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Only 8 chapters to date but this work has amazing potential. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it
Me gusta este fanfic, aunque hay algunas cosas un poco cuestionables con respecto a temas de DC y pocket hunting, son cosas que se pueden pasar por alto y pues le dan ese toque de originalidad del autor, se disfruta leyendo este tipo de historias, no lo dejes caer
the idea is good but the execution is horrible not to mention there so many issues with the plot like I get you want to progress the story but the way your doing this is just horrible
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Hey, it might not be perfect but it's still good. Probably the only downside is the choices of the MC. Well, you gotta understand though that not all MC's are gonna be perfect. A 8.5/10 IMHO
MC has a serious problem of pulling undeserved and inexplicable powers out of nowhere while he way too weak. If you're writing a fanfic with the DC universe, use the DC opportunities for that kind of thing. Then the 'mind' inspiration orbs can be used to improve stuff from then on. Also MC wants to plagiarise media from IRL for money which is a red flag for him getting rich without deserving it because he remembers every song and book word for word and note for note guys!
I like the concept of this novel. However you have failed in everything else. First the MC is brain dead hero complex. Why eat the orbs at hospital you should of just waited to be discharge then use the orbs. Second why are you doing stunts out of your window oh.... so everyone can know you have changed an make a target of yourself. Third you should at least have the MC make smart decision an if you can't then make sure MC doesn't make bad decisions.
author..is the cultivation system of pocket hunting dimension brought or is just the dimension itself.
us there any romance? if yes will their be harem? cause he should be strong enough for one and the various races don't oppose polygamy.
I really don’t understand the point of constantly making new fics just to drop them after 10 or so chapters.
Only 8 chapters to date but this work has amazing potential. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it
Me gusta este fanfic, aunque hay algunas cosas un poco cuestionables con respecto a temas de DC y pocket hunting, son cosas que se pueden pasar por alto y pues le dan ese toque de originalidad del autor, se disfruta leyendo este tipo de historias, no lo dejes caer
the idea is good but the execution is horrible not to mention there so many issues with the plot like I get you want to progress the story but the way your doing this is just horrible
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Hey, it might not be perfect but it's still good. Probably the only downside is the choices of the MC. Well, you gotta understand though that not all MC's are gonna be perfect. A 8.5/10 IMHO
MC has a serious problem of pulling undeserved and inexplicable powers out of nowhere while he way too weak. If you're writing a fanfic with the DC universe, use the DC opportunities for that kind of thing. Then the 'mind' inspiration orbs can be used to improve stuff from then on. Also MC wants to plagiarise media from IRL for money which is a red flag for him getting rich without deserving it because he remembers every song and book word for word and note for note guys!
I like the concept of this novel. However you have failed in everything else. First the MC is brain dead hero complex. Why eat the orbs at hospital you should of just waited to be discharge then use the orbs. Second why are you doing stunts out of your window oh.... so everyone can know you have changed an make a target of yourself. Third you should at least have the MC make smart decision an if you can't then make sure MC doesn't make bad decisions.
author..is the cultivation system of pocket hunting dimension brought or is just the dimension itself.
us there any romance? if yes will their be harem? cause he should be strong enough for one and the various races don't oppose polygamy.
I really don’t understand the point of constantly making new fics just to drop them after 10 or so chapters.