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Tulis ulasanThis novel should have a good future if the translator has done a proper job. Too many mistakes with gender - confusing he with she and vice versa. There are also lots of error with mistake of MC's name often confusing with other characters. The confusion could be due to all having surname Lin.
This “story” is only a bad machine language translation (MTL) with no editing. I would not be surprised to find it was MTL’d by ChatGPT.
many translation issues especially with he and she.chapter 4 is exactly the same as chapter 3. so there is a missing chapter.
Do not waste your coins or fps on this book its one of the worst ones i have read on here to this date
to call this edited mtl would be overpraising it. its just mtl. garbage translation, and plot, and writing, and character design. and whats funny is its not even the worst novel this week. read "rage of the dragon" from the trial read this week and this book and your iq will drop a dozen points
Horrible writing, horrible story, horrible translation. Stay as far away from this garbage as possible. I made it three chapters in, and even that's more than it deserved.
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Membuka SPOILERNot recommend, as chapter 4 is missing. Otherwise, really good story so far. Translation is fair, mostly with gender issues.
This novel should have a good future if the translator has done a proper job. Too many mistakes with gender - confusing he with she and vice versa. There are also lots of error with mistake of MC's name often confusing with other characters. The confusion could be due to all having surname Lin.
This “story” is only a bad machine language translation (MTL) with no editing. I would not be surprised to find it was MTL’d by ChatGPT.
many translation issues especially with he and she.chapter 4 is exactly the same as chapter 3. so there is a missing chapter.
Do not waste your coins or fps on this book its one of the worst ones i have read on here to this date
to call this edited mtl would be overpraising it. its just mtl. garbage translation, and plot, and writing, and character design. and whats funny is its not even the worst novel this week. read "rage of the dragon" from the trial read this week and this book and your iq will drop a dozen points
Horrible writing, horrible story, horrible translation. Stay as far away from this garbage as possible. I made it three chapters in, and even that's more than it deserved.
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Membuka SPOILER
Not recommend, as chapter 4 is missing. Otherwise, really good story so far. Translation is fair, mostly with gender issues.