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great adult story. with a variety of romantic and fantasy scenes and stories. just for the words please fix it again because it makes me a little confused and don't understand
an interesting story!! but there are some words that confuse me... but i appreciate your hard work. keep writing and i will keep supporting you!!!
amazing imaginative story. I hope you can make the story more hot and suspenseful. more sensitive and also more mature... I hope your writing can continue to exist and I can still read it....
quite an interesting story. represents a woman's story and is packaged quite challengingly. keep writing and i support you....[img=recommend]
This is my first adult novel and I hope you enjoy the storyline and the adult content. apologize if many of my writings are wrong and wrong in structuring the language. because I come from Indonesia and am also in the stage of learning English. Thank you all for your support and I hope that my novel will become your favorite reading. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
great adult story. with a variety of romantic and fantasy scenes and stories. just for the words please fix it again because it makes me a little confused and don't understand
an interesting story!! but there are some words that confuse me... but i appreciate your hard work. keep writing and i will keep supporting you!!!
amazing imaginative story. I hope you can make the story more hot and suspenseful. more sensitive and also more mature... I hope your writing can continue to exist and I can still read it....
quite an interesting story. represents a woman's story and is packaged quite challengingly. keep writing and i support you....[img=recommend]
This is my first adult novel and I hope you enjoy the storyline and the adult content. apologize if many of my writings are wrong and wrong in structuring the language. because I come from Indonesia and am also in the stage of learning English. Thank you all for your support and I hope that my novel will become your favorite reading. [img=recommend][img=recommend]