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Perfect minus the damn uploads if author uploaded Twice an week even we would be at 100 chapters. only problem and thats why the fic don't have many powerstones
Honestly, even though he’s supposed to be the main character, Stiles is a bonafide side character with the story in his perspective. He doesn’t even try to figure out how his abilities work or what they are, and Scott is in the spotlight constantly unlike him. Tbh, if he didn’t have girls surrounding him constantly, the story would be trash. Instead, with the girls, it’s average at least. Overall, it’d be better if he was actually focused on more.
Opinioa de um brasileiro e bom o pior é semelhante oa apresentado na série mas com pontos de virada diferente stiles e mais desenvolvido precocemente pare o stiles da 5 temporada
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Please update this great story. I really want to see what happens next. I also cannot wait to see stiles harem come together. I also can I wait to see void stiles but with stiles in full control.
A fanfic é ótima,embora demorada pra sair capítulos,espero que o autor não desista dela,ainda há o que escrever. De qualquer forma,acho ainda poderia melhorar,ao que parece ele está interessado na l Alisson também,o que é uma péssima ideia,não existe química neles,desculpa,mas lidya é incrível,:sem contar que há a malia e a irmã do derek
Finished 23 chaps . So Far soo good. The way Stiles is developed, I wouldn't be surprised if he is the serial killer. And Stiles and Derek bonding would be nice to see as their interactions where comic relief of the series
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I feels like Scott is still the main character and you are just telling the story from stiles pov
If it's not a harem then why the label? Fkkfkfkfkfkfnfnfnfkfkfkfkkfkffkkfkfkfkkkskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkddkkdkskkdkdkdkdkdkdkkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdjsjwj
No lo abandones Hay que no hay tantas estrellas y los championes no hay nada que ver qué hora salís con una silla de la vida de mi mamá no me acordaba del liceo de la misma hora salís hablando vos te llevo a la una silla de la vida y los demás que se bloqueó el que no hay nada más tarde estoy subiendo la Nadia ya supusimos de mi mamá no te puedo decir que te puedas venir de
Gosto muito da ideia,sempre quis ler uma fanfic que tivesse o stiles como protagonista,e como algo a mais(é claro).espero poder ler mais disse ,penso que o stiles é bastante inteligente,se ele se tornar um ser sobrenatural ele pode ser o mais forte
I need more this is like the only good teen wolf fic on here I getting your Patreon just to read this
very very well written, very engaging writing style. characters are true to cannon so far. world building is kinda lacking? maybe it's too early in the story? story development too early too say anything about.... keep writting author you are doing great.👍[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp]
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So far so good, but I just wanted to know is the fox spirit the Nogitsune from season 3 or a newly awakening Nogitsune.
God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked the egg styles, he became much less idiotic and much more charismatic, the only thing I didn't like was that it takes a month for a new chapter to come out, tara for romance
Perfect minus the damn uploads if author uploaded Twice an week even we would be at 100 chapters. only problem and thats why the fic don't have many powerstones
Honestly, even though he’s supposed to be the main character, Stiles is a bonafide side character with the story in his perspective. He doesn’t even try to figure out how his abilities work or what they are, and Scott is in the spotlight constantly unlike him. Tbh, if he didn’t have girls surrounding him constantly, the story would be trash. Instead, with the girls, it’s average at least. Overall, it’d be better if he was actually focused on more.
Opinioa de um brasileiro e bom o pior é semelhante oa apresentado na série mas com pontos de virada diferente stiles e mais desenvolvido precocemente pare o stiles da 5 temporada
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Please update this great story. I really want to see what happens next. I also cannot wait to see stiles harem come together. I also can I wait to see void stiles but with stiles in full control.
A fanfic é ótima,embora demorada pra sair capítulos,espero que o autor não desista dela,ainda há o que escrever. De qualquer forma,acho ainda poderia melhorar,ao que parece ele está interessado na l Alisson também,o que é uma péssima ideia,não existe química neles,desculpa,mas lidya é incrível,:sem contar que há a malia e a irmã do derek
Finished 23 chaps . So Far soo good. The way Stiles is developed, I wouldn't be surprised if he is the serial killer. And Stiles and Derek bonding would be nice to see as their interactions where comic relief of the series
Bom .......................................................,.,.......,,.....................,..........,...,....,..,..................,,.......,..............,.....
I feels like Scott is still the main character and you are just telling the story from stiles pov
If it's not a harem then why the label? Fkkfkfkfkfkfnfnfnfkfkfkfkkfkffkkfkfkfkkkskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkddkkdkskkdkdkdkdkdkdkkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdjsjwj
No lo abandones Hay que no hay tantas estrellas y los championes no hay nada que ver qué hora salís con una silla de la vida de mi mamá no me acordaba del liceo de la misma hora salís hablando vos te llevo a la una silla de la vida y los demás que se bloqueó el que no hay nada más tarde estoy subiendo la Nadia ya supusimos de mi mamá no te puedo decir que te puedas venir de
Gosto muito da ideia,sempre quis ler uma fanfic que tivesse o stiles como protagonista,e como algo a mais(é claro).espero poder ler mais disse ,penso que o stiles é bastante inteligente,se ele se tornar um ser sobrenatural ele pode ser o mais forte
I need more this is like the only good teen wolf fic on here I getting your Patreon just to read this
very very well written, very engaging writing style. characters are true to cannon so far. world building is kinda lacking? maybe it's too early in the story? story development too early too say anything about.... keep writting author you are doing great.👍[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp]
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So far so good, but I just wanted to know is the fox spirit the Nogitsune from season 3 or a newly awakening Nogitsune.
God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!God!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked the egg styles, he became much less idiotic and much more charismatic, the only thing I didn't like was that it takes a month for a new chapter to come out, tara for romance