I really don't want to open a harem here

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Abhii_28

Hmm, the Rating seems much lower than what I thought it would've, so I am giving it 5 stars, not that I wouldn't have given the same otherwise.Tbh I wanted to write much more, like so much more but even after so much editing, my review still isn't showing, so I'll post in Author's note, now here's a short version, It revolves around the fact that the girls in he*tai are so timid and cowardly that they would give in to the person who threatens them, to save their loved ones.Take Akane Nanao, for example. Despite having conclusive evidence against her blackmailer, she is still afraid of him and never considers reporting him to the authorities due to the fear that her sweetheart would also face punishment for breaking club rules.That's the whole context of the fanfic!The world is cruel, and no one is going to save you, except for yourself!So, after this story (Akane Nanao's), he is just an assist provider who occasionally scores a few goals, and the heroines are the main strikers.It's about them standing up for themselves and facing their fears, with Mu Xiaoxiao supporting them from behind.He will save them, protect them, squeeze some points from those yellow hairs by breaking their defense, and then the heroines will cripple them.Before he kills them all!

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Sir_Jadeja

About the fanfiction.. Protagonist: The protagonist is a pure hater of NTR and it's all about killing the yellow hairs and saving those girls.. Characters: The heroines, well they are cowardly and stupid..like every girl on such type should be, but as the story progresses they also become the partners of justice with the protagonist, face their fears and kill those yellow hairs. Harem: The protagonist had a dream to open a harem just like every guy who transmigrates into an anime world but after knowing what kind of world it is, he refuses to open a harem..but well there's harem tag so whether he refuses or not doesn't matter.. Translation: That's probably the main point every one focussed on. But I just want to say that, The translation is actually quite decent if you ignore a few chinese metaphors which are quite easy to understand, for me they were, I don't know for any one else.. Also the translator has added many scenes that were not in te original fanfic..and actually there were many.. I know because I've read the original and I can say that he did a brilliant job. If you have not read the original one you wouldn't even know, they fit so perfectly in the story and actually made it better to read.. A lot of people have problem with the main character's name but it's fine, And if you have time then you can just add another version exactly the same as this one, using a japanese name, that would just make them shut up. So, overall even with all the problems, it deserves 4.5 stars, but since this is a proper NTR bashing fanfic and because the author did a lot of work to translate this, I am giving it 5 stars.

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DogLickerGods

I hope MC advises those stupid girls in the NTR world to have the common sense to report people who want to blackmail them to the police instead of fearing this and that. To be honest, girls in the NTR world often lack brain cells. They are more afraid of getting kicked out of the club or other stupid things rather than respecting their own bodies.

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Devils_and_angels

I tried reading this but I just can't I read the first 2 chapters and it has to many Chinese metaphor's that don't make sense etc. if your translating you should fix that

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fallenknight90

This concept is amazing because I am sick of being tired of female characters in the NTR world is so stupid and I hope you keep writing more of these and can increase the words in the chapters to better enjoy this and hope MC gets a harem with these female characters and straighten up them up

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Mastersun

the story is not bad, but for me the biggest disadvantage of this story is the Chinese name of the main character. Because against the background of Japanese names, it hurts the eye very much.

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Revered_Sovereign

Tbh deserves 5 stars [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Kill those Yellow hairs .. And add others h*ntai too, Make his harem big & Most importantly, Don't drop, and Don't slow down the updates Is there any fanfic similar to this???

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lorddias

(My humble opinion) This kind of fic is the one that gets better. the more you advance the chapters. despite not being new a hen@i world fic. It's practically news from someone who spanks. villains (NTR). I hope the author. improve the attitude of the (MC). with the heroines. also taking away the fear of the author abandoning the work. not much to criticize. a tsudere bully who beats up villains (NTR) afterwards, has fun with the heroines (good and bad). a giant harem. And evil and frustrated men.(protagonists and villains).and everything we want to see. This fic has potential. I don't want it to end so soon. thanks

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Haku_Ouroboros

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SAURON_

alright the only thing you need to do is make this flow better and allowing readers to understand more also please change the system because it's really weird and inferior to the system i messaged you about author.

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Garland

The most interesting thing about the fanfic is the whole hentaiverse which alone allows for a large number of good characters and situations. The writing has some problems as it can sometimes become confusing on what is going on. The System is just their, doesn't really explain itself and is mostly used just for the plot. Its not fully explained and while I understand its reward system, it is sometimes vague that it feels like its rewards are just their to pull something to help in the plot. The main issue and problem that i think lowers the story overall is the MC, Mu Xiaoxiao. Besides his Chinese name and overall character that feels like came from a Chinese novel, his personality is cringe, boring, inconsistent and sometimes just annoying. He doesn't really feel like an actual character and sometimes acts kinda dumb in situation. He is mostly passive unless things force him despite knowing how his system rewards him. Its like if he was going to be rewarded by picking an apple while being surrounded by apple trees, instead of actually picking one, he just waits and sits around until an apple falls. He is so passive that situations has the be forced to start in order for him to act. Sure in later chapters he does become a little active but from the start, he was very passive. It's fine if it is what the system needs him to do but the system, like i have said, is so vague and confusing in explanation that it doesn't make sense. Overall the story is interesting, being set in the hentaiverse, but Mu Xuaoxiao tends to be just the most uninteresting parts at times.

LV 4

Bikesh_Rai

I love this book I hate ntr and the bad ending of the girls but this book can make a good ending for the girls please don't drop it please 🥺

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Gency_Nda

Amazing. Hope you are not going to drop it and update frequently[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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HentaiGod

this is one of the Chinese fanfic that's good and keeps getting better. the mc is a pure hater of ntr and well he's basically hero of justice with a lot of brutality and violence. not only that even the heroines becomes his parner of justice. unlike other stories where heroines are pokemon who are just collected, the heroines actually have their active roles. the mc also has harem but treats them well. i have read the raw chapters like 100 chaps and it's pretty good.

LV 4

Ace_on

SOO GOOD.the satisfaction i got when mc exploding yellow hairs.

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raycrimson

first of this is Chinese second mc is a hypocrite and third it is garbage

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DeejaeSutherland

Don't read, terrible translation. Don't read, terrible translation.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

The protagonist's name has to be changed; you can call him Max, Peter, Antonio, Ivan... There are no excuses for publishing a fanfic novel with such horrible spelling. To publish a novel in English or another language, you must correctly use the spelling rules of the language and adapt it to the cultural context of that language. It's not easy, but using an incomprehensible and inconsistent Chinese name in a novel written in English for a non-Chinese audience is stupid.

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ArsaSou

I liked it a lot, after all I hate NTR. As it is a work translated from Chinese, it is normal to have expressions that are a little strange for us, but it is not so bad for those who are used to it. Author, what is the name of the original work?

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Nika_5

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