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Me gusta. La historia parece tener buen rumbo y el autor no se ha emocionado y convirtió esto en un self-insert con cumplimiento de deseo cosa que por desgracia suele pasar bastante seguido
its only been 3 chapters, but I will rate what I've seen so far. (first review LETS GOOOOOOO) the author already proved his writing quality in all his stories and this one feels the same, 5 stars The stability of updates seems regular, I would hope its consistent, so 5 stars. story development is a bit fast, but its also his youth years and less important things that were skipped, he also introduced all the characters briefly to give us the idea for their personalities and beliefs. character design is pretty good, the MC is interesting and fun to follow, the OC's havn't really got time to shine in these 3 chapters tho, I'll still give 5 stars world background, the author even in these 3 chapters built a little of the world and shown some aspects we wouldn't see in the show, 5 stars.
Me gusta. La historia parece tener buen rumbo y el autor no se ha emocionado y convirtió esto en un self-insert con cumplimiento de deseo cosa que por desgracia suele pasar bastante seguido
its only been 3 chapters, but I will rate what I've seen so far. (first review LETS GOOOOOOO) the author already proved his writing quality in all his stories and this one feels the same, 5 stars The stability of updates seems regular, I would hope its consistent, so 5 stars. story development is a bit fast, but its also his youth years and less important things that were skipped, he also introduced all the characters briefly to give us the idea for their personalities and beliefs. character design is pretty good, the MC is interesting and fun to follow, the OC's havn't really got time to shine in these 3 chapters tho, I'll still give 5 stars world background, the author even in these 3 chapters built a little of the world and shown some aspects we wouldn't see in the show, 5 stars.
pls give me mooorrrreeeee chapters plllllleeeeaaaaaasssss