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I wish author could explain things instead of stretching it so long without a shread of information, I get what he's trying to do but this works very poorly in fanfic gnere where people come after being bored of mainstrem cliches and style. Still 5 star for writing and design but not much in development and background so far. I will update if the reveal is a mindblowing as the setting or if its just another bust.
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One of the rare Marvel fanfics not based on the MCU, basic premise is very intriguing. While the idea of depending on the masses for power ups has been used, the execution has been done well in this story. Hope the story continues to live up to its potential and doesn't become a complicated mess as it progresses
CHECK MY PATREON FOR ADVANCE CHAPTER ======================= Hello, my lovely audience!! Are you enjoying the novel? Do you want more chapters prior to the free release schedule? Could you be willing to spare some bucks for that? Which will also be a way to support me!! Check my patreon for further information. Thank you for your time & have a nice day!! ======================
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You should consider therapy to get out of the great depression. Its borderline good, could stumble to bad later on but I am willing to take that risk. Ready my fanfic though if you want, Batman in MCU
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Seems like a really good start. I remember the Translator assuring that won't happen, but.... Im worried about the hints of ccp induced stupidity i sense from time to time.. (black men in bling who are also drugging trying to rob m.c., a heavy over emphasis on economic crisis and the repeated mention of "failure of capitalism".) So I'm wondering what kind of typical xenophobic, misogynistic, anti-ppl, ulta-nationalist propaganda is going to get thrown at me... but overall, this seems like a really good grounded story.
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I wish author could explain things instead of stretching it so long without a shread of information, I get what he's trying to do but this works very poorly in fanfic gnere where people come after being bored of mainstrem cliches and style. Still 5 star for writing and design but not much in development and background so far. I will update if the reveal is a mindblowing as the setting or if its just another bust.
Excellent novel. Good translation. What's the name of the raw novel? 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
One of the rare Marvel fanfics not based on the MCU, basic premise is very intriguing. While the idea of depending on the masses for power ups has been used, the execution has been done well in this story. Hope the story continues to live up to its potential and doesn't become a complicated mess as it progresses
CHECK MY PATREON FOR ADVANCE CHAPTER ======================= Hello, my lovely audience!! Are you enjoying the novel? Do you want more chapters prior to the free release schedule? Could you be willing to spare some bucks for that? Which will also be a way to support me!! Check my patreon for further information. Thank you for your time & have a nice day!! ======================
Membuka SPOILER You should consider therapy to get out of the great depression. Its borderline good, could stumble to bad later on but I am willing to take that risk. Ready my fanfic though if you want, Batman in MCU
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Seems like a really good start. I remember the Translator assuring that won't happen, but.... Im worried about the hints of ccp induced stupidity i sense from time to time.. (black men in bling who are also drugging trying to rob m.c., a heavy over emphasis on economic crisis and the repeated mention of "failure of capitalism".) So I'm wondering what kind of typical xenophobic, misogynistic, anti-ppl, ulta-nationalist propaganda is going to get thrown at me... but overall, this seems like a really good grounded story.
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