not used to its fullest.

Quiet a boon.

His circuit quality would be better and better.

With a flash of light, a circular rune with serpents coiled on it appeared.

The concept on it is making him sweat.

The rune with a bright shine entered his body and gave a gold hue throughout his body.

Samuel clenched and unclenched his fist.

He feels good really good.

Now he is prepared.

Samuel sat on his study table and opened and opened the Gacha.

[WELCOME TO GACHA ROLL| PRICE OF EACH ROLL: 1000 CREDITS | NUMBER OF ROLLS LEFT: 7]

With a deep breath Samule started his journey of Gacha.

Suddenly Emiyas voice played on his head.

"That's hell you're walking into"

Samuel Grit his teeth and commenced his road to hell.

"Start first roll"

[CONFIRM FIRST ROLL]

[Y/N]

Witch that confirmation a drum appeared out of thin air and started rolling.

"Come on, come on something good"

After some time, the drum roll came to a stop.

There peaches were shown on the drum roll.

[CONGREATUALTIONS FOR PLAYING GACHA ROLL]

[YOU HAVE RECEIVED EX RANK BLACK KEYS X 50]

Samuel slowly lost the color of his eyes and some shades were forming on his eyes.

He can feel it.

The pain the mutual understanding of losing money for playing with fate.

He can now feel the pain of his brothers in arms.

He laughed at his colleagues at playing gacha being piss poor. He showed off by dumping millions on gacha.

But now he understands the bitter pain.

Karma is a bitch and it's already rearing its head.

[EX RANK BLACK KEYES: SPECIALLY MADE BLACK KEYES MADE MY SHIROU KOTOMINE. SOMETHING MIRACULOUS WAS DONE THAT NO ONE THOUGH OF. ADDING ENCHANTMENTS TO THE BUTT OF THE HANDLE OF KEYS FOR CHANGING DIRECTIONS USING WORDS LIKE "SET" OR "FIRE". NOT TO MENTION BOUNDED FIELDS CAN BE MADE USING THEM. NOT ONLY THAT SEVERAL SPELLS ARE USED AS EXPERIMENTS TO SEE SEVERAL EFFECTS. ONE IS TRAPPING SOMEONE BY PLANTING IT IN THEIR SHADOW OR ELECTROCUTING THEM ON SPOT]

"T-that's not bad" Samule can imagine the endless potential of black keys.

[PS: NOTE WAS ADDED BY THE MODERATOR WHILE ADMIN RECEIVED THIS GIFT]

[MODERATOR: YOROKOBE SHOUNEN, MAY YOU HAVE A BLESSED LIFE]

Samule stood up and flipped his table.

Thank God his mom went out shopping today.

He is going to commit bloody murder nowadays.

Samuel sat back on his seat.

No time to waste for him.

He has to finish it today.

"Roll again" Samuel said with a tired voice.

[CONFIRM ANOTHER ROLL]

[Y/N]

"Y-es" Samuel said with reluctance.

The drum rolled again as he remained slumped on his seat.

If he ever visits Elden Ring, he would throw shot on Ranni.

The drum comes to stop on three gold coins.

[SKILL: SYNERGIST AND TRANSMUTATION | ORIGIN: ARIFUTERA]

Samuel now sat straight in his chair.

That was an ability he could fuck with.

With his knowledge in Engineering, he could make anything he wanted exactly the thing he wanted.

He did not look at the description and moved for the next roll.

"Next roll and the answers are yes"

[CONFIRMED COMMENCING THIRD, FOURTH, FIFTH, SIXTH AND SEVENTH ROLL]

"Wait what"

Samule had a dumbfounded expression.

Seven drum barrels kept rolling.

Samuel can only resign himself to his fate.

Time by time he sees drum rolls come to stop.

One on a Cherry.

One at a Joker.

Other at a banana.

Last two on different drinks.

[ALL ROLL COMPLETE]

[GENERATING RESULTS]

[1ST ITEM: MEMEORIZE | ORIGIN: A RETURNERS MAGIC SHOULD BE SPECIAL | RANK: LEGENDARY]

[2ND ITEM: PHONEIX EMBRACE | ORIGIN: I WILL KILL THE AUTHOR | RANK: SEMI DIVINE]

[3RD GIFT: MYSTIC EYE OF ANALYSIS | ORIGIN: NASUVERSE | RANK: MYTHICAL]

[4TH GIFT: BOOKS ON RUNES OF AROA | ORIGIN: THE BEGINNING AFTER THE END | RANK: GOD]

[5th ITEM: MASTER MORPHER | ORIGIN: POWER RANGERS | RANK: MYTHICAL]

Samule was speechless.

He hit the jack pot!

The start was shaky but the end was legendary.

[MEMORIZE: ABILTY TO STORE FIVE SPELLS AT A TYPE OF ANY GRADE AND TYPE. CAN CREATE ANY VARIATION OF SPEELS AS SOON AS IT IS INPUTTED WITH SPELLS]

[PHOENIX EMBRACE: A SEMI-DIVINE ARMOUR MAKE BY A DWARF WHO WANTED TO GIVE IT TO PEOPLE WHO WERE WORTHY OF IT.

IT HAS THE ABILITY TO REDUCE DAMAGE OF AN ATTACK 90 PERCENT OF AN ATTACK.

IF DISCARDED IT WILL ICREASE THE USER'S STAT IN A DIFFERENT REALM.

IT HAS A SECOND LIFE THAT WILL BE USED WHEN THE USER HAS DIED.

THE ARMOUR WILL NOT BE BOUGHT BACK A SECOND TIME]

[MYSTIC EYES OF ANALYSIS: SPECIAL EYES THAT CAN SEE THE FLOW OF THE WORLD. IT CAN SEE THE INFORMATION OF AN OBJECT IF IT IS NOT BEYOND THE USER'S COMPREHENSION. IT CAN SEE THE FLOW OF LIFE OF THE WORLD. ONLY FEW WERE ABLE TO OBTAIN SUCH GIFTS, USERS WHO WERE PROMTLY EXECUTED BY THE COUNTER FORCE]

Samuel had to double check for the fourth one.

"Alaya is a bitch for sure, he supposes Emiya did it on her orders" Samule says with a tired sigh.

[Would you like to receive the Items and Gifts?]

"Keep Memorize, Black Keys, Morpher and Books on inventory" Sam accessed the inventory with some points.

"Give me Phoenix Embrace and the Mystic Eyes"

[ORDER CONFIRMED]

Suddenly Samuel felt itchy on his chest and same for his eyes.

The closed and opened his eyes.

If he had a mirror, he would see binary code was running on it.

Through the window he saw the world in a different color.

Samuel walked towards the window and looked over the world.

He can see the trees in a green hue.

World in a mixture of several colors.

He can see the blue hue in the skies looking at the flow of Ether in air.

Something caught his eyes while he was looking at the trees.

He was looking at several lines being connected and other far away from the streets going from the ground to a faraway place.

"This must be ley lines" Samuel said in an amazed voice.

His eyes felt dry and he closed it and signaled for the circuits in his eyes to close.

His head was throbbing with pain.

It may be of too much information.

Suddenly he had an idea a stroke of genius needed for his Longinus.

If he could get all the Leylines.

His Longinus can take over barrier spaces.

So, if he makes a bounded field on each one of them, no he does not have to do it for all of them but make an anchor on each.

Leylines are coveted land for people to harbor.

He cannot imagine other than five principal clans in Japan and Cultivators in China coveting it.

Heck even dumb fox Yasaka uses it as a source of her power in Kyoto.

But for America? What of it?

It's free real estate baby!

The only trouble he would get in for in Roman, Greek and Biblical Pantheons.

Greek and Roman do not give a damn.

Biblical Pantheon has their own problem.

Only problem is phantasmal species taking over it.

Not to mention fallen angels lurking around.

For a Longinus user like him he is prime candidate for recruitment or to be executed for having too much power.

He can understand Azazels motive somewhat.

Recruiting Sacred gear users.

Not only will he be able to study them but try to replicate them to be sold to the highest bidder.

Not only other pantheons like Norse int the future would be interested but The Fallen angel faction have a market in the business.

Great income to have and some resources to be traded from other pantheons.

Smart Fucker.

There is also politics joined with it.

Since Big G kicked the bucket the three factions are vulnerable to attacks. It would not have been a problem if heaven could make angels using the system and had it running. But they are locked out from most of the functions. The Devils are doing good as they can increase their numbers. But the problem is there is not much super devils to go by to protect the territory.

So, the only solution for the Fallen, Angels and Devils to survive is to work together and show a strong front.

Angels with their system as a suicide bomb witch amount of fate stored in it.

Fallen as an important resource as researchers to provide hidden juicy experiments on sacred gears and much more.

Devils who multiply like cockroaches using evil piece system.

That was not the only worse thing about them.

Just imagine taking your bae and making them their bitch.

Not only that but a slave.

Worse then NTR if someone asks them.

Taking a candy from a baby.

Not only that but the deal is not too bad.

You become a devil's slave and you receive long life span and resources for research. But there are problems with it.

Evil piece forcing commands like a dog on a leash.

Not getting out the contract forever.

Bad life decisions.

Ajuka is scary then anyone can ever imagine, he needs to prepare for the time when he deals with him.

Best case its Desir Armans Anti-Mage skills or Alpha Stigma.

One thing he knows for sure.

He is no one's bitch.

Any devil or fallen coming towards is going to take a Fat L.

Angels he can work with them on hire but not as an angel.

Hero Faction can also take a Fat L.

He needs to go to Japan also Romania maybe.

If there is a chance, he could get the Sephiroth Graal and Bolt.

He will leave Issei Hyouddo as he is as he will work as good bait.

He has an opportunity.

Sephiroth Graal and Telos Karma.

He needs to get strong and fast.

He needs to take both of them and fast.

Telos Karma will be the first grab.

After his problem with school, he will visit some leylines for the plan he has.

First of all, he needs to set up protective bounded field so no one knows about him.

Samule went to his drawer and bought out papers with runes drawn on it.

"It's time to stick them throughout the house, not only will it mask my presence but shock any intruders from entering"

He wonders what others in the chat group are doing.

!!!!!!!CHAT GROUP MEMBERS POV!!!!

!!!!!MAYA YOUTSUBA!!!!!

In a balcony near the forest a lone girl was having tea under the moon light.

She took a sip on the cup with a grace of a lady and put it back on the table and slumped back on the chair.

A smile graced her face that would charm any man who would have seen her.

She was the most beautiful flower in her prime at the age of 20.

She was flower but a flower with thorns that shed too much blood.

She looked down on her stomach and held it, an unknown warmth rose in her heart.

Was it happiness or relief?

She does not know.

Her emotions were stripped away from her long time ago.

From that one fateful day.

Year 2062 Dahan.

She can remember the memories clearly like it was yesterday.

When she looks at the memories it seemed it was a movie of a girl with a tragic fate.

The only thing she can is how sad it is.

But can she even feel empathy any more.

The only reason she can chalk up this feeling because it was chalked these emotions up when she was young and naïve.

Left over data to make a response on it.

That's all that became of her.

Data and Information.

Living the rest of her life in a cage that is called human body.

Using it like android being programmed to do.

One thing she does feel.

Is rage.

Rage against the world.

First, she felt rage against her family and sister.

But after she learned from Hanayama as he broke his silence about the matter.

All she had a hysterical laughter about this.

The left-over love of her father was only endless suffering.

He should have just let her die, why didn't he let her die.

What he left behind was not his daughter he cherished but a demon in a husk.

She thought she will live the rest of her life like this, why not go with a bang.

Her only hope was her sister who could be the only one to give birth.

They say it is the mother's mental fortitude that give rise to child's magic.

Since her sister look her sense her self it is only right for her to take her child as compensation.

A child that will bathe this world in blood.

That was the plan anyways but something very weird and exciting happened in a life.

Just like always she was sitting under a moonlight drink tea and having sweets, but suddenly a terminal appeared out of nowhere.

[ADMIN: INNOVADE CLEAR HAS SENT YOU AN INVITATION FOR THE DIMESNIONAL GROUP CHAT]

[DO ACCEPT TO JOIN THE GROUP?]

[Y/N]

Maya tilted her head at the screen.

This was really curious.

Maya swiftly took her CAD and casted a mental interference spell and scanning spell on the area but results came out negative.

There was no one around the area.

Strange.

Maya held her finger on her lips.

If this Admin really wanted her dead, he would have used whatever magic for this terminal to mess with her brain.

It's not like she is fond of her life anyway.

So, she was curious smile made on her face.

"What will I get joining this group?" Maya asked with a curious tone.

[WAHTEVER, YOU WANT EXITS IN THIS GROUP]

"Whatever you say? For example, if I wanted make this world bow to me can I get such power?" Maya asked with a curious glint her eyes.

[YES]

"Then I accept" Maya said with a deranged smile.

[ACKNOWLEDGED]

[INTIALIZING]

[WELCOME QUEEN OF NIGHT TO THE DIMENSIONAL CHAT GROUP]

[STARTING PACK GENERATED]

[CREDITS: 5000, GACHA ROLL: 1 FREE TRILE]

[GENERATING STATS]

Name: Maya Yotsuba

Race Psionic Human/Carbon-based

Class Mage

Level 1

Stats

Health 85 /100 [Damaged Body Recommended to but heath potions from store]

Stamina 16

Magical Energy 500 000

Strength 20 Agility 100

Endurance 15 Intelligence 900 Charm 10 000

Luck 10

Credits: 5000

[INNATE SKILL: METEOR STREAM]

[Magic skills:

1) Accel Magic

2) Mental Interference Magic

3) Barrier Magic

4) Icicle Stream

]

Maya raised her eyebrows at the statement for her heath. Also, what does it mean by store?

Maya quickly checked the message section of the termina.

[ADMIN: INNOVADE CLEAR: ADMIN HERE JUST TO LET YOU KNOW WHO ARE JOINING THE GROUP. I HAVE WRITTEN GUIDELINES AND PDF DOCUMENTS HOW TO NAVIGATE THE GROUP CHAT.

THERE ARE LINKS FOR THE STORE, TRADE AND STORAGE OPTIONS HERE. NOT TO MENTION OTHER APLICATIONS LIKE PHOTOS AND DESTRIPTIONS ON HOW TO TAKE A PICTURE ARE GIVEN IN IN.

I HAVE GIVEN SHORTCUTS HERE TO GOT TO STORE AND GACHA TO BE USED.

PIECE OF ADVICE FROM ADMIN CHOOSE WISELY.

DON'T SCREAM LIKE DUMB FUCKS IF SOMETHING IS NOT GOING YOUR WAY IT NEVER DOES.

YOU HAVE TO BEND THE WORLD TO MAKE IT GO YOUR WAY.

SO, WORK FOR IT.

THERE ARE CREDITS HERE CALLED MONEY SO USE IT CAREFULLY.

MONEY THAT YOU GET BY DOING WORK.

THIS DIMESIONAL CHAT GROUP WAS MADE TO HIRE YOU AS MERCENARIES. IF YOU WANT OUT, I CAN GET YOU OUT OF HERE.

JUST SAY IT.

ALSO, NO BITCHING AND SNITCHING ON ONE ANOTHER, BE CIVILIZED.

OR I'LL KICK YOU OUT OF THE BOAT.

NO HARM OR KILLING INTENTION ON TEAMMATES, I WILL ALSO KICK YOU OUT AT THAT MOMENT.

IF YOU THINK YOU CAN SUBDUE ME, THINK AGAIN, YOU WILL BE AUTOMTICALLY KICKED OUT AND I SET THIS PLACE.

ADMIN PRIVELAGES TO SUCK ON IT.

HERE IS THE DEAL, YOU WILL BE SENT TO DIFFERENT DIMENSION TO FIX ANAMOLIES AND WHEN YOU ARE DONE WITH IT YOU WILL GET CREDITS.

SIMPLE RIGHT?

WITH THAT YOU CAN BUT WHATEVER YOU WANT FROM THE STORE.

USE IT TO BUT SOMETHING TO REVOLUTIONIZE THE WORLD OR BLOW IT UP.

GUESS WHAT I DON'T CARE.

THIS IS ADMIN: INNOVADE CLEAR SIGNING OUT]

Maya was in this moment of her life had never felt the urge to slap someone.

One was her failure of a fiancé then it was this guy.

The admin basically told her to fuck off and find out the instructions by our own on her group.

She had a lot of questions.

Who made this group?

What does it mean by dimensional travel?

What is it made for?

Who and what do they need to kill?

She has never seen that irresponsible guy who not even told them to get a single Q/A session with the rest of the group.

Though there are pdfs.

She is not sure if they are reliable or even true.

"Haa I can only read this Pdf's to see what this is about" Maya looked at the title on the first file.

[WHAT TO PACK AND EXPECT WHEN GOING TO ANOTHER DIMENSION: SIMPLE GET A DIMESIONAL ID FROM THE STORE]

Maya was amused so this guy was not irresponsible but borderline rude and disrespectful.

Well, she needs to check up on this merry band she will be part in.

[DRAGON QUEEN HAS JOINED THE GROUP]

"Now this is ought to be interesting" Maya looked at the name with a curious glint.

!!!!! IRENE POV!!!!!

IRENE did not have any ounce of rest when suddenly something popped up in a blue square.

First she observed the square thing Infront of her before she launched an attack on it.

Sad to say apportion of Zeref's castle is no more.

He can bill her she is rich after all.

Consequences be damned.

She will get rid of it this nuisance once and for all.

!!!!!A YEAR LATER!!!!!

She has given up on herself.

What is the meaning of life for her anymore.

She tried everything in her power to get rid of it.

She has tried Magic, Soul Magic, Mind Magic and Even Fairy law to get rid of it.

She did not care about Ankersham and his curse.

When Zeref saw her, he looked at her with a face she hasn't seen before.

He came and personally stopped her from casting fairy law.

She was out of options.

She was the greatest known witch ever and she lost to a blue box.

She was now drinking in a bar shunning her students.

She cannot taste food but alcohol is enough for her to satiate her state.

By lowering her immunity with magic, she can feel drunk.

One of the successful experiments she had while turning herself back to human.

Suddenly the screen popped up Infront of her startling her.

But she did not care.

When she talked to Zeref about it, he told her to quit and take a break and that she is going crazy.

If only he knew half of it.

Irene opened her eyes from her and looked blankly at the screen.

First it was blurry but later she made up some words on it she did not make up at first as she was intent on erasing it.

[DO YOU WANT TO BE HUMAN AGAIN? IF SO, JOIN THE DIMESIONAL CHAT GROUP]

She wondered if it was some type of joke if there was anyway, she could she would have sold her soul.

All the agonizing days she feels her skin crawl of dragon flesh and human flesh meshing together.

The pain of having being stitched and broken part.

She cut her connection to her pain receptors long ago.

But she can still feel it her skin crawling to let one dominate the other.

The only reason she followed Zeref for the hope of having a solution.

Irene looks at the screen with a flushed face and gives a tired sigh.

"If you can make me free of this curse I would give my soul to you"

[ACKNOWLEDING COMMAND]

[INITIALIZING]

[WELCOME TO DIMESIONAL CHAT GROUP]

Irene could not see the message and promptly fell asleep.

!!!!!!JABAMI YUMEKO!!!!!

Yumeko was bored out of her mind.

To all the countries casinos she visited she did not find a single opponent that would get her blood boiling.

Suddenly a blue window Infront of her eyes startling her.

[WANT TO HAVE FUN JOIN THE DIMESIONAL GROUP CHAT]

[y/n]

Yumeko was ecstatic.

She read fanfictions her fiends given her about this thing.

Now all such fantasy became true?

Though it might be a hoax but who was she.

She is a gambler who bets herself on the line.

"Yes"

The rest was history.

!!!!!Esdeath!!!!

Yumeko was not the only one bored a certain general had enough of weak rebels of the south.

Can no one satisfy her desire for battle?

Suddenly a blue screen popped up infront of her eyes.

She quickly used her Teigu and shot several ice barrages but when she saw what was Infront of her she was confused.

Something was written in a blue box.

[WANT TO FIGHT STRONG FOES JOIN THE DIMESIONAL GROUP CHAT]

"IS THAT A CHALLENEGE! I ACCEPT!"

[ORDER CONFIRMED]

!!!!!!KURUMI!!!!

She was having tea in a white room with a white figure that visited Samuel.

"Vice Admin for a Dimensional Group Chat?" Kurumi said with a hollow tone.

[DO YOU ACCEPT?]

"Yes"


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